PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

stapleface · Post by **stapleface** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 2:30 pm

sounds like a mission XD

darkmatteruk · Post by **darkmatteruk** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 2:41 pm

it is a bit yea lol

stapleface · Post by **stapleface** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:56 pm

unrequested update; decided to leave out the vocals in the end, much nicer as a minimal tune imo

jbird22 · Post by **jbird22** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 8:00 pm

Posted this in dubs section with no replies, some feedback will be much appreciated

Made this tune last night (not quite finished) an just wanted some feedback.

Not sure bout the bass drop at the end coz it effects the other volume levels,

any tips on how to stop this happenin would be great.

Click on myspace link below to listen, first tune in player

duskky · Post by **duskky** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 8:55 pm

Dark Matter: There's a really good atmosphere going on here. i can't comment too much in the production due to listening on budget headphones, but it feels like the track might need to develop a bit more. I think maybe the voice could be processed a little more to make it seem a bit more ghostly. I think it is a little too full/warm and sits over everything else a bit too much.

Demos: got a really cool bounce, especially with the vocals. I think maybe the snares could be a little more snappy, but like i said my headphones aren't great so i might be mishearing it.

will check out some more in a bit. there's some good stuff on here. keep up the good work people

teqh · Post by **teqh** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:50 pm

Yeye temptation is a track, ghost riddims is my attempt at a more 2step style

HGLDT · Post by **HGLDT** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:02 pm

Hey guys new tune on my Virb - The Beep Dub
What do you guys think? I'm still on my "i just finished this" buzz

stapleface · Post by **stapleface** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:11 pm

beep dub- when the beep changes (when the bass first comes in) thats trippy as fuck and i like it a lot
I like the drums as well
I think the bass needs a lower sub personally, and i'm constantly waiting for the bassline to get skatty and sick like the beeps- the one note bassline's not really doin it for me

try putting a hard compression on the beep as well with low attack, not sure it'll work but it made my beeps sound better somehow

duskky · Post by **duskky** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:15 pm

smartface: there's some cool ideas in here - I enjoyed it

I do think the bass needs to have a little more high end crunch to it and I agree with stapleface about it being deeper. The snares maybe need a bit more crack behind them as well.

thesis · Post by **thesis** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:25 pm

hmm, the dubs forum is definitely getting busy!

almost seems like you have to name your thread "HEAVY TUNE FREE 320 CLICK HERE NOW!!!!!" to get noticed

I'm not picking on the dubs forum, just making an observation.

anyway I do have some new bits, called 'Coco' and 'Grudge'. you can hear them on the myspace (in sig), or on Virb - www.virb.com/thesisproductions

DZA · Post by **DZA** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:25 pm

since rusko video, people carnt get enought off telling everyone" more punch to ya snare ":lol:

HGLDT · Post by **HGLDT** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 11:16 pm

out to the feedbackers - here is my semi final edit - now with improved deep wobbly bass and compressed beeps.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/53823611939e1fea/

beerz · Post by **beerz** » Thu Jan 08, 2009 12:18 am

smartface wrote:out to the feedbackers - here is my semi final edit - now with improved deep wobbly bass and compressed beeps.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/53823611939e1fea/

bass sounds heavey one this 1, but u need to eq that mid bass cos its compressing ur hats, sound like a bit more eqing on that bass and try n get not a one note basssline.

dysplasia · Post by **dysplasia** » Thu Jan 08, 2009 12:20 am

The_Dza88 wrote:since rusko video, people carnt get enought off telling everyone" more punch to ya snare ":lol:

isn't this half of what dubstep is about anyway?

duskky · Post by **duskky** » Thu Jan 08, 2009 12:21 am

Dysplasia wrote:
The_Dza88 wrote:since rusko video, people carnt get enought off telling everyone" more punch to ya snare ":lol:
isn't this half of what dubstep is about anyway?

seconded. it's not like rusko invented face battering snares.

rendr · Post by **rendr** » Thu Jan 08, 2009 2:25 am

Ambient dubstep track, that I've just "re-masted"

Feedback be appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/rendr/trackie

darkmatteruk · Post by **darkmatteruk** » Thu Jan 08, 2009 3:31 am

Duskky wrote:Dark Matter: There's a really good atmosphere going on here. i can't comment too much in the production due to listening on budget headphones, but it feels like the track might need to develop a bit more. I think maybe the voice could be processed a little more to make it seem a bit more ghostly. I think it is a little too full/warm and sits over everything else a bit too much.

cheers for the fb, ive done alot of work to the mixdown sinse i posted it in here, given everything a bit more space in the mix. gonna sit on this one for a bit and re-up in a week or so

darkmatteruk · Post by **darkmatteruk** » Thu Jan 08, 2009 5:12 am

feeling the track rendr, ambient, but with an edge, nicely made too

rendr · Post by **rendr** » Thu Jan 08, 2009 7:09 am

cheers, just listened to your 'Only when you sleep' track. The bass is sick when it drops at the 3:30 mark, and has some nice sub bass under it. Pretty sick!

PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Who is online