Mr. Ours - Robot Dub

[mr_ours]

Hi everyone,

Here a new new track called "Robot Dub" :

Soundcloud

Tell me what you think about that !!

Enjoy

[O_Chopstix]

I'm relatively new to the forum, but here is my advice for what its worth:

I think your drums are solid and your sub bass is pretty clean. I was personally a bit bored after the first minute. I feel as though it was a bit too repetitive for my liking and that you could have made use of a variety of other synths to bring up the energy of the overall track.

Still good work in my opinion.

[MrPies]

I enjoyed this!
I would echo what chopstix said though, you could do with a little variation in the second half of the song.
Your buildups are good. I do think that your main synth might have a dodgy frequency in there somewhere, in the nicest possible way it gave me an ear ache after a bit....i might just be tired though!

Either way good stuff!

[mr_ours]

Thx for the comment

[mr_ours]

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