WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for NOVEMBER, 2010

[Fatach]

@wub - ok, but I like that shit, it evolves in an interesting way and isn't boring.
well mastered.
and yeah - cheesy samples!

[critical sound system]

@ wub: nice glitchy touch. cant say about the bass cause im on my laptop.

@weedcali: nice tune.

@fatash/ strange thing, lol

@ogunslinger: heavy shit. i dont like the vocals though, but the whole tune is well done.





its the first time i manage to do some heavy tune
what do you guys think?
i cant get the soundcloud player.


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[wub]

@Critical Sound System - Felt the (albeit DJ friendly) intro goes on a bit too long without any variation, try switching up the intro beat/perc programming to give it some movement before the tune drops

[critical sound system]

yeah i know, the intro is crap. i didnt worked on it yet.
its work in progress.
thanks

[critical sound system]

bu the way do you know how to get the soundcloud player in my post?

[wub]

Use the Soundcloud button in the reply box to generate the tags, then put the URL of your soundcloud page into it.

[critical sound system]

thanks

[Debaser1]

Critical sound system: Love the ideas in this, but the bass is WAY too quiet in comparison to your percussion. Lacks its punch man! Other than production though, I think this tune's definitely a go-er (that's good by the way).

Whacked this out this morning. Just a bit of fun I spose. Feedback appreciated
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Nice one

[wub]

@debaser - felt the wobbles from about 1m5o onwards needed some variation to keep me interested. Also, reckon the intro synth pattern is a bit too piercing

[weedcali]

Critical sound system, give real feedback.

[LordBid]

Critical sound system, give real feedback.

lol yea one sentence descriptions is pretty weak

[Beardyman123]

@ critical sound system - loving the tune but i agree the bass is too quiet. turn it up to get a real skank on.

@debaser - i love your tunes, they have a certain 'groove' to them that just makes me nod my head.

@weedcali - that tune is so chilled, love it. nice variations aswell, keeps it interesting

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a tune ive been working on for a few days, work in progress. few little cheeky samples of stewart lee. bring on the feedback bare in mind i havnt been doing this long ha.

[levi2brown]

Hi i'm new to production but having a go ha and liking the quality of the tracks on here

what do you think about my first go??

not 100% finished it still needs mixing down etc
cheers

(think i've embedded this right)

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[levi2brown]

sorry, here ya go....

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[TRaffikz]

@Levi2brown: You gave no feedback, so no feedback for you

@Beardyman123: Well that intro is pretty odd. Drop is ok, i like the phasy effect on the drums.
The basses are pretty awkward imo, the panning is confusing me, i think you should drop one of the two basses
and let the other one just sit in the middle. Track buildup is nice, but you should work on your mix.
Overall thumb up for a decent effort.

@Debaser1: Wow i like the bell intro. Expected this to drop in some Wisp-style IDM. The drums are a bit too basic imo,
maybe work on a break to put in there? The switchup to the dubstep part is pretty cool. Overall, sweet tune,
but work on your mix, the kick should be more prominent. Thumb up.

@Critical sound system: Real feedback please. Your tune sounds ok, but the boring intro put me off.
The layering of the snare with the bell is a cool idea.

@weedcali: Digging the style man! Is that a hang drum? Original approach, i don't mind
the long intro. Drums sounding crisp, good job on those. Bass is cool, should blast on a big
soundsystem. Overall excellent job mate!

This is my little wippy. I'd love some feedback
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[gonzodj]

@traffikz - well produced not really feelin it though just my opinion though

@beardyman123 - really chill track but the string counterpoint is really off

@debaser1 - something different which i admire really feel what you're trying to pull off could use some grittier samples and the first synth doesnt come in loud enough compared to the second.

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about as much as ima do on this remix

[Craggle]

@TRaffikz

Percussion in intro is good, proper nice build up and love it when it drops. The Midrange bass is harddddd, get this finished man, has bare potential !

@Wub

Love this song man, proper nice chill vibe going on ! and i actually like the samples haha ! also very good production on this, everythings sounding nice and crisp, good work man !

@jakedubber

I like the sample at the start, helps towards a good build up + intro, i like the midrange that builds up when it drops, but i feel like the yui thing you got going kills the vibe of the song, also add more bass ! good start

Anyway my work in progress, bare influences banged into one track, hope you guys like it
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[C AverRage]

. Im not good on constructive criticism
@TRaffikz ..This track is sick man.. Really dope sauced used in the preparation i can taste it. like i said im not good on this I feel i have so much to learn. but all I could say is Id like to hear some various in the wobbles but good job man shoot me a finished 320 when its there ?


@ Craggle. Really LIking it man. If i would to recomend something would be too put some quick silence pauses up in the mix here and there and . I love the ear scratching though right up my alley. cant wait to hear it finish

@critical.. Definitely a good idea for a track. the structure loses my interest here and there but I have the same problems on some of my tracks as well. Need to cut the over lapping wobbles imo . and build the intro to break and break to so on and so forth..



I tried uploading this in the dubs and no one would reply so I know I need work so heres my track Im working on completing
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[Psythe]

@debasser dude this track is nice something about it just makes you feel good good wubs
@lord bid- love the sample of the robo the wobbles should really be more grimey bt thats just me good job
@craggle diggin the flow of this very sick finish this bro

This is a snippet im working on, reason seems to be the hardest production tool ever but just lookin for some feed back thanks..this is just a first mixdown
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[weedcali]

Thanks y'all! i post some more feedback in a lil bit.