think again of the intro - a lot of people tend to do way too long intros that aren't really needed. don't be scared to dive into a tune quicker. (that's just my 5p anyway)
i like those claplike sounds are really spot on.
nice rythm. nice athmosphere you're building.
after the second drop - that sound on the top opens up the spectrum a lot - well done - but am i right with my feeling that it's panned slightly to the left?
i didn't check back with my monitors, but that doesn't matter a lot as it's anyway 'just' a soundcloud-compressed link. but take care of your sub. it ///might/// be a bit too loud.
good one - good idea.
keep on
Cheers man. Really appreciate it. Yeah I definitely think I am gonna cut down the intro.
Yes that sound is panned, does that matter? I thought it was good to have different sounds panned at different places?
yes and no.
this sound isn't actually moving also it's not really in a room - it sounds more as if it's 2-dimensional.
try paning it slightly from left to right and back - just slightly.
right now i'm just hearing this sond on the left much louder than on the right and there is no equialent frequency that matches on the other side.
hope it helps - my english is horirble when it comes down to being precise.
thanks was one of the first tracks i ever made, think it must have been around 2007 because i was still at school! just going back over my soundcloud because my computers crashed and think i might have lost all my project files
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 2:56 pm
by dubloke
danny scrilla wrote:thanks guys! means alot. gonna give away a few 320s as soon as the tune is done.
defiantly going to be wanting one of those! personally i think the vocal might be a little too quiet but that might just be me? massive track anyways
holy jeebus, nice one, killa percussion. I like it even more because i couldn= t get my head around that acapella, when i tried to remix it myself. deffo add me on WANT320WHENITSDONE list
icanicant wrote:2nd attempt at doing a song. Would appreciate some ninja constructive criticism because I got zero from the dubs section
i like the melody, really nice. I agree with phrex on the intro, it gets too long, you could lose the first 24 bars. also, hats would be nice to pop out a tiny bit more IMO, maybe like a subtle 0,5db of gain, but i assume the mixdown isn't fully finished. either way, nice one, awesome for second tune
Re: THE SECRET NINJA DUBS CLUB
Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 7:01 pm
by icanicant
vulvavibration wrote:
icanicant wrote:
vulvavibration wrote:
icanicant wrote:2nd attempt at doing a song. Would appreciate some ninja constructive criticism because I got zero from the dubs section
think again of the intro - a lot of people tend to do way too long intros that aren't really needed. don't be scared to dive into a tune quicker. (that's just my 5p anyway)
i like those claplike sounds are really spot on.
nice rythm. nice athmosphere you're building.
after the second drop - that sound on the top opens up the spectrum a lot - well done - but am i right with my feeling that it's panned slightly to the left?
i didn't check back with my monitors, but that doesn't matter a lot as it's anyway 'just' a soundcloud-compressed link. but take care of your sub. it ///might/// be a bit too loud.
good one - good idea.
keep on
Cheers man. Really appreciate it. Yeah I definitely think I am gonna cut down the intro.
Yes that sound is panned, does that matter? I thought it was good to have different sounds panned at different places?
yes and no.
this sound isn't actually moving also it's not really in a room - it sounds more as if it's 2-dimensional.
try paning it slightly from left to right and back - just slightly.
right now i'm just hearing this sond on the left much louder than on the right and there is no equialent frequency that matches on the other side.
hope it helps - my english is horirble when it comes down to being precise.
Yeah that makes a lot of sense. Will definitely give it a try.
Hello people.
Let's give a little loving feedback first:
Danny SKrilla: Fuck me, this track is heavy. Love what you have done with that cowbell (proper subtle) Bass is large too. Really like this one.
Dubloke: you win awesome points right from the word go, those bongos are great. Bassy as fuck. good track man.
Icanicant: love the kick, so understated but well done. Those pads give this one perfect vibes. The percussion is sick. The bass is good but could do with a bit more weight (having said that i'm listening to this through my mdrxb500's and not moniters.
Mr. Hyde: Lovely pads. Like the crunching sound with the delay too. Vocals are eerie and haunting. Uncanny track man. The drop is sublime. Really well made track.
Minifletch: Rowdy one. love the claps. and the bass. Proper Grimey.
Brettheaslewood: Love the samples on this one. 808 used to perfection here. great sub too.
Bassrael: Lovely intro, proper interesting use of samples there. Drop: shit, that hits hard. Like the way you build it up.
Really like the pace of this track.
This one should come with a long explanitory note but I aint gunna bother.
Something I am working on:
Strictly a work in progress. I have not decided yet on what elements to add. The arrangement isn't final either. Just threw what I had together for a bit of feedback. Peace and love fellow ninjas.
so doing a secret ninja takeover xmas show next monday - you got anything you want played PM me, gonna try and roll a few songs from ninjas that i rate !
was one of the first tracks i ever made, think it must have been around 2007 because i was still at school! just going back over my soundcloud because my computers crashed and think i might have lost all my project files 
not like you think & crush 