Don Moth - Undermine (bass/hip hop)

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Don Moth - Undermine (bass/hip hop)

Post by dougriley » Tue Dec 30, 2014 5:17 pm

Have been listening to a bunch of different music lately. Sat down at the computer and just let ideas flow. Would love some feedback on this one!

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Re: Don Moth - Undermine (bass/hip hop)

Post by Evil_Dali » Wed Dec 31, 2014 11:05 am

I like this, the work on mixdown is nice, I'm actually amazed how much there are talented unknown musicians these days (i don't know how known or unknown you are really though). All that I'm missing in this one is probably vocals, the beat itself is great and not all hiphopbeats need rapping but I think with this one it would be the cherry on top. Peace! :)
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Re: Don Moth - Undermine (bass/hip hop)

Post by NoKare » Fri Jan 02, 2015 10:01 am

Wow really like it, the bass is so deep and clear !
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Re: Don Moth - Undermine (bass/hip hop)

Post by Samual » Sun Jan 04, 2015 9:36 pm

Very cool, needs a lead synth or lyrics though.
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Re: Don Moth - Undermine (bass/hip hop)

Post by dougriley » Wed Jan 07, 2015 7:04 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys!
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Re: Don Moth - Undermine (bass/hip hop)

Post by dpwb » Mon Feb 02, 2015 11:12 pm

solid banger sir. the only thing i would say add to this is maybe a new part on the second half
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