Bypass - Out in the dark [female vocals]

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Bypass - Out in the dark [female vocals]

Post by bypass » Sun Nov 04, 2007 1:13 pm

New track: http://www.divshare.com/download/2682196-77c

Comments appreciated :)

edit: new version uploaded
Last edited by bypass on Thu Nov 08, 2007 2:10 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by konkanok » Sun Nov 04, 2007 9:47 pm

like it, bass is nicely produced. not so sure about your drumset, but liked the mood. safe one :)
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Post by bypass » Mon Nov 05, 2007 10:56 am

KonkaNok wrote:like it, bass is nicely produced. not so sure about your drumset, but liked the mood. safe one :)
tnx! :)
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Post by bypass » Wed Nov 07, 2007 9:57 am

anyone else? :)
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Post by dj phonetic » Wed Nov 07, 2007 10:58 am

Likin this one to
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Post by dem ones » Wed Nov 07, 2007 11:25 am

i think the snare needs a bit of work but i like the track its got that massive attack feel spend a bit more time on it as its a good track
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Beautiful

Post by djdragonfly » Wed Nov 07, 2007 9:23 pm

Bypass wrote:
KonkaNok wrote:like it, bass is nicely produced. not so sure about your drumset, but liked the mood. safe one :)
tnx! :)
Beautiful...agreed on the drums...given the ethereal nature of the track the drums punctuate the attention with a distractingly dry attack. Adding subtle texture, subtle effects and tonal range to the snare and ride would help. But the spaciousness of it all is fucking excellent.

Nice one. Would love a .wav/320!
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Post by FSTZ » Thu Nov 08, 2007 12:00 am

sunday afternoon vibes right here!

dig the minimal-ness

I am feelin it for sure, although I'd love to hear the snare washed in a bit of reverb
Sun-Ra wrote:Space is the place

sounds like this tune could take you there
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Post by ghosthack » Thu Nov 08, 2007 12:43 am

Nice tune, the vocals fit very well...but I agree with the drums, sounds a bit unedited to me.
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Post by bypass » Thu Nov 08, 2007 10:36 am

tnx for the tips people, I'll work on it :)
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