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shokman
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Post by shokman » Tue Jan 15, 2008 3:35 pm

Download 128KB - > http://humpledink.co.uk/dubstep/Manray_RedLight.mp3

If you want to play this tune out whether on the internet, radio or in the club then PM me for the 320.

DONT FORGET TO TURN UP THE BASS. APPRECIATE. Safe wagwan easy.

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Spoon out your nan.

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Post by shokman » Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:24 pm

wiggle biggle
Spoon out your nan.

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Post by manray » Wed Jan 16, 2008 12:08 pm

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Post by pure » Fri Jan 18, 2008 7:41 pm

manray wrote:Image

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Post by pure » Sat Jan 19, 2008 11:33 pm

You know i'm feeling this one sonnnnn. BIG

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Post by pure » Mon Jan 21, 2008 10:02 am

Pure wrote:You know i'm feeling this one sonnnnn. BIG

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Post by horse » Mon Jan 21, 2008 11:07 am

exquisite tune
lovely glitchy folk influenced, electro dubstep.

i would've loved to have heard some sort of static-y field recording ambience swarming in and out in the background, i think that would've lifted the track a bit and added some depth to it

aside from that im loving it. quite different to anything i've heard recently. looking forward to some more!
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Post by manray » Mon Jan 21, 2008 12:28 pm

Cheers for the feedback. I appreciate it's quite long for dubstep at 6 minutes and agree what you mean about adding some depth. I'm shortening it a touch and adding a few more elements to give it some movement.

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Post by nick z » Mon Jan 21, 2008 2:10 pm

The intro is alright
Like the percussion
The bass feels right
Maybe the song could use a theme/hook, but it's good as is. Cheers. Z

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Post by vadarfone » Mon Jan 21, 2008 2:25 pm

Some nice glitchy stuff in here.

Needs a bit more OOOMPH though, I think. Maybe layer up a real snare with the one you have already and give it some stick!

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Post by bama » Mon Jan 21, 2008 2:41 pm

ez
nice vibe going on, like the pace created with the percussive hits,
agree with Nick Z could do with a hook, and maybe the b-line could come through the mix occasionaly with a bit of growl or distort every now and again, I like how you edited the reverse guitar line ( i think its guitar), may be a few reverb/delay touches here and there....but nice vibe mate...

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Post by horse » Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:29 pm

manray wrote:Cheers for the feedback. I appreciate it's quite long for dubstep at 6 minutes and agree what you mean about adding some depth. I'm shortening it a touch and adding a few more elements to give it some movement.
i would keep the length - always good for mixing in and out of
i dont know about growling bass and bigger snares, that might take away the vibe of the track.

just my opinion - i look forward to hearing the new version
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Post by boonespeed » Mon Jan 21, 2008 8:27 pm

new to these boards. first track i've downloaded from these boards...

killed it. loving the glitch. maybe could add something else but sounds beautiful just the way it is.

send some more :D

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Post by manray » Mon Jan 21, 2008 10:18 pm

Boonespeed wrote:new to these boards. first track i've downloaded from these boards...

killed it. loving the glitch. maybe could add something else but sounds beautiful just the way it is.

send some more :D
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New tunes coming sooooon.

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Post by mr_vega » Tue Jan 22, 2008 1:48 am

wiggle diggle. press that shit up

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Post by manray » Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:01 am

mr_vega wrote:wiggle diggle.
yes yes!

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Post by mr_vega » Wed Jan 23, 2008 8:18 pm

when i hear this song i do this
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Post by manray » Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:34 am

your a funny guy.

new tunes on the myspace!

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Post by bama » Sat Jan 26, 2008 9:22 am

yes mate feeling the vibe on rama....deeeep

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Post by manray » Sat Jan 26, 2008 5:55 pm

bama wrote:yes mate feeling the vibe on rama....deeeep
Nice one, glad you enjoyed it!

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