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gnome · Post by **gnome** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:58 pm

Yeah I did compose it myself quite a long time ago. Thanks. I think i'v sorted the problem now.

http://soundcloud.com/gnome-gnome

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 4:28 pm

something iv been working on the past week or so.

heavy basslines, heavy drums, interesting vocal idea...

any feedback appreciated!!

http://rapidshare.com/files/272503705/Ooh_AH.mp3

cheers

stinjee · Post by **stinjee** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 4:59 pm

@ manray

yea man i like get started nice bass sound, not sure if the synth melody fits with it tho, i like that synth in the intro but i feel the bass lines too dirty for it in the main body

overall i think its a good tune man,

stinjee · Post by **stinjee** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:05 pm

@ manray

like the drum work in who knows, shits cool, bass line a little borin after a while, i like the bit near the end withoud the lead, just needs some more little break downs to keep things interesting imo

safe

stinjee · Post by **stinjee** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:11 pm

mikeknight123 wrote:yeh this is the first song ive ever produced so please be gentle

http://www.zshare.net/audio/64739248d6c8edb1/

im not 100% happy with the mixdown yet so some tips would be appreciated!

got some fun samurai samples in there

definatly a dark vibe to this 1, feel like someones sneakin up on me with a dagger man

imo the snare dosent cut thru the mix enough, like the kind of asian flute sample bits,

stinjee · Post by **stinjee** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:18 pm

Gotta a couple of bits i need some feed back on, one is called "organic" and the other "dont tell me what i cant do"

Dont tell me is just like a minute of it, iv got further than that now, posted a while ago with this but i didnt get any replies, any feedback would be massive man, well appreciated

Organic is almost finished, listen all way thru if u can cos i like the 2nd drop better

I will feed back anyone who feeds me, without question

click the virb link

Peace

gnome · Post by **gnome** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:04 pm

@ Stinjee. Loved "Don't tell me" Wish there was more of it. The cymbals are great just the right amount of verb and delay...and that bass!!!
Awesome.
Organics nicely laid out great arrangement you were right about the secound drop. Nice automation on the bass

vertex · Post by **vertex** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:06 pm

Yet another "is there too much subbass" request... I've tried listening to this on different setups, yet I'm still not sure.

If there too much subbass? It's only 4 bars so please give it a listen!

http://soundcloud.com/vertex/drums151-structure

(also tell me is the link works, I've never used soundcloud before)

gnome · Post by **gnome** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:12 pm

Link works fine. I don't think theres to much sub bass sounds good. I'm using £5 asda speakers but lol

vertex · Post by **vertex** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:21 pm

Gnome wrote:Link works fine. I don't think theres to much sub bass sounds good. I'm using £5 asda speakers but lol

Haha, cheers for listening, if it sounds ok on £5 asda speakers then it should sound good on almost any system (with any luck).

stinjee · Post by **stinjee** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:26 pm

@ gnome

1st track on soundcloud, like the 2nd part of the bass betta and the breakdown that follows, id like more crack in the snare tho mate,
good tune still man,

safe

ps gonna post a longer version of dont tell me soon man

mikeknight123 · Post by **mikeknight123** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:05 pm

STINJEE wrote:
mikeknight123 wrote:yeh this is the first song ive ever produced so please be gentle

http://www.zshare.net/audio/64739248d6c8edb1/

im not 100% happy with the mixdown yet so some tips would be appreciated!

got some fun samurai samples in there

definatly a dark vibe to this 1, feel like someones sneakin up on me with a dagger man
imo the snare dosent cut thru the mix enough, like the kind of asian flute sample bits,

thanks for the feedback mate, will work on the snare.

Had a listen to your songs btw. I'm really feeling that filthy bassline in circus mental man and that occasional 'EUGH!' lol. they are all real nice sounding songs can't really fault much about them really. i love the mechanical sorta noises in cornflake killa.

benh · Post by **benh** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:49 pm

hey, would love feedback on the track on my soundcloud account

first track i've made, but i think it sounds nice so far (wobble included)

http://soundcloud.com/benh

thanks again!

belialbasslines · Post by **belialbasslines** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:52 pm

I like makin' tunes that make people headbutt their loved ones.
I like makin' tunes that make noses bleed and fists clench 'til they break.
I like makin' tunes that make people drift into a trance then drop off a cliff.
I like bein' Belial.

Check out my tunes either at:

http://www.youtube.com/user/DubstepTunez

or:

http://www.youtube.com/user/BelialBasslines

The 8 tracks on DubstepTunez have had 20,000 hits in the past week (9,500 on Colour Shiftin but I'm not jus' about makin chilled tunes so check out Granny Thumper, Is It Dubstep or Punching Ovaries for some proper dirt).

I'm looking for a label to help me distribute and promote my tunes so drop me a message if you like what you hear.

Safe,

Belial.

gnome · Post by **gnome** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:15 pm

@ Stinjee: Fixed the snare up abit added some more reverb fills it out a lot more thanks for the advice.

Would love to hear the finished version of "don't tell me"

aspect-dubz · Post by **aspect-dubz** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 12:45 am

hi everybody, could i get some feedback on a tune im calling piecing together, it's still very much a work in progress, also i'll give feedback to whoever gives some in return, safe

http://soundcloud.com/aspect-dubz/piecing-together

ianfm · Post by **ianfm** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:18 am

http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/funky-bits

Working on a bit of a dirty funky thing.

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 4:33 pm

IanFM wrote:http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/funky-bits

Working on a bit of a dirty funky thing.

im really diggin this man only thing i dont like is the synth that comes in at 2 mins sounds kinda wierd with the 8bit back ground but when u drop it 2 43 it sounds perfect. maybe make the synth match the notes ur on the 8bit part till the drop idk up to u really but good tune.

i have a new song up at the bottom of my myspace player called Right now please let me kno where it should go cuz its only 48 bars right now

www.myspace.com/trpwr

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 4:37 pm

belialbasslines wrote:I like makin' tunes that make people headbutt their loved ones.
I like makin' tunes that make noses bleed and fists clench 'til they break.
I like makin' tunes that make people drift into a trance then drop off a cliff.
I like bein' Belial.

Check out my tunes either at:

http://www.youtube.com/user/DubstepTunez

or:

http://www.youtube.com/user/BelialBasslines

The 8 tracks on DubstepTunez have had 20,000 hits in the past week (9,500 on Colour Shiftin but I'm not jus' about makin chilled tunes so check out Granny Thumper, Is It Dubstep or Punching Ovaries for some proper dirt).

I'm looking for a label to help me distribute and promote my tunes so drop me a message if you like what you hear.

Safe,

Belial.

ive been listen to ur uploads all month i like ur sound

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