[Tunes] Untold: Say so, Tears

[untold]

a couple of tunes I've been working on...

Say so
http://www.jackdunning.com/untold/untold-say_so_320.mp3

Tears
http://www.jackdunning.com/untold/untold-tears_320.mp3


all feedback appreciated

[pete_bubonic]

Tears -

Quality intro, nice big bass, but the snare sounds too dry and stands out in the mix too much. In my ears.

I like the extra percussion that comes in. The track has a nice feel to it overall, lots of nice sounds and well put together. The beat sounds good uber sparse, but again that snare spoils it a bit for me. The bass sounds quality when you start playing around with it at the end of 16 (?) bars, but because of it's sound, that digital lfo, kinda, the arrangement could do with a bit more variation.

Nice tune.

Say So -

Nice riddim, good percussion, nice upbeat bassline, loads of quality sound effects. Gotta say, your cleanliness in the mix down is good man, sounds nice and crisp and all the sounds sit where they should nicely. Again, I'm thinking that snare is a bit dry, too clean for the dub feel and horns and alike.

Enyoyable tune for sure man.

[Lye_Form]

a couple of tunes I've been working on...

Say so
http://www.jackdunning.com/untold/untold-say_so_320.mp3

Tears
http://www.jackdunning.com/untold/untold-tears_320.mp3


all feedback appreciated

re up please? links seems to be down.

Thanks.

[goonstock]

lol