FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by amphibian » Sat Sep 11, 2010 1:15 am

Case in point ^

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by BadBoyBastian3B » Sat Sep 11, 2010 4:06 am

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by creeptown » Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:52 am

@Dav.id Love the intro mate sounds like a malfunctioning robot and a little puppy! Haha also loving the percussion just shuffles the track up so well, I would have maybe tried to use a couple of different basslines in the track just to give it that variety and to switch it up. Everything else sounds tight mix down is sick!

@Capture pt Man this is some ridiculously old school shit! Loving it, it just puts you in another world. Cant fault this track in anyway, really well down Big ups!

@jaydot Sick track mate, I love it, right up my alley loving the style. The drop is fat love the little build up just before it drops like WHOMP WHOMP WHOMP BOOOM! Love all the ambient effects in the background. Bassline is a mind fuck! Percussions are killer too. Good job bro! Reminds me a lot of nero’s end of the world.

@pyroclasm holy shit was not really expecting that for a drop thats some pure mind gutter material mate. I like how you switch it up well with the basslines and effects. Just gives the track a lot more dynamics. SICK!

@phoxache Bullahhhh, sick track bro feelin it heaps. Really well done loving all the basslines, sub bass is killer too! Those guitars you got pumping add soo much effect, this one would go sick in a club. Fucks suck thats what that is!

Here are two of my new ones.

Eazy E - Creep n Crawl VIP - free download on soundcloud aswell!

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Fatality (this track is finished, just wanted to save the full version for an ep), just want to hear thoughts on it.

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feedback greatly appreciated, either here or on soundcloud!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by dav.id » Sat Sep 11, 2010 9:46 am

lol what's up with the 500 soundcloud tracks on the previous page :o
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Post by Skaven » Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:36 pm

Not been able to get on here much recently to post or listen, but there are some tight tracks going on in this thread this month! Anyway here's some feedback

@Capture pt - Don't really listen or make this kind of dubstep, so not sure how much I'll be able to comment on, but I'll try leave some useful feedback, the mix down sounds tight, everything seems to have it own space and the sounds you've used compliment each other quite well, so nothing bad to say there, only thing I wasn't really into was the percussion part that runs throughout, just got a bit repitive for me, maybe try adding a bit more variation to it, other than that its sounds tight.

@jaydot - Intro is badass! Feels the drop lets its down so much tho, really not feeling the wobble, tho I do kinda like the parts when it goes up like at around 1.40, but otherwise like fassyman said, they seem to lack melody. Production sounds really good, just feel its needs a different wobble or some other wobble sounds to give it more dynamics and keep it interesting and more melody.

@fassyman - Good use of samples throughout, proper feeling them. The sub sounds sweet, haven't really got anything negative to say, mix down sounds tight, really felling the piano, proper chilled, the whole chilled vibe got me proper zoning out whilst listening, Big Ups man!

@phoxache - Haven't heard the version you posted first to see how much its changed, but I'm proper feeling this tune, got some real nice synth sounds and proper feeling the guitar parts that you use, really well written and interesting throughout! As I said didn't listen to the track before, but the kicks and snares you have now, sound tight. Nothing bad to say at all, saw you had it available to download,so Ive snagged a copy, so thanks for making the download available, will defo be playing this out and putting in mixes if thats cool with you? Big Ups!

@jstick - That drop its sweet! Proper feeling the melody of it, good use of the vocal too, mix down is tight too! Liking the second drop to, but a bit unsure of the higher lead part, just sounds a bit random to me and doesn't seem to compliment the track as much as it could, but just my opinion, into hearing the whole track, as other than the lead part I thought it was dope!

@creeptown - That Eazy E VIP IS HENCH!!! Proper feeling this, production is tight and all the sounds are badass, sounds bad! Also saw you had this available to download, so have snagged a copy which will defo play out n put in mixes if thats cool with you? Loving the high lead.
2nd track - Intro is bad, production again sounds tight as, BIG! Again the drop is sick. Looking forward to the hearing the rest when you drop the ep, will keep my eye out for it.

As I said, Big tunez on here this month, not many bad things to say, Big Ups!

Was posting as I listened and don't think it put all the tracks in the post below that had been posted, so if I missed your tune out, sorry. Will try drop some more feedback soon.

If you wanna listen to any of my stuff, there's a remix Ive done for Dubstep Division Recordings in my sig, so thanks if you chack it out, feedback always welcome good or bad, need as much help as I can get!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by phoxache » Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:11 pm

creeptown wrote: @phoxache Bullahhhh, sick track bro feelin it heaps. Really well done loving all the basslines, sub bass is killer too! Those guitars you got pumping add soo much effect, this one would go sick in a club. Fucks suck thats what that is!
Cheers bruv! Appreciate you takin the time to have a listen. :-)
Skaven wrote: @phoxache - Haven't heard the version you posted first to see how much its changed, but I'm proper feeling this tune, got some real nice synth sounds and proper feeling the guitar parts that you use, really well written and interesting throughout! As I said didn't listen to the track before, but the kicks and snares you have now, sound tight. Nothing bad to say at all, saw you had it available to download,so Ive snagged a copy, so thanks for making the download available, will defo be playing this out and putting in mixes if thats cool with you? Big Ups!
Skaven, this made my day mate! I'm honoured you like it enough to play it out and put it in a mix. Hook me up with a copy if you do put it in a mix! I just checked out your profile, you're just down the road in Cov (I'm in Leam). If you're playing local and dropping dubstep, I'll check it out! Take it easy bro. :)
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by CBK81 » Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:48 pm

A-List wrote:@vdbproductions - im not digging the intro all that much dude... other then that, its decent... 50seconds plus i like!... but also im not THAT big on the talking bass sound, when its playing by itself.

@imperial - mary jane: i like the intro alot! really nice synth sound, but im not really feeling what comes after that man. dont get me wrong it has a nice flow, i just cant get away with the sound.. but you have potential! which is a big thing!
drumstep song: if you can get that bass to the front abit more id like it alot more! i mean everythings sitting perfectly etc, i like the progression of the bassline, just again the sound... keep at it though man!

cryokinesis - veryyyyy deep man.. i like it. the snare could do with coming to the front abit more (unless its just my headphones)

F-R-E-D - this is a weiiiiird tune! haha, reminded me of dr.who for some reason. not my cup of tea but its a decent effort man!

joelvibes - im not feeling it that much mate im afraid.. some nice sounds in there though, it just didnt do it for me


ok.... so heres a new one from myself and circusjams new alias 'SubFlex'

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by oscarhenson » Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:02 pm

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just finished mixdown and am off to bed, wanted to get this up here first - i will give feedback to as many as i can in the morning, listened to a few already, some tight tunes this month. let me know what you think anyway

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Post by creeptown » Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:50 am

Skaven wrote:@creeptown - That Eazy E VIP IS HENCH!!! Proper feeling this, production is tight and all the sounds are badass, sounds bad! Also saw you had this available to download, so have snagged a copy which will defo play out n put in mixes if thats cool with you? Loving the high lead.
2nd track - Intro is bad, production again sounds tight as, BIG! Again the drop is sick. Looking forward to the hearing the rest when you drop the ep, will keep my eye out for it.
Cheers mate i appreciate your feedback :D would definitely be happy for you to use the track!

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Post by blazinaidan » Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:58 am

@oscarhenson: loving the percussion man, loving it. the way you bring in everthing around 0:44 works out pretty well. i dig the bridge but it doesnt seem quite distinct enough. blends in with the rest of the song a bit too well for my taste. otherwise though dude, i think its a great tune and im definitely trying to keep my eye on ya and see what else you pump out.

@business: heavy heavy track for sure. love the lead line. my favorite part of the song is everything thats happening before the grime part comes in. not that the grimey bass aint bad, im just not in much of a jump up mood at the moment. but yea dude that lead line is evil! mwhaha!

@jstik: now THATS what im talking about man! great melodies and harmonies man, really. loving the reverb shit at 1:25. the build back up around 1:40 is kind've cliche but hey man, still sounds good. really really like this track though man, can't wait to hear more like it!


i've posted this at 3 different stages of development in the WIP thread haha. i know, i've been fiending for feedback on this one a bit too much. anywho i just wrapped it up tonight so i can get my mind off of it. lemme know what yall think!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by deadly_habit » Sun Sep 12, 2010 1:43 pm

since i dislike the dubs section and such have a free 320 of some 95 bpm ambient business that i'm happy with here under an alias i'm going to be using more
and spam time, for more free choons join my facebook fan page in sig, and the tentative recordings one too :wink: :t:

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Post by fassyman » Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:03 pm

@blazinaidan - i dig alot of the sounds youve used in this, real futuristic, metalic sounding. it lacks pace though, some nice shuffley hats would sort it out i think.

@creeptown - not really into the tear out style you got goin on. sayin that its got a massive sound to it. The vocal fits well, like the breaks you got in there n all.

@phoxache - first of all cheers for the feedback :). tunes massive man, sound real clear. n that guitar sample works real well. cant think of anything negetive to say.



okkkkk i gots a new one. banged this out in 2 days which is strange for me since it usually takes me weeeeeks to finish a tune.

feedback much appreciated :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by jaspervc » Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:52 pm

Hope you like this (and buy it :p)
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by jstick » Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:31 pm

@Skaven + @blazinaidan

Thanks guys, much appreciated.. I'll take your feedback on board of course.

Finished up another track and would love some feedback on this.

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I'll post some more feedback for peeps soon.

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Post by AL4228 » Sun Sep 12, 2010 5:48 pm

@ jstick - Likein the track, persoanlly, id get rid of those double kicks on the intro, and beef the sub up a little. But pretty dope track man :)
@fassyman - not too much into the minimal myself, but it's got a cool vibe man, mastering sounds good n all. nice production :)
@blazinadian - trippy vibe haha, i'd kinda die down the sound just before your drops though, kinda hard to tell when they hit
@cbk81 - sick shit lol, not a fan of the yies though, geting overused in dubstep now :( ... but def. a big track :D
@Eazy-E - sick track too you as well :) same with the yies though :|
These are only my opinions though :oops:


Lookin to get feedback on the track in my sig, ^^ Big ups, lota dope tunes

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by MrKnife » Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:29 pm

hello this is my track (in my sig) feedback please :)

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Post by blazinaidan » Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:35 pm

MrKnife wrote:hello this is my track (in my sig) feedback please :)
tip: post feedback before your own track. many people, including myself, don't look at tracks in these threads unless you post feedback beforehand.

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Post by MrKnife » Sun Sep 12, 2010 7:51 pm

AL4228 - very good feelin the robotic stuff :)

jstick - very good intro but the synth when all starts ... its like i heard it before , didnt grab me , but the track is ok

jaspervc - when i heard the intro i was expecting something tottaly different to drop , the drop is good , a lil repetetive but is good

Check my track too at my sig :) feedback pls , thx :)

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Post by phoxache » Sun Sep 12, 2010 8:32 pm

@MrKnife - Clean production (as far as I can tell on these cans). I like my drilling, heavy tracks but I found this one a little too harsh sounding. Personally, I'd use those harsh sounds now and then so they stay fresh and dynamic. Maybe a call and response type of thing is needed?

@AL4228 - Yeah man, I like this. I wasn't sure about the really long intro but it sounds cool. This is the sorta thing I was just talking about. Switching the harsh sounds up and keeping it interesting and dynamic.

Still looking for feedback on my track: :)

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