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Re: TRIKY12 - Analog Truth

Post by trike12 » Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:48 am

roodbwoy wrote:
trike12 wrote:New dub,
Analog truth!

Check it
would really really appreciate some feedback on this one.

http://soundcloud.com/triky12/analog-truth
fuck man, dunno what to say, that track rocks man! seriously very creative, love the bass!!!


:o
Thanks man, really glad you like it!
very motivating to hear :D

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Post by Project_B » Mon Aug 17, 2009 12:25 pm

First track here

http://soundcloud.com/sysreq

Edgy, rolling, techno influenced sound.

any comments more than welcome


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Post by zeder » Mon Aug 17, 2009 2:08 pm

Hey!

http://www.myspace.com/zederdnb

Give me some feedback!

Cheers!

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Post by tripwire22 » Tue Aug 18, 2009 4:55 pm

new song up called Euro let me know what u guys think of it or any songs on my page

www.myspace.com/trpwr

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Animistics

Post by eden » Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:09 am

Hey all

we're a new dubstep Group called Animistics

check it out

www.myspace.com/animisticz


cheers

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not finished but would like feedback...

Post by myspace.com/lilkato25 » Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:18 am

i love dubstep.

i just started making dubstep

let me know if i should continue.

my first attempt is also on my

url]www.myspace.com/lilkato25[/url]

check it out leave a message.

Thanks, LK.

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Post by myspace.com/lilkato25 » Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:49 am

http://www.myspace.com/lilkato25

just started making dubstep just learned to make it wobble!!! give me feedback[/code]

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BIOS - New DubStep - Please Check >>><<<

Post by bios » Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:12 am

Hello Friendz .. i have beeen producing Minimal & Progressive from sometime ..but i am really inspired & got totaly into DubStep recently ..

2 of my new tunes are in the player >> please check and let me knw wat u think ..

htttp://www.myspace.com/biosounds

all kinds of critics , comments & reviews are more then welcome ...

Regards

BIOS
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Everyone Knows "FUN RULES"

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Post by skallion » Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:44 am

http://soundcloud.com/skallion/smashed-crab

1st dubstep attempt, feedback appreciated!

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Re: Animistics

Post by tripwire22 » Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:16 pm

eden wrote:Hey all

we're a new dubstep Group called Animistics

check it out

www.myspace.com/animisticz


cheers
you guys are pretty good and groovin im lovin the sax steppz and grub steppa tracks.

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On Lock 3 EP

Post by scp » Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:15 am

hey ppl iv got a 5 instro EP up for free download. iv got a dubstep tune in there called enigma amongst other genres. let me know what you think
download link can be found on this page: http://blogs.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuse ... =505890146
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Soundcloud: Soundcloud

Also check the Youtube channel http://www.youtube.com/user/scp731

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Post by putrid » Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:15 pm

i'm new here but would appreciate it if you gave my new track 'sly' a listen guys,
www.myspace.com/ukputrid
cheers

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Post by pmm » Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:09 pm

Hello!

I've just finished a tune that i'm really happy with. I have no one to show it to right now so i thought i'd post it here ( I'm usually just a lurker ). It is the latest tune uploaded on my soundcloud called Ricochet

Feedback would be appreciated :)

:arrow: http://soundcloud.com/petemines


It's not dubstep but heavily influenced. Since i first heard instra:mental there's been no going back!

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Post by tripwire22 » Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:33 pm

PMM wrote:Hello!

I've just finished a tune that i'm really happy with. I have no one to show it to right now so i thought i'd post it here ( I'm usually just a lurker ). It is the latest tune uploaded on my soundcloud called Ricochet

Feedback would be appreciated :)

:arrow: http://soundcloud.com/petemines


It's not dubstep but heavily influenced. Since i first heard instra:mental there's been no going back!
hey i really like the track its groovin and all but i kinda dont like how u slowed the ending down and didnt bring it back up to speed and just end it right there. if u can offer any thing about my tracks on myspace that would be great

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Post by tripwire22 » Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:36 pm

Putrid wrote:i'm new here but would appreciate it if you gave my new track 'sly' a listen guys,
www.myspace.com/ukputrid
cheers
dbl post for the win...

i like the track everyting is dandy cept i say bring the ambient water drop or w.e up in the mix instead of in the background

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Post by pmm » Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:52 pm

Ah shit, feel a bit rude coming on here and posting my track without giving feedback for the people posting before me today.

Thanks for your comments tripwire. Im still not sure about taking it out of halftime at all.. At the time it sounded wicked but on listen backs, it seems a bit out of place.

Putrid - SLY - Really nice swinging beats and very heavy distorted wobbles. maybe could do with some percussion working on the double time. Thats just my opinion. The tune progresses very nicely and doesn't get boring. Could easily go on alot longer. Would be cool if you automated cut off ,res etc on the bassline to keep things moving. Maybe more attention to cleaning up some of those samples and a little compression on the high end to make everything crystal clear.

SCP - Enigma - Awesome track. Loving the bass + samples. Everything is really nicely mixed down and has a wicked groove. Can tell alot of time went into just sequencing the beats. Im not to keen on the reverb on the hats. Reverb can be a twat to get right though

Tripwire - Euro - Really euphoric dreamy tune mate. Reminds me of an 80's sci fi theme - maybe John Carpenter. I'd like to hear this tune out of myspace. The bass sounds like its distorting but it could just be the crappy myspace player... Even better on its second listen. big tune

Fuck, this post turned out to be longer than expected!

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Post by lhd » Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:31 pm

@PMM-Thank god somebody here gives a shit. I swear this forum is going to hell because you jackasses have wretched manners and are ruled by selfishness and your puny, small penis driven egos. IF YOU POST A TRACK FOR FEEDBACK, THEN REVIEW AT LEAST THREE(3)OTHER PEOPLE'S TUNES FIRST, OR IMMEDIATELY FOLLOWING YOUR POST. OTHERWISE FUCK OFF AND GO POST YOUR NEWB CRAP IN THE DUBS SECTION!!!!! Where you are guaranteed to either get absolutely no respect or to get put in your place properly.

That being said, I came in to peep a few tunes, so this is what I listened to:

@Imaginary Forces-I don't care too much for what you've got so far with Resonance. It's an okay tune, good sounds, nice, tasty synths, mellow deep vibe, good subs, nice smooth transitions, great hi-hats, well mixed, great production quality.....it just doesn't really seem to go anywhere man. Imo it needs to change up more after the drop and could use at least two drops, maybe some significant time changes or really letting loose on that hand percussion, it just sounds like one really big loop. However, what you have so far is good, just not enough to be a 6:39 min tune.

@Leviticus-I do not like midrange music at all, so I can't tell you your music is good. However, your production quality and mixdown are okay. Only bit of crit I can offer you is that with some better eq'd hi-hats with a more driving pattern and a more prominent place in the mix, you'll get more action on the dancefloor.

@Tripwire-You haven't got a soundcloud yet?!! C'mon, I remember your first post on this thread, it's been long enough, go to soundcloud and start a page! It's a whole other community, one with way more feedback and support. Big up on developing good etiquette and supporting the community though bruv, that is what this forum is supposed to be about!
Now then about Euro, I can tell your sound is really developing man, the synths are nice, the snare sounds good, your sub sounds just a bit clipped, not sure if that's intentional or not. Your mix just sounds a bit crowded, you may benefit from clearing a bit more space for those hi-hats and varying the pattern of your drums a bit. Avoid extended repetition whenever possible, a key change drop with those arps would be nice and right on time imo. Nice drop at 3:14, love this, just need another drop before here, maybe around 64 bars(2:10 or so)would be nice. Good tune though, I can tell you've really been working, big up. I like the Substance tune too.

@PMM-Listened to Ricochet and I like the idea, I appreciate the creativity and originality, imo this tune is badly lacking in some very vital percussion. Which is an easy thing to go back and change. A good snare, clap or rimshot is essential for the overall movement of a dubstep tune, can really be any sound, just needs to be there, and the drum sounds that really come after 2:14 don't do it for me personally. Also, some good dancing hi-hat action would greatly benefit this tune as well, and lastly, but most importantly, subs man, some nice deep fat heavy sine waves to go along with the drums to really move this tune. Just my opinion, I think you could have an amazing tune here man, just needs a bit more work and a bit better mix done when you're done. I like all of your ideas in your tunes on the soundcloud, great style man, great sounds, very original and creative, very dark and heavy. Love Clouds and Bampton Stint. You may benefit greatly from a copy of Izotope Ozone. It's great for mastering reverb and boosting your subs. Probably some of the best tunes I've heard from this forum in a while. Big up.

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Post by my_fickle_eye » Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:34 pm

Hey first post in a little while and my first request for critique on the forum.
Ive got 1 finished track and 1 work in progress for ya'll to listen to. let me know what you think

www.myspace.com/myfickleeye

Both are really quite dark but in a strange way
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Post by my_fickle_eye » Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:51 pm

Petamines - bampton stint. really like the organic and expressive sounds, the way the introduction goes into the first beat is very natural, sounds like it evolves. into it. Falls into the beat. sounds quite squarepusher influenced. Kinda like the fact there's no sub bass as it compares well to other tracks (smashed crab) and i could imagine it being easy to mix.

Skallion - Wasnt sure about the intro, think the pads could evolve a bit more, maybe some more unique tones with the bass. Liked it at 1.54 when it drops in with the deeper bass although i think its a bit loud in the mix nice variation.
Like the thick kick drum tones you have going.

Putrid - Like the way you drop out the basline to allow the other synth to fit in, mixdown needs to be slightly louder nice 200hz chest bam snare, i think the violin samples could do with a bit of work though.

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