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toki · Post by **toki** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:39 am

Hey hey hey. Looking for some feedback/advice on a track I'm working on, 'Duel'. Any tips on how it could be improved would be much appreciated.

Danke

http://soundcloud.com/tokidubz/duel-3

leviticus · Post by **leviticus** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 12:14 pm

Cool.

http://soundcloud.com/ascenzion/right-side

Wouldn't mind some opinions on where to take this track, im feeling to vary the synth a bit, cut it up with another synth sound to make it a bit more interesting.

Love to get some ideas for this as i am getting a bit stuck with it.

Thanks in advance

solpik · Post by **solpik** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 1:05 pm

First tune after a while(computer crash, etc)! It's a bit minimal at this point, but will work on beefing it up. Feedback appreciated, hope you enjoy!
http://soundcloud.com/solpik/the-resurrection-1

mikeknight123 · Post by **mikeknight123** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 5:04 pm

done a bit more to it now based on some advice.. let me know what you all think! link in sig

solpik · Post by **solpik** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:59 pm

@ levitius.....the track is cool. Good ideas and you should try what you said above, about the synths. Only thing i can suggest is beefing up the kick some.

@ toki....nice vibe overall, but seems like it could use some eq on the kick and sub. Some variation on the lead synth would be interesting also.

@ mike....only heard two seconds of it and spam took over

you should use another host....soundcloud, virb, for example.

JimmaJamJamie · Post by **JimmaJamJamie** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:36 am

Miklos wrote:http://soundcloud.com/miklos

Any thoughts?

I am liking the Intro to this, has a nice vibe to it. Not feeling it too much once it drops though. Bring out the bass more as it doesn't have much power or presence currently.

I am liking the background little beeps too.

JimmaJamJamie · Post by **JimmaJamJamie** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:37 am

Just wondering if some people could check out my latest Eyes Down style song that i am working on.

http://soundcloud.com/etikut/untitled-251

Feedback would be much appreciated!

dj2slo · Post by **dj2slo** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:12 am

Heres a 16 bar Drum Loop I started today.. Some suggestions on what else to do or if it's shit would be cool haha http://www.mediafire.com/file/nmtyyogt1ty/9-10-09.wav

a.paul · Post by **a.paul** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:47 am

dj2slo wrote:Heres a 16 bar Drum Loop I started today.. Some suggestions on what else to do or if it's shit would be cool haha http://www.mediafire.com/file/nmtyyogt1ty/9-10-09.wav

i think its awesome dude! love the delay and reverb effects in the back, really looking forward to hearing this track evolve!

drenster · Post by **drenster** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 6:01 am

so im workin on some tracks just trying to develop sound and stlye, let me know what you guys think, please any crit and opinion are welcome thanks

http://www.soundcloud.com/drenone88

drenster · Post by **drenster** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 6:38 am

@dj2slo

Heres a 16 bar Drum Loop I started today.. Some suggestions on what else to do or if it's shit would be cool haha http://www.mediafire.com/file/nmtyyogt1ty/9-10-09.wav

that loop is pretty dope man! the only thing i would say it maybe lowering that noize at :13 just a notch, not too much. but that could just be me, great loop!

phrex · Post by **phrex** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 8:29 am

allright, last night I recorded the last tune.
this one has, compared to my other tunes, a lead melody.
would be lovely if you could give some serious critics. what isn't good, what can i improve, what's absolutely bad...

i worked quite a while on the beat&bass structure. I think they fit very good together and one of the basslines (there are just 2) supports the beat and pushes it on the first hit.

has been done with ableton&reason. It hasn't been mastered fully yet.
it's premastered with t-rex.

XXXXXX

looking foreward to hearing some advice/critics so i can improve that tune tonight

EDIT: i took out the link coz' a better mastered version is coming up tonight....

miklos · Post by **miklos** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:50 pm

JimmaJamJamie wrote:
Miklos wrote:http://soundcloud.com/miklos

Any thoughts?
I am liking the Intro to this, has a nice vibe to it. Not feeling it too much once it drops though. Bring out the bass more as it doesn't have much power or presence currently.

I am liking the background little beeps too.

thanks for the feedback! i tried to master the the track a bit and have now replaced the original one. any difference?

edit: i will change the bassline too, its very repetitive

mikeknight123 · Post by **mikeknight123** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:16 pm

Solpik wrote: @ mike....only heard two seconds of it and spam took over you should use another host....soundcloud, virb, for example.

Thanks for letting me know... have switched to soundcloud now

link still in sig

Had a listen to 'The Resurrection' too by the way. It is indeed very minimalistic right now (with about 4 mins of silence

). It's got a really nice feel to it though I think, I really like the tone of the beat and the samples at the start are really eerie.

phrex · Post by **phrex** » Sat Sep 12, 2009 1:18 am

allright...

here is the updated version i have done after a few hours in the basement studio... any critics? what is good what not?
it's mastered with t-racks and eqs/compressors in ableton itself.

anyway: tell me abou tthat tune, what can i improve, is there anything which is specially good?

thank you guys! whoever comments something constructiv will get a comment back on his tune of course

http://soundcloud.com/vulvavibration/in ... tards-rec1

leviticus · Post by **leviticus** » Sat Sep 12, 2009 11:16 am

[quote="Solpik"]@ levitius.....the track is cool. Good ideas and you should try what you said above, about the synths. Only thing i can suggest is beefing up the kick some.

Full respect for taking the time to listen!!! Yep feeling what you say about the kick, hopefully next week i will get a chance to have a look and re post...
Bless..............

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Sat Sep 12, 2009 5:04 pm

http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/come-to ... n-progress

Thought I'd do what everyone else is doing and make a wobbler with a reggae vocal in there....What you think?

dedman · Post by **dedman** » Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:00 pm

allo again guys, another one thats almost done just want some final thoughts!!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/65463356f869aace/

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:28 pm

VulvaVibration wrote:allright...

here is the updated version i have done after a few hours in the basement studio... any critics? what is good what not?
it's mastered with t-racks and eqs/compressors in ableton itself.

anyway: tell me abou tthat tune, what can i improve, is there anything which is specially good?

thank you guys! whoever comments something constructiv will get a comment back on his tune of course

http://soundcloud.com/vulvavibration/in ... tards-rec1

checked out your tune man - not my type of dubstep but some suggestions I have is to make your drums sound cleaner. the claps could use some EQing, or hi pass filtering to make them cut thru a bit more. and that kick you have with the sub bass on it is conflicting with the bass because they're in the same frequency area, I'd suggest cutting the lows of the kick, because you want that to come thru - you already got low with the sub.

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:50 pm

http://soundcloud.com/blind-prophet/dreamer-9

a tune I just finished today, please let me know what you think!

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The Resurrection

Drum Loop

Re: Drum Loop

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