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[jjbutler88]

Got a new tune I'm working on, first attempt at a proper wobbler, would be really interested in what you guys think. Its not my usual bag but I think its going quite well so far.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/650364700f8cb6cf/

Constructive critisizm welcome, be brutal if it really is crap, otherwise tips and advice would be much appreciated

Cheers for taking a listen man. The wobble in this is really cool actually, I fnd half the challenge with wobble basslines is 'visualising' the way itll sound through a big club system and this feel like it'd translate great.

The two things I'd mention are the breakdown, which builds to a cool second drop but feels sort of aimless through that section, and perhaps the percussion could do with a little more going on to keep the track moving - it is pretty minimally constructed after all.

Cool man, thanks for the tips. I'll mix up the percussion, to be honest I was being a bit lazy with the drums, thought i'd let the snare keep things moving but some shakers and incidentals wouldnt go a miss.

Look of for it in the dubs section in a week or so

[pah jé]

bacon wrapped dub in the works...

http://soundcloud.com/pahje/pah-je-baco ... ub-9-3-lim

[pah jé]

[bradicle]

Also want feedback on mine please someone . Anything to add? I need more variation, but other than that?.

http://soundcloud.com/bradicle/bradicle-ambient

Thanks for the input! I'll return the favor.

It's a solid track(I especially like the snare), but you hit the nail on the head about it needing more variation. I'd consider trying to pull apart some of the individual drum elements to create some builds part way through and perhaps even glitch some of them for good measure.

I'd also think about drawing in the wobble as automation in your DAW rather than just altering the LFO rate over measures. It's a little time consuming, but can spice things up. Good luck, man.

Sorry i'm still really newbie. Able to explain a little better ;D. Like changing the octave of it? higher/lower etc?

[thierry_le_dj]

http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj

may i plz get a feed back on feeling it...

[dignan]

could I get some feedback on a tune I posted a couple pages back? it's called "New Beginnings", it's on my soundcloud...

[gnome]

@Dignan. Thats tune great spacey as fuck. Maybe turn up the kick just a little. The pads are amazing. Wouldn't mind a 320 of this tbh.

Well done

[idlemode]

could I get some feedback on a tune I posted a couple pages back? it's called "New Beginnings", it's on my soundcloud...

Hey dignan. Liking new beginnings. Like the pads. The mood of it reminds me of omni trio (that's a good thing to me btw.) Liking your beats, bit of an old skool jungle feel to them.

Maybe i personally would add some more filtering or fx to the pad's to change the main parts over the course of the tune. Sonds pretty finished to me though?

[idlemode]

I am working on this and wondering if anyone has any advice? I wil be moving the vocal samples to get em more in time.

http://soundcloud.com/idlemode/enter-the-in-progress

[dignan]

thanks to those who gave feedback, big up! i will hit you back with some once I get my computer back (my friend is doing some major surgery on it for me ATM). the computer i'm on right now doesn't have sound either. once again, thanks for the love!

[gnome]

@rxcoup. Thats one deep dub you got there. Your shuffles are fantastic and that dirty deep wobble adds such warmth to the track! I thought this was a work in progress thread that songs finnished in my eyes. Except maybe a fade out. Loved it from start to finish great tune

[idlemode]

@rxcoup. Thats one deep dub you got there. Your shuffles are fantastic and that dirty deep wobble adds such warmth to the track! I thought this was a work in progress thread that songs finnished in my eyes. Except maybe a fade out. Loved it from start to finish great tune

thanks dude. that is encouraging. now i really will have to finish it!

[rob_del_terror]

something i've been toying with over the last week. usually produce dnb, when i get the time, threw a vid together for you tube, its on the myspace in my sig as well.
all constructive criticism welcome.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4CGqVr8tnAk

[legend4ry]

http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/evoluti ... n-progress


will give feedback to anyone who gives feedback to me, as standard, feedback on soundcloud more appreciated, since this thread moves fast, just tell me what track you need feedback on

[drenster]

SUP people,

ive been tying to get used to 8 and messin around with stuff, just really trying to teach myself, anyway. New to making dub dubstep stuff let me know what you think, any and all crit welcome, have a good one...oh and for other stuff i make....www.myspace.com/drenster thanks

http://www.zshare.net/audio/65082297638ca29b/

[gnome]

@ Drenster. You've got the drum sounds wrong if you ask me. That kick sounds too flat change it for another one maye 808 909 something with more beef to it. The snare needs a lot more cut in the mix try layering up 3 sounds maybe a clap wid a snare and something else hi end maybe a blast of white noise to really add space. The hats are cool just add some rides or open hats. Build some structure also Intro, Verse, chorus, drop, Chorus,outro or something along those lines. Obviously you don't need an arranged song but I think it helps for the listener. The wobbles are good nice and wide. Lemme guess you used the spread in ableton to do that? The drum patterns are cool just get the sounds right and your away!

Good Luck

[drenster]

@Gnome

totally agree with my drums....as for arranged i just made it like that to show what ive gotten done, but youre right in what you said no doubt. and i just started lookin for some hi end noise! for the wobble i used spread and others, but thanks and thanks!

[Sinus Sawtooth]

delete me pls

[jsilver]

gettin close to done on this nonsense

http://soundcloud.com/jsilver/group-hom ... lver-remix

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\/ thanks for listening and crit!