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wooda916 · Post by **wooda916** » Mon Jul 20, 2009 6:43 pm

mqfluquerton wrote:
wooda916 wrote:http://soundcloud.com/wooda/wooda-money-debt-320

Dark and moody roller.

feedback would be much appreciated, particularly on the mix-down.

Cheers.
yuh man sounds dark

personally, i might lay off that snare a little, or choose a crisper sound.

s'all i can say really

ez

cheers for the feedback mate.

disonata · Post by **disonata** » Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:16 am

easy

got a few tracks finished recently that i'd like people to have a listen to
havnt been at it long so just want to see who's vibing what and who isnt

any feedbacks appreciated

http://www.soundcloud.com/disonata

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Tue Jul 21, 2009 3:11 pm

@disonata- First off, I like the tune, but...you've gone a little nuts with the wobble man. Less is more bro, look at Loefah, big producer, say more with less, slow it down take a few of the notes out, also the kick, too slow at first, then it's like a kick from a metal song at 230, I suggest changing that basic kick pattern a bit, just a bit, so that that the snare hits a beat or two sooner after the kick, right after the kick. Give it more of a whip crack effect and it would move the tune along a bit smoother through your transitions imo. I love the glitchiness and the movement in the background of this tune and your mix sounds ok to me. Love the arp bass runs too. I just feel like you lose some of the power and solidarity of the bassline with all panning craziness and explosion of notes with the lfo around the 64 bar/55 second mark man. Good job, I think could be a great tune if you put a little more thought into the space factor and made it just a bit more thought provoking man, big up.

rapsag111 · Post by **rapsag111** » Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:26 pm

http://soundcloud.com/rapsag/planet-b

this one feels good to me... lemme know what u guys think

osky · Post by **osky** » Tue Jul 21, 2009 7:19 pm

couple of new ones

http://www.myspace.com/oskydub

86. · Post by **86.** » Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:35 pm

rapsag111 wrote:http://soundcloud.com/rapsag/planet-b

this one feels good to me... lemme know what u guys think

yo you can up snare I think. and some more variation in the melody would work well too.

disonata · Post by **disonata** » Tue Jul 21, 2009 9:38 pm

LHD wrote:@disonata- First off, I like the tune, but...you've gone a little nuts with the wobble man. Less is more bro, look at Loefah, big producer, say more with less, slow it down take a few of the notes out, also the kick, too slow at first, then it's like a kick from a metal song at 230, I suggest changing that basic kick pattern a bit, just a bit, so that that the snare hits a beat or two sooner after the kick, right after the kick. Give it more of a whip crack effect and it would move the tune along a bit smoother through your transitions imo. I love the glitchiness and the movement in the background of this tune and your mix sounds ok to me. Love the arp bass runs too. I just feel like you lose some of the power and solidarity of the bassline with all panning craziness and explosion of notes with the lfo around the 64 bar/55 second mark man. Good job, I think could be a great tune if you put a little more thought into the space factor and made it just a bit more thought provoking man, big up.

cheers man, some good things to consider here.
appreciate you took the time to give it a listen

mqfluquerton · Post by **mqfluquerton** » Tue Jul 21, 2009 9:41 pm

rapsag111 wrote:http://soundcloud.com/rapsag/planet-b

this one feels good to me... lemme know what u guys think

agreein on the snare with dude ^^^ also some reverb wouldn't go amiss, this sounds pretty dry atm

rapsag111 · Post by **rapsag111** » Tue Jul 21, 2009 10:13 pm

thanks guys yeah i really should spice it up a bit with some variation it's pretty repetitive

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:00 pm

Osky wrote:couple of new ones

http://www.myspace.com/oskydub

Feeling one night in glasgow and love the voice sample in both tracks.

Nice mate.

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:03 pm

www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

All feedback would be much appreciated.

Cheers.

pah jÃ© · Post by **pah jÃ©** » Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:17 pm

uploaded a new version of a track i've been workin on this summer, off and on... "FMonster". Check it out, let me know what you think, if you'd like to trade riddims hit me up.

http://www.soundcloud.com/pahje

dankaczmar · Post by **dankaczmar** » Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:22 am

Zion Triad-dK remix

Any feedback appreciated! Got a summer vibe to it, hope it makes you feel good to:D

JimmaJamJamie · Post by **JimmaJamJamie** » Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:07 pm

wooda916 wrote:http://soundcloud.com/wooda/wooda-money-debt-320

Dark and moody roller.

feedback would be much appreciated, particularly on the mix-down.

Cheers.

This songs sick mate. Only part of it i am not feeling too much is on the 2nd drop. That second synth you have brings the song down a little.

Everything else is sounding sick though.

JimmaJamJamie · Post by **JimmaJamJamie** » Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:14 pm

Just made a new Summery song. Any feedback/criticism etc. would be much appreciated, (It's not finished yet by the way, i only made 4 bars after the second drop).

Summertime Chill: http://soundcloud.com/etikut/summertime-chill

Thanks.

blizzardmusic · Post by **blizzardmusic** » Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:49 pm

http://www.myspace.com/blizzarddubs.

There's bassline, dubstep, dance and grime.

2nd chance · Post by **2nd chance** » Thu Jul 23, 2009 9:00 pm

Psy:am wrote:www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

All feedback would be much appreciated.

Cheers.

Magnetic: I love the sounds you use. Enough there to sound full, but none too big to take attention away from the bass and little stabby lead. I have to say though, the first section makes me want it to GO already, ya know? Once it picks up, its ace. But the first section may be a bit too long.

Remix: Looove the deep punchy kick. Pump up the snare a bit, make it as full as the kick, and the drums will be absolutely killer. Right now it just seems a bit too far back in the sound. I'd also say pump up the bass, but I think it's just my tiny ass headphone speakers can't handle the noise. I dig this mix, hard.

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:06 am

Alright, got a mostly complete version of this new tune I been workin on posted on my soundcloud, pretty summery, dancey vibes, definitely a deep tune so if all you like is wobble don't even listen to it 'cause I don't wanna hear you tell me to add a wobble. Apart from that all feedback is appreciated, you will need to turn up your monitors a bit b/c there's some headroom in the tune still, and unfortunately, my CPU is at the max that it can handle so I'm kinda stuck on doing too much to this joint until I get a new comp. First one on the page, called Good Feelins.

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:44 am

LHD wrote:Alright, got a mostly complete version of this new tune I been workin on posted on my soundcloud, pretty summery, dancey vibes, definitely a deep tune so if all you like is wobble don't even listen to it 'cause I don't wanna hear you tell me to add a wobble. Apart from that all feedback is appreciated, you will need to turn up your monitors a bit b/c there's some headroom in the tune still, and unfortunately, my CPU is at the max that it can handle so I'm kinda stuck on doing too much to this joint until I get a new comp. First one on the page, called Good Feelins.

Nice track, im liking the sound that youve got going atm. Your drums are wicked, they have that whole airy feeling without losing out on quality of production. The main sound is a nice sound that adds to that airy feeling, but possibly the treble could be turned down a lil. Im also not really feeling the little mario style beeps, but that could just be personal preference.

Also really enjoyed 'waiting for daddy', awesome snare and the whole vibe is so chilled. Really well made!

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:49 am

2nd Chance wrote:
Psy:am wrote:www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

All feedback would be much appreciated.

Cheers.
Magnetic: I love the sounds you use. Enough there to sound full, but none too big to take attention away from the bass and little stabby lead. I have to say though, the first section makes me want it to GO already, ya know? Once it picks up, its ace. But the first section may be a bit too long.

Remix: Looove the deep punchy kick. Pump up the snare a bit, make it as full as the kick, and the drums will be absolutely killer. Right now it just seems a bit too far back in the sound. I'd also say pump up the bass, but I think it's just my tiny ass headphone speakers can't handle the noise. I dig this mix, hard.

Thanks a lot for taking the time to give feedback. Ye the first section may be too long, still working on that! As for the remix, ive taken note of what you said and made the snare much more prominent. What do you think of adding a slow oscillating bassline?

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