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FilthyParagon
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Need Some Feedback From Y'all (F.P.-Leaving)[DUBSTEP]

Post by FilthyParagon » Tue Jul 02, 2013 9:19 pm

Hey guys, check out my latest track: https://soundcloud.com/filthy-paragon/leaving I really need some feedback, because I know something is missing from ALL of my works.. please help me with pieces of advice! :D Thx in advance!
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Re: Need Some Feedback From Y'all (F.P.-Leaving)[DUBSTEP]

Post by rockonin » Wed Jul 03, 2013 12:45 am

The main bass is way too generic, sounds like a preset everyone uses. The piano is ok. Don't you think 8.22 is a bit long for a track that does not that many varied transitions. The arrangement needs more variance because it sounds like drop-chorus-drop-chorus etc.
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Re: Need Some Feedback From Y'all (F.P.-Leaving)[DUBSTEP]

Post by FilthyParagon » Wed Jul 03, 2013 9:38 am

Thanks for help, I will keep it in mind!
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