New tune up on Myspace - Burnt

batfink · Post by **batfink** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 11:04 am

www.myspace.com/Re4orm

Called Burnt and its unfinished. Just started it a day or so ago. Any criticism is welcome.

even · Post by **even** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 12:12 pm

I like it man.

metalboxproducts · Post by **metalboxproducts** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 12:25 pm

Imo I would reduce the length of the intro and add a little variation to the bongo loop. then i would add a little break down before the track full kicks in. The main body of thee track sound minimal. Were you going for that? It dose have a nice contrast with the intro. I think you shouls shorten it a little

Ask the forum reviawer SHONKY see what he thinks

8bitwonder · Post by **8bitwonder** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 12:28 pm

too little time for me boss out of the 3-well nice vibes

good shizzle

batfink · Post by **batfink** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 12:38 pm

cheers guys. I'll work at it over the weekend.

where do you find this Shonky that you speak of?

ufo over easy · Post by **ufo over easy** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 1:58 pm

This one is fucking awesome... I love the intro and the found sounds

Do you reckon you could email it to be? Would love to play it.

batfink · Post by **batfink** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 3:33 pm

UFO over easy wrote:This one is fucking awesome... I love the intro and the found sounds

Do you reckon you could email it to be? Would love to play it.

on your gmail son.

batfink · Post by **batfink** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:48 am

any more for any more?

forensix (mcr) · Post by **forensix (mcr)** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:49 am

yeah i liked it!

intro was a little too long for me

shonky · Post by **shonky** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 12:57 pm

metalboxproducts wrote:Imo I would reduce the length of the intro and add a little variation to the bongo loop. then i would add a little break down before the track full kicks in. The main body of thee track sound minimal. Were you going for that? It dose have a nice contrast with the intro. I think you shouls shorten it a little
Ask the forum reviawer SHONKY see what he thinks

I's here, send me a pm to remind me later and I'll have a listen, got stuff to do this evening, but may find time in amongst it if I get the chance.

Tragically at work at the moment, don't know how I cope to be honest.

Not an official forum reviewer either, just lazy ne'er-do-well, that as your tagline suggests should have something better to do.

jahtao · Post by **jahtao** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:01 pm

Big up wide pannage.
Liked it.
Loved the 'drop'.
Too long? Not necessarily. For me there's just slightly too little going on to justify such indulgence.
Add 1%. Think flourishes (?). You have a lot of space in the centre to play with (?).
Good work. Well done.

metalboxproducts · Post by **metalboxproducts** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:12 pm

Shonky wrote:
metalboxproducts wrote:Imo I would reduce the length of the intro and add a little variation to the bongo loop. then i would add a little break down before the track full kicks in. The main body of thee track sound minimal. Were you going for that? It dose have a nice contrast with the intro. I think you shouls shorten it a little
Ask the forum reviawer SHONKY see what he thinks
I's here, send me a pm to remind me later and I'll have a listen, got stuff to do this evening, but may find time in amongst it if I get the chance.

Tragically at work at the moment, don't know how I cope to be honest.

Not an official forum reviewer either, just lazy ne'er-do-well, that as your tagline suggests should have something better to do.

Only joking, but your always good with your feedback. RESPECT

batfink · Post by **batfink** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:34 pm

Thanks everyone.... Shonky i'll Pm you when i gets home. noice one mate.

As for the tune well yeah its far far too long given how little 'music' there is in it. I spent an hour or so making the loops in Reason 3 then just exported them and arranged them really roughly in Acid Pro 6. The first drop and final few tweaks to this version were done in 5 mins before i left for work so i had zero time to add in some variation to the beats, fx etc.

I'll post a new turbo-charged deluxe VIP brrap edition as soon as i get a chance to fire up the music machine again.

shonky · Post by **shonky** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 4:14 pm

Yeah, like this, got a really nice peaceful mood to it. Can see that it's quite minimal, and I think you know that anyway, but it works really well, hits that emotional level that a lot of tunes don't so you're definitely on the right track.

Think it's maybe more home listening than club, but to be honest I don't think that under 7 mins is particularly long, maybe people should get some ritalin

Think with a bit of work this could be up there with Qawalli, really serene. Would work well as soundtrack material as well if you've got any film buddies.

logos · Post by **logos** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 9:00 pm

Like it...could definitely picture this being played in a dark club somewhere...

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