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Back since last time with a track.

Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 1:06 pm
by llspamll
So.. I made this account here like maybe a few months ago or maybe even a year.
Anyways I did it to ask for feedback on tracks and that's when i was just terrible and didn't know the tricks of the trade so I got some terrible feedback on the things I thought that sounded ok.
So now i've come back and I have this cool sounding thing going n wanted a bit of feedback, so...... please :D there on the myspace, links below.


Http://www.myspace.com/llspamll

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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 3:28 pm
by thierry_le_dj
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj (Mondazed) just uploaded it started a few hours ago on this...
am still not sure if the synth suits the bass...but am really loving this tune its still a little rough

but a feed back would be great..thanks. (Mondazed)
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj

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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 4:36 pm
by step correct
If you guys want feedback on your tunes, you may want to serve up some feedback on other's first. :wink:

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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 5:08 pm
by my_fickle_eye
ya i did for like 4 tunes

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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:39 pm
by llspamll
k ill start with my fickle eye. what do you use, it's hard to criticise if i don't know what your working with haha. but really mastering and EQing is something you should figure out yourself cause everyone does if differently.

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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 12:44 am
by HAACK
Lots of good posts in here, hoping for a critique on my tune "City Streets" ex: Frequency range on drums, bass, and any other thoughts would be most appreciated. The tune is 2-step/Garage influenced.

Cheers.
:D

http://www.isound.com/haack

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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 4:59 am
by phraktol
Whats up everyone, this is a new track i'm working on, its just the beginning, but i think its pretty good, just thought i'd post it and hope for some feedback ;)

Thanks!

http://soundcloud.com/codystearns/newdubstep

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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 5:21 am
by HAACK
phraktol wrote:Whats up everyone, this is a new track i'm working on, its just the beginning, but i think its pretty good, just thought i'd post it and hope for some feedback ;)

Thanks!

http://soundcloud.com/codystearns/newdubstep

Links not workin :/

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 6:28 am
by phraktol
oh sorry,im new to the soundcloud thing, i think it should work now i had it set to private.
Thanks for the heads up :D
http://soundcloud.com/codystearns/newdubstep

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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 8:21 am
by Risky_Business
midnight_toker wrote:Soundcloud

Although I've been mixing dub tracks for a few years I never tried much production. This one came together in 20 minutes after a happy accident I had while working on another project.

Also have another version with a more traditional dubstep drum pattern, but having some ducking issues with that one. A bit of a cheesy vocal, and needs some frequency work on the mud to crisp it up... Go easy on me, not like I'm suggesting anyone should be playing this out anytime soon...

Check out my dubstep mixes @ http://hvyhttrs.podOmatic.com


DAW: FL9XXL

the panning you used on the lead is a little to extreme imo. it distracting me from the song.

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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 8:35 am
by Risky_Business
again if anyone could please tell me how to put your soundcloud audio stream in here. that would be great. thanks again

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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 9:39 am
by thierry_le_dj
Mondazed!! heavy bass... http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj (Mondazed) feed back please...

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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 4:41 pm
by DNT KNW
http://www.mediafire.com/?qyzc02wzzmq

Feedback would really be appreciated guys, this is my first attempt at production!

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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 12:00 am
by big d 90
Njamimars wrote:My second DS, I think it's the better music I made so far.

It's messy I know but I always make things first then making a long nice intro and somethings between them.

Soundcloud
this tune is bad !!

feelin the digi bit at the start , an the bass is nice aswell

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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 12:04 am
by big d 90
thierry_le_dj wrote:http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj (Mondazed) just uploaded it started a few hours ago on this...
am still not sure if the synth suits the bass...but am really loving this tune its still a little rough

but a feed back would be great..thanks. (Mondazed)
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
nice track but im not too sure bout that synth just doesnt suit the tune imo

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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 12:08 am
by big d 90
quick one ive been working on, could do with very critical feedback as i am still quite new to everything production-wise
http://www.divshare.com/download/8759578-858
cheers in advance

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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 12:53 am
by my_fickle_eye
my_fickle_eye wrote:Hey working on putting an ep or something together and this is a sample from one of my tracks, just wondering if i could get some advice on general structuring, and especially EQ mixing and mastering problems with the sound ive got, thanks for your time.
Soundcloud
please reply :'(

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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 5:45 am
by drenster
my_fickle_eye wrote:
my_fickle_eye wrote:Hey working on putting an ep or something together and this is a sample from one of my tracks, just wondering if i could get some advice on general structuring, and especially EQ mixing and mastering problems with the sound ive got, thanks for your time.
Soundcloud
please reply :'(
ill do a quick one, im no engineer or anything, but cant hear your drums, 2nd bassline is really over the top, nice, but really loud. i like the song in general, just need to bring out the drums and 'smooth' out the bass. ;]

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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 2:10 pm
by Sub Warrior
big d 90 wrote:
Njamimars wrote:My second DS, I think it's the better music I made so far.

It's messy I know but I always make things first then making a long nice intro and somethings between them.

Soundcloud
this tune is bad !!

feelin the digi bit at the start , an the bass is nice aswell
Indeed, keep working on this one.

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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:21 pm
by my_fickle_eye
llspamll wrote:k ill start with my fickle eye. what do you use, it's hard to criticise if i don't know what your working with haha. but really mastering and EQing is something you should figure out yourself cause everyone does if differently.
Well i use cubase sx3 but ye i know how to eq i was just wondering whether or not there is something noticable that i missed out and which parts stand out as being to quiet to some people. Getting perspective from someone else can enlighten you to the blindingly obvious, and you go oh shit oh yeah cant believe i didnt see that. my rooms not exactly acousticly treated ehem and i have to make do with the speaker placement i have. :( its a sad story.

Thanks for the comment on turning up the beats, thats made a huge difference, still having problems with the bass, ive synced up the lfo speed changes with the drum beat but its a gradual process, any other feedback would be great. Thanks for listening