Jack and Cirrus - Triptych (Dark stuff, binary and ternary)

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Jack and Cirrus
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Jack and Cirrus - Triptych (Dark stuff, binary and ternary)

Post by Jack and Cirrus » Fri May 24, 2013 12:38 pm

Hi, here's our first track, called Triptych. We are a duo from France that produces Bass music. Hope you'll dig it. Enjoy.
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Re: Jack and Cirrus - Triptych (Dark stuff, binary and terna

Post by Soul_Of_Seun » Fri May 24, 2013 9:12 pm

It's a dynamic song for sure. Those wobbles seem a bit loud in the mix though and are overall bit noisy and even slightly grating. Turn it down a bit as it drowns out the melodic bells. The transitions seem a bit rough, for example, you have too many rapid kicks around 1:57. It has an interesting structure to it and I like the hi hat patterns and crashes. Nice re-verb on the snares and in general. Not too much not too little. Melody is pretty decent at least.
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