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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 2:24 pm
by gnome
I enjoyed it you have real good drum patterns clearly influenced by dnb with your cymbals. Liking the intro and dthe build up. Your on the right track
Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 2:37 pm
by rob_del_terror
dj dirty pimp wrote:hi all. im new to these forums. just posting up audio of my 2nd ever dubstep track. Ive been producing drum and bass for about 3 years so im not new to production! love dubstep and thought id give it a try and im really enjoying making it, so creative,
hope you like my track, and i hope its not too cheesey (jump up ish)
construcitve critisism very welcome!
http://soundcloud.com/dirty-pimp
that drop is heavy, took me by surprise, liked it alot tho.
i'm in exactly the same boat like, been messin about with dnb for a few years, dubstep has been a breath of fresh air as far as productions concerened. my 2nd tune is on the myspaz in the sig.
Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 3:09 pm
by lytr
hey guys, working on this track:
http://soundcloud.com/lytr/strlyt
would love some feedback on it so far
lytr
Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:30 pm
by owlbeat
Bradicle wrote:
Hrmm the track for me kinda sounds monotoned. Needs some little builds in there and a bit of hype IMO. Others may say different. Depends what you're really trying to accomplish I guess. Maybe add a synth or something in there, spice it up? Better kicks/snares/claps?
Reignz wrote:
This sounds way too plain man, drums need more work, you need a solid subline aswell m8.
Gets better at 2.20 but it'd still be alot better with better drums and a bassline.
thanks for the honest feedback. maybe i should stray away from the ableton sample library and go digging for something better.
also need some time to write a decent bassline, yeah. thanks!
Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 11:57 pm
by bradicle
dj dirty pimp wrote:hi all. im new to these forums. just posting up audio of my 2nd ever dubstep track. Ive been producing drum and bass for about 3 years so im not new to production! love dubstep and thought id give it a try and im really enjoying making it, so creative,
hope you like my track, and i hope its not too cheesey (jump up ish)
construcitve critisism very welcome!
http://soundcloud.com/dirty-pimp
Thought it sounded pretty cool man. I'm not a fan on the snare, sounds like way to much reverb for my liking. I myself would choose a few more claps/snares and just layer them and try not use so much reverb.
Other than that, that drop is wicky. Sounding good
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Just another track wanting some feedback on. Will put some variation in the drums at some point. But open to some more feedback.
http://soundcloud.com/bradicle/bradicle-4q
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 3:02 am
by dignan
hey man, tried to listen to this tune but soundcloud said they couldn't find the page, did you make this tune private by any chance?
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 3:07 am
by lytr
Dignan wrote:
hey man, tried to listen to this tune but soundcloud said they couldn't find the page, did you make this tune private by any chance?
ah, i deleted it cause i finished the track
the finished version of it is on my soundcloud now! the top one
would love some feedback!
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 3:58 am
by marsonebeatz
So I spent the whole day workin on this new track. would really like some feedback on it. big ups to the big lebowski!
http://soundcloud.com/gooms/the-dude-1
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 4:38 am
by dignan
LYTR wrote:Dignan wrote:
hey man, tried to listen to this tune but soundcloud said they couldn't find the page, did you make this tune private by any chance?
ah, i deleted it cause i finished the track
the finished version of it is on my soundcloud now! the top one
would love some feedback!
cool tune, man - the vocal samples are sounding tight as hell. only thing I would recommend is maybe bringing in a faster moving hi hat to make the track move a little more. other than that, it's sounding sick!
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:39 am
by bradicle
Sounds sweet. Chuck a bassline in there
. I dont think a wobble, I just think a solid subbass would sound sick. Just chop it around a bit though
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:20 am
by marsonebeatz
Bradicle wrote:
Sounds sweet. Chuck a bassline in there
. I dont think a wobble, I just think a solid subbass would sound sick. Just chop it around a bit though
safe! check out the sub bass i just added. had to hit my bong before i got inspiration for the bass!
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:29 pm
by thierry_le_dj
just finish working on this tune i just up loaded a new version..
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj (Feeling it)
if some one could give me a feed back that would be great thanks.
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 9:13 pm
by bradicle
marsonebeatz wrote:Bradicle wrote:
Sounds sweet. Chuck a bassline in there
. I dont think a wobble, I just think a solid subbass would sound sick. Just chop it around a bit though
safe! check out the sub bass i just added. had to hit my bong before i got inspiration for the bass!
Better
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 10:53 pm
by dignan
new clip up on my soundcloud, it's called "Future", please give me some feedback...
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:39 pm
by resao
I'm new to this, would be grateful if someone could give me any kind of feedback on my first (almost) fully fleshed out section. Need some synths in to thicken out the mid / top.
Cheers.
http://soundcloud.com/resao/dub2-1
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 7:24 am
by hologroove
hi,
please check out my latest dubstep tune:
http://soundcloud.com/hologroove/waking-life
and give me some feedback
thanks!
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 2:34 pm
by reignstep
Back once again to get some feedback on a WIP.
I'm thinking about the bass sound, wether I should change it or not.
http://soundcloud.com/reignex/reign-ruin-wip
Cheers for any comments
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 3:56 pm
by gnome
@Reignz. I'm digging the bass sound! But i think turn up the piano inda background its to cool to drown out. Cool tune nice and dark
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 5:12 pm
by magma
I like the bass sound... the snare needs to stand out more for me...
Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 9:01 pm
by xterior
@Reignz
I agree with Magma. Try a lil bit of pure white noise layered over the snare hits, might bring it out a little more. Also, just an opinion but personally I'd go for a hint more low end on the bass.
my current WIP:
http://soundcloud.com/xterior/xterior-seeker-wip
not too much to show yet but early critique would be a massive help as this is my first dubstep track