8th Figure - Varied Temprament

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8th Figure - Varied Temprament

Post by rick_slater » Sat Dec 28, 2013 1:52 pm

Would love to hear what you guys think, good or bad all comments welcome!


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Re: 8th Figure - Varied Temprament

Post by CRIS FERN » Sat Dec 28, 2013 7:22 pm

Whoa this is a great tune. Maybe try EQing the highs on the mix a little better. It could be my headphones but those hats are a bit too much. Overall nice tune. Keep it up.
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Re: 8th Figure - Varied Temprament

Post by rick_slater » Sun Dec 29, 2013 1:40 pm

Yeah Chris i think your right about the highs, i checked it a a couple of different systems. thats what you get when your on holiday and only have mp3 player headphones!,
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Re: 8th Figure - Varied Temprament

Post by Taiken » Mon Dec 30, 2013 3:32 pm

maybe you have already changed it, but the highs sound good to me.
possibly a bit more variation during the track would be nice?

sound good, big up!
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Re: 8th Figure - Varied Temprament

Post by rick_slater » Wed Jan 01, 2014 12:54 am

Taiken wrote:maybe you have already changed it, but the highs sound good to me.
possibly a bit more variation during the track would be nice?

sound good, big up!
Variation is the main problem i find, putting a loop togethers ok but developing that track frustrates me every time, don't mean to come needy but any suggestions what could be switched up, ie the baseline, different percussion?
Basically my aim is to finish 4 tracks this year to give out (if there good enough)as a thanks for listening to my music :)

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Re: 8th Figure - Varied Temprament

Post by zillion » Sat Jan 04, 2014 4:06 pm

Yer high hats are just a little to loud in the hi ends.

Could od with a few more atmoshperics to keep it interesting.

Also that snare sounds very flat.

Would change that.
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Re: 8th Figure - Varied Temprament

Post by rick_slater » Thu Jan 09, 2014 10:26 pm

Taken on board Zillion, I had a fiddle around with the track yday and i think its starting to shape up a bit better, appreciate the input sir.

ps So alone is a badman tune!!!
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