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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Malicious » Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:27 pm

dansu wrote:
Malicious wrote: Work in progress... me messing with new bass. Haven't been producing long... this is one of my first tracks. Was going for a darker, heavier, excisiony - datsik feel. Be nice. :t:

damn it, you didnt even put drums in there, did you ? if im wrong, you need to make this guitarlike bass a little less terror, maybe with eq or sidechaining on the kickdrum. gotta pull the drums out of the bassmud, you know ?

heres one i made yesterday
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Thanks, my bad, was an older version I uploaded, the drums weren't EQed properly so they were clashing with the bass. Newer version is much clearer.

And Critical sound system use [ soundcloud ] these brackets around your link [ /soundcloud ] without the spaces to embed it


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Post by vries » Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:41 pm

dansu wrote:heres one i made yesterday
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Nice one! I'd say turn down the kickdrum just a notch and put a bit of reverb on the bleep, but that might just be my soundsystem/taste.
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Post by vries » Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:54 pm

critical sound system wrote:hi everyone!
im working on a new project and need some feedback/advices on this work in progress
this sounds different when i listen it in different settings.im getting lost
its a bit random loops in fact no stucture
thanks for comments

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Turn down your sub, man. My system ain't near perfect, but over here your sub takes up so much headroom all the other pieces are struggling for that little bit left.
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Post by Province » Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:49 pm

new funky/garage riddem in the player called tablay

www.myspace.com/artekulardubs

still need to sort out the levels and ting.

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Post by feasible_weasel » Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:18 pm

Province wrote:new funky/garage riddem in the player called tablay

http://www.myspace.com/artekulardubs

still need to sort out the levels and ting.
i likeed it when the tune got it...sounded very low sound quality at first :oops:
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Post by feasible_weasel » Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:18 pm

:evil: :evil: something very simple
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Post by Province » Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:24 pm

feasible_weasel wrote:
Province wrote:new funky/garage riddem in the player called tablay

http://www.myspace.com/artekulardubs

still need to sort out the levels and ting.
i likeed it when the tune got it...sounded very low sound quality at first :oops:
still a low quality producer atm :cry:
needs alot of work stilll

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Post by feasible_weasel » Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:27 pm

Province wrote:
feasible_weasel wrote:
Province wrote:new funky/garage riddem in the player called tablay

http://www.myspace.com/artekulardubs

still need to sort out the levels and ting.
i likeed it when the tune got it...sounded very low sound quality at first :oops:
still a low quality producer atm :cry:
needs alot of work stilll
:w: still sound 1000000 more complex than what i make lol
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Post by ilawjick123 » Sun Oct 11, 2009 8:47 am

stop by an have a listen thanks would love some feedback peace dubheadz

http://www.myspace.com/irk1

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Post by resao » Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:42 pm

Please check out my first attempt at dubstep

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Guess where the samples are from.... :D
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Post by redjuan » Sun Oct 11, 2009 6:00 pm

any feedback appreciated please Soundcloud

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Post by reignstep » Sun Oct 11, 2009 6:06 pm

Lookin for some feedback on an unfinished track!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/279413

I'll be happy to return the favor ;)

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Post by djelements » Mon Oct 12, 2009 3:48 am

http://www.divshare.com/download/8864821-995
Anybody have critiques for me?
http://soundcloud.com/helixdelay
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Post by clinic » Mon Oct 12, 2009 7:27 am

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Any feedback would be highly appreciated!!!
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Post by thierry_le_dj » Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:51 am

http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
what do you guys think of my trax??
does it sound like dubstep to you ?
feed back would be great thanks..

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Post by dub1 » Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:19 am

dub3.mp3 - 4.08MB


I would appreciate some feedback on this.

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Post by dignan » Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:00 pm

clinic wrote:Soundcloud


Any feedback would be highly appreciated!!!
really liking this man - great atmosphere, love that main synth. I'd turn down the snare though, it's really loud in the mix. that's about it though, good work man, I wouldn't mind a 320 of it when it's done :e:

here's a tune that I'm almost done with (I think) - some feedback would be appreciated!
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Post by vries » Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:45 pm

clinic wrote:Soundcloud


Any feedback would be highly appreciated!!!
Really likin' it man, givin' it a second go 'round right now.

-Maybe have the delays of the vocal hit on the other side of the stereo spectrum to create some more swing, and variate the delay on your vocal a bit more obvious to keep the track progressing a bit more.
-Create some variations on the snare to keep it moving a bit more, automate your reverbs, throw in a different snare, pitch it up or down, pan it to the other side once in a while or something like that.

-Really like the way the synth comes in at the breakdown and the way it breaks loose as the beat drops again, but ends up being quite contained, really fits with the vibe of the tune.
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Post by vries » Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:57 pm

dignan wrote: here's a tune that I'm almost done with (I think) - some feedback would be appreciated!
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Damn, I'm loving the drums and the way you're using panning in building shit up.

Feel like the synth could be pulled up a bit, seems like you've got plenty of space left for it. And maybe create a variation on that with a slightly modulated sound to keep it a bit more suprising.

Would love to play that tune out, let me know if you'd have a wav or 320 available when it's finished!
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