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POMBASS
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My first release!

Post by POMBASS » Tue Jul 02, 2013 1:40 pm

POMBASS-Trust
IT BE DOWNLOAD AT SOUND-CLOUD
PLEASE HELP ME BECAUSE I KNOW THAT YOU WILL LOVE IT

https://soundcloud.com/amit-pompas/trust-by-pombass
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EohBDyq4oU4


THANK YOU

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SloppySeconds
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Re: My first release!

Post by SloppySeconds » Thu Jul 04, 2013 4:00 pm

a soundcloud download isn't a release
Anonymous wrote:Sonny is love, Sonny is life.

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SloppySeconds
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Re: My first release!

Post by SloppySeconds » Thu Jul 04, 2013 4:01 pm

+ i don't love it, i hate it and it's terrible. Wanna be chillstep IMO
Anonymous wrote:Sonny is love, Sonny is life.

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Soul_Of_Seun
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Re: My first release!

Post by Soul_Of_Seun » Sun Jul 07, 2013 10:28 pm

Sounds like it's not mixed properly, the leads are too loud. No well defined structure. Generic sounding at best and as aforementioned it's not even a release. Release implies released through a label or distributor...and mastering.

Post this in the feedback section.
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Deakar
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Re: My first release!

Post by Deakar » Mon Jul 08, 2013 6:52 pm

I probably don't have the right to make any comments (since I'm still new to the game) but I think there's room for improvement. The transitions were nice. I think you should work on your mixdown a bit more. I could be wrong but I think the drums were a little buried under the synths, which were a little too loud.

But keep at it man, you can do it.

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