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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:05 am
by planetshift
epoch wrote:Here's a track I'm working on. Really I'm just wondering if the melody drags out for too long? Will change it up for the second drop though.
http://www.myspace.com/epochdub
@ 1:22 you should have the lead drop out and do something a bit different. I like the atmosphere you're going for. Change up the bass tone/sound/etc somewhere in there too. It's a good melody though and I like the playing with the different octaves for the lead.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:11 am
by planetshift
Your songs have a very nice clean sonic quality, which is good. However the arrangement on corax gets me lost. Cos when the bass kicks I just want to get up and dance. Then it shifts to ambient acid-trip. I like both, but the track lacks focus. Decide what you want its strength to be and give it more focus, perhaps you just need to shift some of the elements around a little.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:19 am
by planetshift
djaccel wrote:
Not bad. Maybe add some more drums or sounds to the intro to break it up a bit, and it might be cool to use a filter or something to bring the track up before the drop.
Just updated this tune, changed up and reworked some drums, and changed the second drop up from the first a bit.
Feedback?
Soundcloud
Definitely a GREAT mix. The mix is totally set. The only thing I wanted to hear was the hi-range of the bassline drop down an octave at some point. Possibly even change the patch just for 8 bars. Go deeper, just a splash, y'feel me
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 8:29 am
by ÆIUM
edit: moving this post to the finished works page
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:57 am
by arktrix45hz
planetshift wrote:Started working on this baby last night. I'm already changing the Right-panned hi hats as they were thrown in quick from some samples just to fill the space (the gist is there though).
Inspired by the film Holy Mountain
Soundcloud
I'm well into this!!!
The opening few bars, they cut from the Sleep album of the same name?!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 1:16 pm
by russ867
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 1:43 pm
by planetshift
arktrix wrote:
I'm well into this!!!
The opening few bars, they cut from the Sleep album of the same name?!
Thanks m8! I like Sleep, but no. It's a combo of selfmade synth sounds, manipulated perc samples, and me pitch bending vocal samples from an EastWest synth. The crescendo came with that EW synth. Normally I don't use stuff out of the box, but it's such a beautiful crescendo I wanted to rinse it before too many dubsteppers did
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 1:44 pm
by SUSPEKT1
Very nice indeed, in humble opinion i would suggest for wen the lion awakes remix to turn up the pad, make it a bit brighter maybe and the lfo bass on top of the sub up a notch or turn the sub down? just struglin to hear it a bit, feeling the drum arrangement alot.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 2:13 pm
by russ867
SUSPEKT1 wrote:
Very nice indeed, in humble opinion i would suggest for wen the lion awakes remix to turn up the pad, make it a bit brighter maybe and the lfo bass on top of the sub up a notch or turn the sub down? just struglin to hear it a bit, feeling the drum arrangement alot.
Thanks.....brighter?? i kinda wanted it dark... but i give it a try see wot it sounds like.... i will turn the lfo up and sub down, when i get to my computer at home
Cheers
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:39 pm
by reignstep
Need some feedback on a DnB track I started, it's just a feelgood song, no fuckin heavy basslines really
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/275017
Cheers for any feedback!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 6:54 pm
by collective
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:20 pm
by sulyhak
Hi guyz
I am quite new in the game....
you can ear my tunes on this page,
have a listen to my track "a Hole in your f###### headz"
Feedback much appreciated
Thanx
myspace.com/sulyhak
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:36 pm
by ÆIUM
planetshift wrote:
Your songs have a very nice clean sonic quality, which is good. However the arrangement on corax gets me lost. Cos when the bass kicks I just want to get up and dance. Then it shifts to ambient acid-trip. I like both, but the track lacks focus. Decide what you want its strength to be and give it more focus, perhaps you just need to shift some of the elements around a little.
Thank you for saying this, I had been kind of uneasy with the current arangement.
I like holy mountian. I think the vocals would make it stand out nicely in a mix. The Cresendo sounds great too. As you mentioned, the beat still has some room to work with, maybe some type of drum fitted to the theme of the songs to decorate some of the off betas wth.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:33 am
by antipode
Here's a track I'm working on. Really I'm just wondering if the melody drags out for too long? Will change it up for the second drop though.
http://www.myspace.com/epochdub
@ 1:22 you should have the lead drop out and do something a bit different. I like the atmosphere you're going for. Change up the bass tone/sound/etc somewhere in there too. It's a good melody though and I like the playing with the different octaves for the lead.
Thanks man
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:58 am
by cataphract
Just kinda finished a new song.
Just want to see wht you all think
project1.mp3 - 13.02MB 
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 8:40 am
by planetshift
epoch wrote: Here's a track I'm working on. Really I'm just wondering if the melody drags out for too long? Will change it up for the second drop though.
http://www.myspace.com/epochdub
@ 1:22 you should have the lead drop out and do something a bit different. I like the atmosphere you're going for. Change up the bass tone/sound/etc somewhere in there too. It's a good melody though and I like the playing with the different octaves for the lead.
Thanks man
NPz
Did do your own myspace layout? I'm trying to get mine just like that, but it's not quite there lol.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 2:39 pm
by thierry_le_dj
djaccel wrote:
Not bad. Maybe add some more drums or sounds to the intro to break it up a bit, and it might be cool to use a filter or something to bring the track up before the drop.
Just updated this tune, changed up and reworked some drums, and changed the second drop up from the first a bit.
Feedback?
Soundcloud
thanks for the feed back!
did alot of changes on this 1
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj new version is back up.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 5:09 pm
by step correct
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 6:11 pm
by reignstep
Awesome first drop, it pulled me right into the song. Also, your snare is remarkably good, clean song overall and nice drum use, it stuffs up the empty spots in your song.
New project I started with
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/275232
Some feedback wud be nice
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:57 pm
by last & least
i hate feedback don't give me it
i also hate
women
dubstep
my cock
http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=0d2d ... f6e8ebb871
that is my attempt at humour
