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jaydot-Desolation (deep)

Post by jaydot » Sat Mar 22, 2014 2:35 am

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Re: jaydot-Desolation (deep)

Post by gen_ » Sat Mar 22, 2014 9:39 am

Good to see you're still about Jay!

Tune sounds good. Vibe is all there already. Almost feels like the cowbells could use a bit of reverb, and the vocals could do with a lil more top end EQ and more mid-low reverb. Try and get that low mid on her vocal to resonate like her throat is made of the same stuff bells are, as my teacher used to say.

The record is already solid tho!
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Re: jaydot-Desolation (deep)

Post by jaydot » Sat Mar 22, 2014 12:07 pm

thx man!
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Re: jaydot-Desolation (deep)

Post by sobie » Mon Mar 24, 2014 8:29 pm

What Gen had said would do the vocals some good. I honestly feel like you should bring the bell more up front and add a bit more presence to it. But the tune sounds great like the vibe to it.
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Re: jaydot-Desolation (deep)

Post by hirszu » Mon Mar 24, 2014 10:49 pm

Saw that earlier on soundcloud, nice one mate, and just like the others said I think it needs a bit more midrange. Cheers!
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Re: jaydot-Desolation (deep)

Post by HighBodies » Tue Mar 25, 2014 1:35 am

gen_ wrote:Good to see you're still about Jay!

Tune sounds good. Vibe is all there already. Almost feels like the cowbells could use a bit of reverb, and the vocals could do with a lil more top end EQ and more mid-low reverb. Try and get that low mid on her vocal to resonate like her throat is made of the same stuff bells are, as my teacher used to say.

The record is already solid tho!
Stop referring to tunes as records you twat!! Ughhhhh
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Re: jaydot-Desolation (deep)

Post by HighBodies » Tue Mar 25, 2014 1:42 am

This tune is very morbid and kinda slow
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Re: jaydot-Desolation (deep)

Post by gen_ » Tue Mar 25, 2014 12:57 pm

HighBodies wrote:
Stop referring to tunes as records you twat!! Ughhhhh
How very nice of you.



I like this record. :corndance:
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Re: jaydot-Desolation (deep)

Post by jaydot » Tue Mar 25, 2014 4:14 pm

Big ups lads!
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