WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

[Kes-Es]

BudSpencertron: I like the details in this track, everything is really fat and quality sounding but also ridiculously clean. I like the bass patch you've used, it's mad engaging and processed well, You've got really good everything going on, Keep it up dude, this is one of the coolest things I've heard in a while.


Aspect-dubz: I like the intro and the incidentals you've got going on in this track, Really laid back and I dig the groove you have. My feedback is finish it.

Jrisreal: I like the arp melody and the lead I just feel like the arp should have more going on, the bass is a little bit nonabrasive for the patch you're trying to recreate, your sub could be deeper, Maybe distort the patch as well. All in all though I really dig this track, the melodies are cool and it has potential. Keep working on it man.


This is my track, started it tonight, general feedback/ critique would be awesome.

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[jrisreal]

Jrisreal: I like the arp melody and the lead I just feel like the arp should have more going on, the bass is a little bit nonabrasive for the patch you're trying to recreate, your sub could be deeper, Maybe distort the patch as well. All in all though I really dig this track, the melodies are cool and it has potential. Keep working on it man.


This is my track, started it tonight, general feedback/ critique would be awesome.

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Thanks, I've been experimenting more with the arp since I posted it. The sub is pretty deep from my end and also is distorted (put on a send, distorted, and then hi-passed then layered with the clean sub)
Your track is pretty intense. With such a calm intro, I didn't even expect that style of music, let alone for it to come at me so fast! Nice sound design. Don't really have anything to criticize other than a lack of subbass. that may just be my crappy 4-inch sub, though

[influx]

@LukeRaith - Very chilled track I like it! But it seems a little lackluster after awhile, it doesn't progress enough in my opinion

@Specimen-Yarp - Those drums sound amazing. Kick could be abit more powerful though, also feel like the melody needs some work, but the track has a great atmosphere

@Kes-es - Great stuff man, was not expecting that build, I feel like the intro is a little too long, or it needs more going on it it, the intro doesn't really hook the listener in, but man everything after that.. Top notch stuff

Here's a new track I'm workin on, been branching out of dubstep and working on some electro house

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[Specimen-Yarp]

@LukeRaith - Very chilled track I like it! But it seems a little lackluster after awhile, it doesn't progress enough in my opinion

@Specimen-Yarp - Those drums sound amazing. Kick could be abit more powerful though, also feel like the melody needs some work, but the track has a great atmosphere

@Kes-es - Great stuff man, was not expecting that build, I feel like the intro is a little too long, or it needs more going on it it, the intro doesn't really hook the listener in, but man everything after that.. Top notch stuff

Here's a new track I'm workin on, been branching out of dubstep and working on some electro house

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i cant even begin to explain how epic ur wip is ...... like. i totally just rocked out hahah.
like... wow , its SICK man

[influx]

i cant even begin to explain how epic ur wip is ...... like. i totally just rocked out hahah.
like... wow , its SICK man

Wow wasn't expecting such positive feedback, feels good haha

Thanks though man really appreciate it

[RandoRando]

@specimen Yarp intro was great, love how ambient it is, now for the drop the first wobble that comes in is good but that second one what sounds like its trying to be a yoi, but it doesnt really have and definitive characteristics, like its just a noise (isnt all brostep? lol) anyways, i would try bitcrushing it a little bit to give it some more bite

drums sound great btw, love the verb on that snare

POP!

[Dystinkt]

influx- brilliant intro really good electro house feel to it, the drop is sick, the whole tune is sick, when you finish this 320 me bro! literally nothing technical i can think of to say haha
Kes-es - Nice after the drop, maybe make the intro feel like its building up, the drop hist you out of nowhere a bit too much, spot on technically.
Specimen-Yarp- good sounds in the buildup, nice melody, but i find the intro as a whole just a bit too long, also feels like its lack bass after the drop, and vary up your drums as well.

Heres my effort, really dark and moody but still about teh wubz, theres a limiter on the master here btw, i mixed down to -4db without it:

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[Aufnahmewindwuschel]

thanks for the feedback everyone

@cheeky really nice sub nice wobble to but maybe take the vocals to a different spot

@influx love the power of the synth and the grooev only thing i dont feel is the snare

@kes-es banger enough said haha but if you want any critism maybe make the intro a little bit more interesting

worked a little bit more on it
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[dogmancar]

thanks for the feedback everyone

@cheeky really nice sub nice wobble to but maybe take the vocals to a different spot

@influx love the power of the synth and the grooev only thing i dont feel is the snare

@kes-es banger enough said haha but if you want any critism maybe make the intro a little bit more interesting

worked a little bit more on it
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I'm really liking the sub in you're track. I know it needs something but can't out my finger on it... maybe more high hats? louder high hats? idk some type of higher sound of some sort. Any way I also wanted to say you have the coolest user icon I have ever seen in my whole damn life.

[Specimen-Yarp]

update on my WIP. I beefed up the YOi , and I tweaked reverb, etc. on the drums.
and before you all alpaca me i am just posting the more updated version thanks to all your great feedback, my 3 bits of feedback are on the previous page.

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[RandoRando]

@specimen the yoi deff sounds better, the only thing could be better is a more tight mixdown, the mixdown is good, but,....oh what am i saying im on laptop speakers haha

[influx]

update on my WIP. I beefed up the YOi , and I tweaked reverb, etc. on the drums.
and before you all alpaca me i am just posting the more updated version thanks to all your great feedback, my 3 bits of feedback are on the previous page.

Soundcloud

Great atmosphere man.. Drums are amazing too, love the little rolling percussion sounds, great stuff

Oh one thing I forgot to add, might want to try gelling your wobbles together with a compressor? Just a thought

[Specimen-Yarp]

update on my WIP. I beefed up the YOi , and I tweaked reverb, etc. on the drums.
and before you all alpaca me i am just posting the more updated version thanks to all your great feedback, my 3 bits of feedback are on the previous page.

Soundcloud

Great atmosphere man.. Drums are amazing too, love the little rolling percussion sounds, great stuff

Oh one thing I forgot to add, might want to try gelling your wobbles together with a compressor? Just a thought

can u expand on that or link me to a thread that may help me out with that cause i dont quite get how i would go through with that. thank you very much for the feedback

[amphibian]

bus them all to a single channel (or group them together), and put a compressor on it.

[influx]

update on my WIP. I beefed up the YOi , and I tweaked reverb, etc. on the drums.
and before you all alpaca me i am just posting the more updated version thanks to all your great feedback, my 3 bits of feedback are on the previous page.

Soundcloud

Great atmosphere man.. Drums are amazing too, love the little rolling percussion sounds, great stuff

Oh one thing I forgot to add, might want to try gelling your wobbles together with a compressor? Just a thought

can u expand on that or link me to a thread that may help me out with that cause i dont quite get how i would go through with that. thank you very much for the feedback

Yeah actually here's a great tutorial right here for that kind of specific thing, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijl3Bvhr ... ideo_title

[jrisreal]

update on my WIP. I beefed up the YOi , and I tweaked reverb, etc. on the drums.
and before you all alpaca me i am just posting the more updated version thanks to all your great feedback, my 3 bits of feedback are on the previous page.

Soundcloud

Great atmosphere man.. Drums are amazing too, love the little rolling percussion sounds, great stuff

Oh one thing I forgot to add, might want to try gelling your wobbles together with a compressor? Just a thought

can u expand on that or link me to a thread that may help me out with that cause i dont quite get how i would go through with that. thank you very much for the feedback

Yeah actually here's a great tutorial right here for that kind of specific thing, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijl3Bvhr ... ideo_title

You mean sidechaining?

[influx]

You mean sidechaining?

Yep I actually put two compressors (one sidechained the other not) on my grouped complextro/wobble sounds, not sure if that's how you're supposed to go about things but it sounds good to me xD

[tuckerlinen]

@budspensertron- I love it man. It's original and to me that's the key aspect of any good track. I listened to it twice. I would take some reverb off the snare and make it snappier but that's just a preference. or pitch it up. I dunno, it works the way it is. When my roomies are awake I can play it on the system to be sure but the lowend sounded like it had room to grow. hard to tell on headphones. seriously though I love your tune.

[Aufnahmewindwuschel]

@tuckerlinen thanks man really appreciate it but if have to say this is the gayest profil picture ever, if intended cool, if not epic

@dogmancar thanks for the listening ,i was watching nyan cat rip offs and than boom pikatchu end of story

[Shadrack]

http://soundcloud.com/shadrack-w/hit-by ... unfinished