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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:25 pm
by coyotepeyote
nice man, i like this alot, i dont really hear anything wrong with it, at first i thought the beat could use a little more variation but when it drops i was like na this is straight.
overall , great job
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:35 pm
by germskiller
http://soundcloud.com/g-main/theres-a-glitch-in-town
still rough but taking me hours to get the glitching right haha (I hope)
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:38 pm
by Rickmansworth
you need to add some dubby organ hits in there.. would sound good. maybe some steel drums or toms?
the structure needs some work too.
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:46 pm
by coyotepeyote
germskiller,
its pretty good so far, like rick said , a few more layers of sounds would make it better.
but overall i think its pretty straight.
keep it up,
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:23 pm
by BigFatMonkey
I'm new to production and this is the first Dubstep track I've tried. Made in Logic, the synths subs and mids are all made in Albino. Any feedback/ideas most welcome!!!!
http://soundcloud.com/joepoynton/goddamnwhat"
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 10:05 pm
by BigFatMonkey
My first adventure into Dubstep, am new to production so any advice is more than welcome..
http://soundcloud.com/joepoynton/goddamnwhat"
P.S. The thread on mixing, sub and kick volumes was pure gold!!!!
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:16 pm
by bob villain
its not really dubstep...on a hip hopish vibe. there's something wrong though, and i'm looking for advice of the friendliest. Thanks. Here's a link, sorry i should have just put it on soundcloud
Evergreen2.mp3 - 10.61MB
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 3:35 am
by tek_selecta
under construction but you get the idea..
http://www.sendspace.com/file/6v6bc1
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:27 am
by djaccel
I'm digging the House/IDM feel I get from it. Nice and smooth.
Here't the last thing I made, from a few hours ago. Just the 1st 96 bars.
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Lemme know what you guys think.
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 12:36 pm
by dansu
damnit, tek_selecta and dj accel do good work.
here are 128 bars by me. a friend of mine will sing some cool vox for me, and maybe i`ll try to put in some glitch etc.
should i vary the melody in the end, or is it ok that its looped 4 times ?
http://www.speedyshare.com/383553778.html
feedback would be nice.
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 2:19 am
by drenster
WATS UP everyone. Just workin on tracks as usual, any feedback would be appreciated if not, thanks for listening anyway. peace!
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:49 pm
by nytzproducer
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:12 pm
by ÆIUM
yunomi donchu wrote:
Listening to the first half had me wondering where are the drums..??
I can't seem to find a rithm in it either. Then when all comes together
the snare hits and there's some more rithm. But you have all kinds of frequencies
clashing together and way to many sounds going on at once. You
know the saying "less is more".. Or if you like this try eq-ing the sounds
to make them fit together.
Thank you for listening. Some good advice in there, I will keep it in mind.
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 9:21 pm
by deranger
What up.
I've got a track here, "Limitless space", that's on the more industrial side of dubstep. I've been working on it for a while and it's almost done, but I thought I'd post it up and see what people thought of it.
There are a couple issues with the mix but the structure and overall feel is there. Any feed back would be apreciated.
Thanks,
Deranger
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 9:27 pm
by deranger
@ nytzproducer
Sounds good man. I can't think of any constructive criticism. The production is clean. The structure made sense, are you going to expand on it?
Overall, good tune!
Deranger
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 9:37 pm
by deranger
@ BigFatMonkey
Not bad. The production could use some work. In particular, the drum samples sound a bit weak (hats, snare) maybe layering would help. Possibly some effects also.
Deranger
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 11:08 pm
by hayze99
Hi there, got a bit of bit and pieces on here:
http://soundcloud.com/hayze99
I've given quite a lot of comments out on here, and never ever got one back in return. I know my stuff aint mint, but I'm just a beginner, so some advice would really be appreciated.
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 11:57 pm
by Arshaw
left you a message m8...
KId Kuduro
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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 8:32 am
by djaccel
Updated! Now with more groove, variation, +1 breakdown, and a new bass after the 2nd drop
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Darker tune, also updated
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Comments? Feedback?
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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 12:26 pm
by antipode
Here's a track I'm working on. Really I'm just wondering if the melody drags out for too long? Will change it up for the second drop though.
http://www.myspace.com/epochdub
