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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:53 am
by Arshaw
bradicle wrote:
Here's mine, been updated a bit. Feedback from anyone ta.

Soundcloud
like how it starts m8.

cant help but feel the drums n bass need work

but im diggin all those terminator esque sounds in the back, aswell as the choirs n such.

myspace.com/KidKuduro

just uploaded a new track called discrimination, feedback appreciated dude

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 11:14 am
by arktrix45hz

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 11:35 am
by dignan
decklyn wrote:
dignan wrote:Soundcloud

some feedback would be cool for this tune, I'll hook whoever does with some feedback as well.
Yeah it's wonderful man.
The mix could use some attention to bring out the percussion and if I were mixing it down for you, I'd put that synth that sits ontop of the mix a bit deeper into it.
This is a tremendous tune though. Really really nice work.
thanks for the feedback man... when you say you would make that main synth part deeper, do you mean making it a little less high end sounding and a little bit more low/mid sounding? cuz I've been thinking about doing that...

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 3:52 pm
by big d 90
big d 90 wrote:quick one ive been working on, could do with very critical feedback as i am still quite new to everything production-wise
http://www.divshare.com/download/8759578-858
cheers in advance
c'mon people i give feedback for your tunes, if you could return the favour that'd be good !!!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 4:06 pm
by lowpass
big d 90 wrote:
big d 90 wrote:quick one ive been working on, could do with very critical feedback as i am still quite new to everything production-wise
http://www.divshare.com/download/8759578-858
cheers in advance
c'mon people i give feedback for your tunes, if you could return the favour that'd be good !!!
Somebody as frustrated as me about giving feedback and not getting shit in return.

It's pretty cool, All I can say so far is maybe add a crash cymbal/other percussion at the start (I just do that normally for dj purposes) but yeah I can really add much sorry. I guess thats a good thing?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/66488508724fb34e/

This is mine, I'm just looking to see if it's got any potential, I haven't written this style in a while and want some feedback on it

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 4:18 pm
by big d 90
lowpass wrote:
big d 90 wrote:
big d 90 wrote:quick one ive been working on, could do with very critical feedback as i am still quite new to everything production-wise
http://www.divshare.com/download/8759578-858
cheers in advance
c'mon people i give feedback for your tunes, if you could return the favour that'd be good !!!
Somebody as frustrated as me about giving feedback and not getting shit in return.

It's pretty cool, All I can say so far is maybe add a crash cymbal/other percussion at the start (I just do that normally for dj purposes) but yeah I can really add much sorry. I guess thats a good thing?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/66488508724fb34e/

This is mine, I'm just looking to see if it's got any potential, I haven't written this style in a while and want some feedback on it
cheers bruv, ye i know i gotta get round to proper sorting the drums out lol just too lazy

liking your track its worth carrying on but im not feelin the bass on the drop dont know whether you intend to keep it like that
but not to my taSte but different strokes and all that lol

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 7:09 pm
by borrowed
This is what I got so far. Basic/shitty, I know, but I have no idea where to go from here. Some producers said make the drums and hats listenable on their own, and i tried to do that.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6653319233f5be0c/

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:51 pm
by Lwrabbit420
borrowed wrote:This is what I got so far. Basic/shitty, I know, but I have no idea where to go from here. Some producers said make the drums and hats listenable on their own, and i tried to do that.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6653319233f5be0c/
In my opinion I think the drums are going along nicely, . The laser pistol sound was kinda cool, but I wouldn't recommend it through the whole tune however. I'd go for your synth bass next, but thats just me.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:55 pm
by Lwrabbit420
Sorry moderators for not reading the stickies, won't happen again, anyways here it is.

I need some suggestions on the drums, could anyone help? The drums i'm using now feel to stale to me.

Soundcloud

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:57 pm
by furious sounds
Soundcloud
The vox could defo use some work..
feedback appreciated!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 9:08 pm
by saulya
deadly habit wrote:inspired from the doa grid thread a place to show off those work in progresses
my latest
Drunken Drummer
http://www.zshare.net/audio/53570458dd3d86e9/
the intro needs more to it, plus the drop needs more punch and add a little reverb to the bass cause it should sound more live cause atm it just sounds like a machine. pretty sick automation though.

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Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 9:11 pm
by saulya
pyro_racy wrote:Entry for the most original title, I was goin for a sorta melodic ravy type thing but it ended up a little darker than i imagined. Intro still needs a lotta work and I need a better transition into the drop + voice samples on top.

Dubstep03.mp3 - 2.10MB
you need more drums on the intro so people can tell where its going if you get me. the drop is big on my speakers but its full of treble so cut the mid down a bit and make the hihats less clattery but overall this is pretty good mate. nice one

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:08 am
by arktrix45hz
arktrix wrote:Soundcloud
Anyone?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 1:18 am
by Arshaw
Lwrabbit420 wrote:Sorry moderators for not reading the stickies, won't happen again, anyways here it is.

I need some suggestions on the drums, could anyone help? The drums i'm using now feel to stale to me.

Soundcloud
i know what you mean about the drums.

u wanna start off with sum good samples. sounds obv i know, but its how most people do it.

but feelin the track thereafter... nice one...

looking for feedback on a new one of mine btw.

Discrimination... www.myspace.com/KidKuduro

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 1:55 am
by Lwrabbit420
Kid Kuduro wrote:
Lwrabbit420 wrote:Sorry moderators for not reading the stickies, won't happen again, anyways here it is.

I need some suggestions on the drums, could anyone help? The drums i'm using now feel to stale to me.

Soundcloud
i know what you mean about the drums.

u wanna start off with sum good samples. sounds obv i know, but its how most people do it.

but feelin the track thereafter... nice one...

looking for feedback on a new one of mine btw.

Discrimination... http://www.myspace.com/KidKuduro
It's a very mellow ambient track. I think it would sound better if you put some more melody into it however.... thats what I would do with it, but this is not my track, it's yours. I was however feeling the effects that you put into this. Keep on keepin on man, I can see the track comming along nicely!

Oh and thanks for the feedback!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 2:25 am
by Arshaw
Lwrabbit420 wrote:
Kid Kuduro wrote:
Lwrabbit420 wrote:Sorry moderators for not reading the stickies, won't happen again, anyways here it is.

I need some suggestions on the drums, could anyone help? The drums i'm using now feel to stale to me.

Soundcloud
i know what you mean about the drums.

u wanna start off with sum good samples. sounds obv i know, but its how most people do it.

but feelin the track thereafter... nice one...

looking for feedback on a new one of mine btw.

Discrimination... http://www.myspace.com/KidKuduro
It's a very mellow ambient track. I think it would sound better if you put some more melody into it however.... thats what I would do with it, but this is not my track, it's yours. I was however feeling the effects that you put into this. Keep on keepin on man, I can see the track comming along nicely!

Oh and thanks for the feedback!
thank for ya comments man. i tend to make tracks that go nowhere n have no melody :? lol.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 3:07 am
by borrowed
Lwrabbit420 wrote:
borrowed wrote:This is what I got so far. Basic/shitty, I know, but I have no idea where to go from here. Some producers said make the drums and hats listenable on their own, and i tried to do that.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6653319233f5be0c/
In my opinion I think the drums are going along nicely, . The laser pistol sound was kinda cool, but I wouldn't recommend it through the whole tune however. I'd go for your synth bass next, but thats just me.
I have zero idea where to go from here, I suck at programming melodies.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 4:03 am
by Lwrabbit420
borrowed wrote:
Lwrabbit420 wrote:
borrowed wrote:This is what I got so far. Basic/shitty, I know, but I have no idea where to go from here. Some producers said make the drums and hats listenable on their own, and i tried to do that.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6653319233f5be0c/
In my opinion I think the drums are going along nicely, . The laser pistol sound was kinda cool, but I wouldn't recommend it through the whole tune however. I'd go for your synth bass next, but thats just me.
I have zero idea where to go from here, I suck at programming melodies.
Do you have a piano/keyboard?

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 7:05 pm
by jsaxton
been a while since ive posted anything but...
heres a remix im working on of Au Revoir Simone, it may be released som please be brutal on things, yes?

link - http://www.mediafire.com/?gncw2nwoogl

also another new track im working on (or was before remix request came in) - http://www.mediafire.com/?gzyne4meymm

if you hate it why?
if you love it why?

cheers! :D
JSaxton

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Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 8:52 pm
by reignstep
Upload ur shit on soundcloud, I really cba to go around downloading stuff man , sorry >_>

@KidKuduro: The song has potential, it's way too empty though, I'm missing a solid sub sine with a nice melody in it. Maybe a lead dubby synth, but I'm not sure if that's really needed. There's good drum use, nice feel to the song, I'm just missing that subbass soooo bad.

@Arktrix: I like the bass sound, but you might wanna get a heavy , punchy kickdrum, I can barely hear yours as it is now. Rest of the song sounds pretty cool :)

Soundcloud

Little work in progress I'm on, just looking for opinions if the song has any potential :)

Cheers,

Reign