Cris Fern - Justus

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Cris Fern - Justus

Post by CRIS FERN » Thu Jan 16, 2014 3:01 pm

something I've been working on this morning...

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Re: Cris Fern - Justus

Post by HoogerJ » Thu Jan 16, 2014 3:29 pm

Sounds as a good basis for further arrangement! Obviously missing melody/vocals and one shots/effects.

Try vary the beat a bit more. Your sub is a bit too bulky for my taste. You can try to lower the volume of the bottom frequency or bring up the highs and make them a bit wider/more reverby.

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Re: Cris Fern - Justus

Post by CRIS FERN » Thu Jan 16, 2014 9:39 pm

hey man, thanks for the feedback. I uploaded a new version, not sure if you'll see this comment but check it out. Changed the vibe a little.

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Re: Cris Fern - Justus

Post by HoogerJ » Fri Jan 17, 2014 10:27 am

Still think your sub needs some air (is it heavily compressed?)

The overall sound is really good, but it's not really a song. It's more like a beat. So the foundation is there, now you have to decide if you're going to expand that with a bassline, synth, vocals, etc.

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