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Graydon
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Turmoil [Dubstep / Riddim / Heavy]

Post by Graydon » Mon Jul 21, 2014 2:12 am

Finished the song from a previous WIP thread, enjoy!

Feedback and support appreciated, as always.

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Re: Turmoil [Dubstep / Riddim / Heavy]

Post by Jez-R » Mon Jul 21, 2014 12:22 pm

Nice work and liking the bass, one thing il mention is the hi hats clash abit with the fx samples reverb.
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Re: Turmoil [Dubstep / Riddim / Heavy]

Post by Soze » Mon Jul 21, 2014 8:13 pm

Hey nice idea and the track starts well, their is a lack in variation to the synth that fatigues my ears after 32 bars. I would at use filtering to add small changes to the sound and keep the ear interested.

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Re: Turmoil [Dubstep / Riddim / Heavy]

Post by Debaser1 » Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:34 pm

is this the full version? Structurally youre going to want to start making your tunes what's known as DJ friendly. Basically your sections (intro, drop, breakdown etc) need to be in 16 or 32 bar bits otherwise DJ's simply wont play them. Pad out your intro and make it 16/32/48 bars, make the breakdown the same length and you'll have a tune that's long enough time wise and also playable for DJs. Not my style as such but its decently produced, main mid range bass is perhaps a tad on the trebly side for my liking, and that snare could do with being compressed, but i like the tune
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Re: Turmoil [Dubstep / Riddim / Heavy]

Post by Graydon » Tue Jul 22, 2014 1:10 am

Thanks for the tips you guys, I'm still really new so a lot of this stuff wasn't even relevant to me until now.

I'll definately make my tracks DJ friendly from now on, I'll revisit the last 2 I uploaded and make sure they are correctly structured.

I'll also work on adding more variation to the synth, I've never really worked with properly created synths until very VERY recently, so I'm still sorta clueless about what to do to it to have a really awesome sounding tune.

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Re: Turmoil [Dubstep / Riddim / Heavy]

Post by test_recordings » Tue Jul 22, 2014 4:03 am

Pretty lively actually, I like it. The snare sounds a little dry to me but it's good otherwise
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