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								High_Plains_Drifter							
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								by High_Plains_Drifter » Fri Dec 05, 2014 6:40 pm
			
			
			
			
			First tune I've finished in about 3 months. Deep track at 137 I made as the result of a break up. It's funny what inspires you to create. Any feedback is welcome. Also if anyone has any tips on song structuring, send them this way 
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								syrup							
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								by syrup » Mon Dec 15, 2014 6:05 pm
			
			
			
			
			good tune mate, nice and smooth 

the drums are crissssp 
the thing i'm especially feeling is that drone-ish bass
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								dpwb							
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								by dpwb » Sun Dec 21, 2014 7:44 pm
			
			
			
			
			love the timbre of the drums, very woody. i think the track would benifit from some fills here and there so its not so loop sounding.
			
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by Fyri » Mon Dec 29, 2014 12:13 am
			
			
			
			
			The drums are fantastic. Are those loops? Regardless it's great!
I feel like, song structurally, it needs more than just atmospheric pads and drum beats however. It is very very chill, but maybe more effects; more melodies or things going on in the background maybe.
			
			
									
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								High_Plains_Drifter							
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								by High_Plains_Drifter » Tue Dec 30, 2014 8:53 pm
			
			
			
			
			Cheers guys. I agree it's a little boring in places and maybe moves too slowly, I kinda struggle for ideas with what new elements to introduce. Where could you see it going? Nice one for feeling the drums, they aint loops 

 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by ThisIsSovereign » Wed Dec 31, 2014 12:28 am
			
			
			
			
			Sounds really good man, feeling the vibes. 

 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
	
	
	
		
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