ZORQ aka BOOMAH - THE WORLD !!!REWORK!!! [320 INSIDE]

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ZORQ aka BOOMAH - THE WORLD !!!REWORK!!! [320 INSIDE]

Post by zorq » Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:04 pm

ok, after a night sleep I reworked this one. there was some critique on the mixdown and the weight of the snare. I found that the synth wasn't as verocious as I wanted it to be so I reprogrammed that from scratch and I rearranged the melody. I also put on a trancey synth in the middle section for some uplifing vibes.
I came out better than before, so thanks for the comments, it sure helped a lot!

It's a bit of a stomper, with a techy(?) twist in the middle section. I used a sample from "Scarface", I'm sure you'll recognise......

you can find it on my myspacepage: http://www.myspace.com/zorq

(with the other ditties :wink:

you'll find a 320 of the new version here: http://www.megaupload.com/nl/?d=VT0KV0OU



don't forget to leave a comment, pleeeeeeaase.
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Post by makinademuerte » Sun Oct 26, 2008 7:38 am

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Post by doctor nimble » Sun Oct 26, 2008 9:07 am

The panning in the intro is a nice touch. The scarface sample was well chosen as it has not been used to death like many others. The bassline has a cheeky feel with melody. I'd imagine creeping around the dance floor in a naughty mood and giving a mate a wedgy.

Maybe just mp3 compression but the snare sounds like it doesn't have enough low-end to give it power. Overall I think some work is needed on the mixdown to really crispen it up but is sounds pretty tight as it is. Your tune 'eastern promise' has a crisper sound.

Anyways. Good work. Duncan.
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Post by zorq » Sun Oct 26, 2008 10:31 am

thanks! I totally agree with you about the crispness, the mixdown isn't good enough. I'm going to work on that today. Yesterday I was working on the track for hours and I couldn't hear what I was doing anymore, so expect a new mixdown today.
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Post by zorq » Sun Oct 26, 2008 4:04 pm

it's on!!! :twisted:
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Post by zillion » Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:10 pm

noise tune.

The vocal samples in this tune are nice and not completely over used enjoyed the intro and the progession of the track.

I like how its got like a constant staggger to the track nice edits to the drums and the bass.

Could do with some sort of synth or something just sounds like its missing something imo.
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Post by zorq » Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:18 pm

ehm, you mean a melodic aspect I guess?
Worth trying, see what I can do...

anyway thanks for the reply!
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