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scary_spikes · Post by **scary_spikes** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:50 pm

Melodik wrote:new one up...

"as a murdera"

keen to know what the verdict is!!

http://soundcloud.com/melodik

great track indeed, love the intro and the wobbles are really amazing, the vocal not for my taste, but that just a taste thing

and The Others, well this track is some crazy shit, i love it! keep up that beats

maybe im not very informative here, but being a children or a monkey - i really dont have nothing more to say

melodik · Post by **melodik** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:38 pm

onetime man!!!much appreciated for the feedback!!

will give yor tings a listen bit later cause no speakers at work!

Bless

scary_spikes · Post by **scary_spikes** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:50 pm

-JQ- wrote:Sup folks..

http://soundcloud.com/JFGSQ

Feedback would be nice.

nice and easy flowing track, sounds very good, but at the half of the track got this feeling that something is missing, not sure what... maybe some percusions or some percusive synths maybe... and i heard some vocal shouts, i think they could be more clear or more at the front. but despite these tiny things - track is really nice, i like it! cheers

dictator · Post by **dictator** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 4:45 pm

Just finished a track which has some dubstep / ambient / club / trance elements ... that may sound like an odd mix, but oddly enough, I think the track works well.

Your feedback on production, arrangement, etc would be greatly appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/dictator/dictator ... -1-preview

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 5:36 pm

i was wondering if yall could check out my page and offer feedback on my songs so i kno where to go next

www.myspace.com/trpwr

naus · Post by **naus** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 5:44 pm

Hi All,

Just uploaded some new tracks on my myspace page. Feedback more than welcome!

The first one is called 'Arabian Dub Child' Dont know what made me think of that name ... the horns i think.

Track 2 is Silver - bit subbier (if thats a word) than the ADC but im not as happy with it, another look at the mixdown and some more toppy enddy might help. What do you think?

Anyways, have a peep!

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 5:51 pm

Naus wrote:Hi All,

Just uploaded some new tracks on my myspace page. Feedback more than welcome!

The first one is called 'Arabian Dub Child' Dont know what made me think of that name ... the horns i think.

Track 2 is Silver - bit subbier (if thats a word) than the ADC but im not as happy with it, another look at the mixdown and some more toppy enddy might help. What do you think?

Anyways, have a peep!

I like the 1st track more than the 2nd but its not like idont like the Silver track it just needs something more

naus · Post by **naus** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:18 pm

Wow, that was quick! I agree Silver needs a whole lot more work. Cheers.

Old Moons -Like it but abit sparse Slow for my taste. Like the general vibe though!

Tan-Kal - Wicked intro! Serious drop! like it alot.

Listened to the others too. Good work. Not my personal taste but nice music all the same!

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:12 pm

Melodik wrote:new one up...

"as a murdera"

keen to know what the verdict is!!

http://soundcloud.com/melodik

I think the tune is pretty good, catchy for sure, nice glitchy sounds going on, bass sounding good. You could do with a lot less of that vocal sample and you're losin somethin' imo the way you're trying to twist it up in some places to fit the beat, make space for the sample an just let it breathe a bit, it's kind of a cool sample. Also it really sounds like you got just a bit o' mud in the tune, could really use some crisping up on that bass line and general overall eq work, your mid range is not crisp at all and that takes a lot of the roughness and real edge/hardness out of your bass. All in all man the tune(idea) sounds pretty good. You're gonna need some variation in this tune a bit too I think to really hold attention on the dancefloor, a bit of melody other than just that guitar loop would be nice and some massive change-ups/variations in the LFO rate on your wobble to keep the attention, a little longer more expressive drop would do a lot for this joint as well. Also, I like the creativeness on The Others. I do not listen to wobble music unless I'm out at the club(that's all they really play here.)but, your tune here has some good stuff going on, sounds like you if you learn how to mixdown better you could have some really cool tunes man!
Big up though, spice it up a little bit and let's hear it again yo!

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:19 pm

@Melodik-I listened to Inter-course as well and that one's much more my style man. One of your pad samples is off key just a bit I can't decide if that's bad or not, it sort fo fits with the resolution of the chords. But lemme ask you, how do you go from makin really original deep stuff to making sort of original wobble stuff? Why sacrifice melody and great drum work just go wamp-wamp-wub-wub?

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:23 pm

scary_spikes wrote:maybe im not very informative here, but being a children or a monkey - i really dont have nothing more to say

It's just about being a part of the community homie! Not about being an engineer or a musical genius. This is after all just an internet forum.

therzbm · Post by **therzbm** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 4:14 am

Dictator wrote:Just finished a track which has some dubstep / ambient / club / trance elements ... that may sound like an odd mix, but oddly enough, I think the track works well.

Your feedback on production, arrangement, etc would be greatly appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/dictator/dictator ... -1-preview

sounding good mate, like the mix of trancey synths and some grimey low down wobble at the end, works well.

http://soundcloud.com/therzbm/show-me-dub-preview
a track i started a while ago and just went back to and basically finished with it now, been producing 6 and a bit months and this is the best i feel ive come up with. dubstep remix of show me love (that idea may not appeal to some hardcore dub fans ha) let me know what you think, anything else left that might be improved etc cheers

2nd chance · Post by **2nd chance** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:06 pm

if anyone wanted to check my tracks, I'd appreciate it:

http://soundcloud.com/you/tracks

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:54 pm

@2nd chance-Check your link man, it's takes me to my own soundcloud page!! You need to copy the url from your browser at the your profile screen then paste it!

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:56 pm

I'm pretty done with this. Definitely for now. Any feedback on drum work and arrangement is much appreciated.
Good Feelins
http://soundcloud.com/lhd
Volume level is still just a bit low as I've left headroom in the tune for mixing and mastering later.

2nd chance · Post by **2nd chance** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 5:13 pm

LHD wrote:@2nd chance-Check your link man, it's takes me to my own soundcloud page!! You need to copy the url from your browser at the your profile screen then paste it!

Haha! Riiight. I knew that, totally

http://soundcloud.com/2nd-chance/rattle That's the one I'd like feedback on particularly.

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:23 pm

2 new songs up Jupiter and Floating On let me know what u think

www.myspace.com/trpwr

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 11:23 pm

http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/the-pas ... pre-master

I'll give feedback to the next 3 who post up tunes.. if they give me feedback.

j_one · Post by **j_one** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 11:45 pm

Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/the-pas ... pre-master

I'll give feedback to the next 3 who post up tunes.. if they give me feedback.

Nice mellow track, feelin' dubstep with that four to the floor beat at the moment. Safe.

Might as well add in "LoveDub" (second track on the player):
http://www.myspace.com/j1beatz

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 11:50 pm

Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/the-pas ... pre-master

I'll give feedback to the next 3 who post up tunes.. if they give me feedback.

alright i also like the song but i kinda dont like the 4x4 beat i like the way it sounds after the drop idk thats just me sounds more mellow at the end to me

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