advice on these two tracks!!!

[breachofpolice]

number one... aphex twin esque number Soundcloud

and my other stuff at Soundcloud

[ChadDub]

first track, at 1:12 when everything comes in really made the track for me. I like it a lot, like I'd bump it for sure.

second track, most of the noises you used are annoying as shit. I wish you would've kept using the very first bass you play in the drop instead of random high pitched sounds, but if that's what you want it to sound like then go for it. Really annoying track though imo.

[breachofpolice]

first track, at 1:12 when everything comes in really made the track for me. I like it a lot, like I'd bump it for sure.

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[ChadDub]

Sounds more like some game menu music lol (not saying its bad)

You're better at doing this sort of stuff rather than dubstep.

[breachofpolice]

Sounds more like some game menu music lol (not saying its bad)

You're better at doing this sort of stuff rather than dubstep.

that stuff is old, i'm doing alot heavier stuff now, not even sure im in the right forum

but anyhow


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[breachofpolice]

Sounds more like some game menu music lol (not saying its bad)

You're better at doing this sort of stuff rather than dubstep.

been on like 4 forums so far and just got slagged so i appreciate this, thank you x

(thats noy a gay kiss btw thats a bro kiss)

[3za]

First one;
What I liked: That electronic bongo kinda sound in the intro, and the first bass part
What I didn't like: Everything else, especially the dblue glitch.
What I would change: cut out alot of the shit, and focus building a tune around the good parts.
Random thoughts: Dblue glitch doesn't make something Aphex Twin esque. You need to work alot on developing your ideas, and structuring your songs


second one;
What I liked: intro was pretty good, had a good build to it. The outro was pretty good to, with some develop it could be a decent track.
What I didn't like: obnoxious vox sample. Some of the bass sounds weren't very good.
What I would change: cut out alot the shit, and focus building a tune around the good parts.
Random thoughts: Very chaotic, and direction less, sounds like you where bored so decided to make a tune.

This thread should really go in the dubs, but it's probably better here as you have gotten some views, replies

[breachofpolice]

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Very chaotic, and direction less, sounds like you where bored so decided to make a tune.

thats exactly what happened....