Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

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Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by Debaser1 » Sat May 31, 2014 10:00 pm

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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by wub » Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:20 am

Good shuffle on the drums, nice groove going on although that hard right panned brush hat is a little too far right and very apparent in headphones. Vocal and bass noises work well together, but felt like there should've been a switch up after 3m27s instead of just a repeat of the first half of the tune.


Mix is a bit on the quiet side?

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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by Debaser1 » Sat Jun 07, 2014 2:11 am

Big up Wub, good to see some sensible people on here still!

The second half of the tune is slightly different, only very slightly aha. There's a new bass sound added, and the rim shot changes in the drums also with the 808 clack tapping in the background.

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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by Debaser1 » Sat Jun 07, 2014 2:12 am

PS yeh the mix is dead quiet, with all those basses in there it was hard to get a clear and loud mix. Might give it a re master at some point. cheers
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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by Evil_Dali » Sun Jun 08, 2014 4:59 pm

Very nice sounds here. I like the organic/tribal vibe on this one. I don't know if I have anything to criticise here, just liking what I hear. Well maybe if something, there seems to be very much reverb here, which is nice, but maybe a little too much? A little less could tighten the mix, I don't know. Maybe it's just a matter of taste really. I'm an amateur myself so I don't feel like I'm in position to give tips.

Anyways, nice track! :)

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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by Debaser1 » Mon Jun 09, 2014 6:41 pm

big up man thanks
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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by uk_blind » Wed Jun 11, 2014 12:18 pm

Feeling this man, also couldn't have much to contribute aside from the final mix/loudness to be honest, proper nice work !
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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by skins345669 » Thu Jun 12, 2014 6:35 pm

Nice movement in the bass and nice drums, I'm not sure about some of the midrange stuff though, I think it sounds a bit dry. I would be tempted just to have a play around with some more effects, maybe add a bit of variation in the notes with that main synth doing the Pulse X style hits.

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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by hirszu » Thu Jun 12, 2014 7:09 pm

Agree with Wub on the right panned shaker - too apparent. Apart from that, I love the tune, great job.

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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by Debaser1 » Sun Jun 15, 2014 10:32 pm

big up everyone it means a lot
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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by BEEPBEEP » Sat Jul 12, 2014 5:27 pm

Kinda got a paleman sound to it nice!

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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by chongbottom » Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:25 pm

this is sick, nice one!!
Kinda got a paleman sound to it nice!
have to agree! not in a bad way. really like the way the bass and percussion are workin together!

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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by Hdub_3103 » Tue Aug 05, 2014 6:32 pm

Big production, All the elements are present..

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Re: Rufa - Brown Note (TECHNO/GARAGE/GRIME) 130

Post by baddis98 » Thu Aug 07, 2014 7:10 pm

very nice tune again :4:

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