Can i get your opinion on this idea i have for a track?

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jrdubz69
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Can i get your opinion on this idea i have for a track?

Post by jrdubz69 » Thu Oct 30, 2008 12:45 am

http://boomp3.com/listen/c2cbq5u7w_2/dubstep-10
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Post by DZA » Thu Oct 30, 2008 8:34 am

id say lose that wobble sounds to basic and the tunes get to repetitive change it up a bit like with ya drum pattern and change the note off ya vocal and wobble oo and where you get that vocal from its pretty sick :)
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Post by blip » Thu Oct 30, 2008 11:46 am

I think the worst part of the track is, by far, this choir thing. I agree that the wobble would need more variation... or less, then you could make a point out of it being repetive, one note hammering away against the chopped beat.
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Post by noesis » Thu Oct 30, 2008 11:58 am

I like the vocal, especially if you added a touch of variation, and agree to drop the whobble. Also I'm not sure if its just that website cutting the lows, but you need some weight or at least a bass hit in it. I think you have a nice idea, just keep working on it and keep us updated.
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Post by jrdubz69 » Thu Oct 30, 2008 5:27 pm

Thnx for the comments. Yeah, that beat i made like in 2 min..just thought it sounded kinda. Deff needs alot of work. Prob wont even use it..I can post it here in a ableton file if u guys want to work with it. The samples come from the movies Hostile and Freddy Kruger. Beat, battery 3; Bass, albino 3; atmosphere effect, rob papen blue....Made with ableton 7
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