Tuneage ! Brrrrrrrap

intoccabile · Post by **intoccabile** » Sun Dec 04, 2005 3:19 am

Help a dubstep noob and tell me how I could improve these tunes ! They have yet to be mastered... ^_^

http://s58.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3N6T ... TL7SC8ETQL

http://s58.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1O3E ... GETUJ5U8UQ

http://s58.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3C8H ... YHI9RDFWC4

j_j · Post by **j_j** » Sun Dec 04, 2005 3:14 pm

mate they r reall fucking good .i loike dubway 1 nuff BRAP!!!
get em pressed bruv !! safe
nothing long

bunzer0 · Post by **bunzer0** » Sun Dec 04, 2005 3:34 pm

Intoccabile wrote:Help a dubstep noob and tell me how I could improve these tunes ! They have yet to be mastered... ^_^

http://s58.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3N6T ... TL7SC8ETQL

http://s58.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1O3E ... GETUJ5U8UQ

http://s58.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3C8H ... YHI9RDFWC4

1) dubway2.mp3 has a very good potantial.
One regret : the clip is too short

Maybe a bit too light for the sub bass and for the drums.
Maybe improve the dynamic of kick and snare.

2) dubway2.mp3 : same remarks for the sound.
Could be more fat imho.
Love the work on pads and synths.
The voice is nice and deep.

3) dubway3.mp3 : nice work with the MC.
Beat nicely built and everythin goes well together.
Impressive writing.
Could improve the production imho.
More bass and dynamic in all those 3 tracks.

Anyway, big up ! Hope for u it will be released.

[b]racket · Post by **[b]racket** » Sun Dec 04, 2005 3:53 pm

Would love to hear the 3rd track without the Dizzee accapella...

nirz · Post by **nirz** » Sun Dec 04, 2005 4:47 pm

they are all good but I like the third best ...but it would be better without the vocal ...
brrrraaap !

secretagentgel · Post by **secretagentgel** » Sun Dec 04, 2005 5:25 pm

dubway1: love it.

dubway2: what i'd want to do - dirty up the drums a bit. and vary yr hats pattern, instead of just every 1/8th note. create some polyrhythm, some drops.

yr production is hella clean. i love that. i would agree they could use a little more low end - a solid subbass - for the other parts to sit on top of.

intoccabile · Post by **intoccabile** » Mon Dec 05, 2005 2:24 am

Wow thanks for the comments !

I'll keep all the feedback in mind while trying to make my tunes sound better !

Viva la dubstep

moldy · Post by **moldy** » Mon Dec 05, 2005 5:12 am

Feelin' #3 - if it was instrumental I'd likely play it... bring the big boy sub badness!

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