7 below - The Final Days

[7 below]

www.myspace.com/7below

First draft, main bass synth may not show up on myspace too well, but let me know what you think!

[7 below]

Anyone have a look at this?

[shonky]

Think that the early part of the tune's good musically, even though I'm not too sure that the sound's gel well, but I think the percussion fest in the second half seems a bit too maximalist for my sake - from my perspective I mean that the bits that I liked from the first half are a bit too swamped by the fills. I think the tune's got nice elements, but you could work on the arrangement better - has a nice fluidity if you change the feel around.

Sorry, bit stoned, but hope that makes sense.

[7 below]

Think that the early part of the tune's good musically, even though I'm not too sure that the sound's gel well, but I think the percussion fest in the second half seems a bit too maximalist for my sake - from my perspective I mean that the bits that I liked from the first half are a bit too swamped by the fills. I think the tune's got nice elements, but you could work on the arrangement better - has a nice fluidity if you change the feel around.

Sorry, bit stoned, but hope that makes sense.

Cheers for checking, I still haven't really finished the second half properly but I have a habit of getting a bit maximalist! Will look at the drums in the second half, the g/f doesn't like em either...

Any thoughts on general sound production? (trying to ignore myspace factors...)

Just sorting out my new install of windows - then will check yours..

[bassbinvisual]

SO! the cyme was the hardest!!! I went to play evrytime!!!!

[fullyrecordingz]

aint feelin at all.
it sounds like everythings got delay on it
and that fairground melody goes out of tune and is too random.
Yeh it does have some nice elements but i think you should take everything down and start over,