Malicious wrote:
Work in progress... me messing with new bass. Haven't been producing long... this is one of my first tracks. Was going for a darker, heavier, excisiony - datsik feel. Be nice.
damn it, you didnt even put drums in there, did you ? if im wrong, you need to make this guitarlike bass a little less terror, maybe with eq or sidechaining on the kickdrum. gotta pull the drums out of the bassmud, you know ?
Nice one! I'd say turn down the kickdrum just a notch and put a bit of reverb on the bleep, but that might just be my soundsystem/taste.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:54 pm
by vries
critical sound system wrote:hi everyone!
im working on a new project and need some feedback/advices on this work in progress
this sounds different when i listen it in different settings.im getting lost
its a bit random loops in fact no stucture
thanks for comments
Turn down your sub, man. My system ain't near perfect, but over here your sub takes up so much headroom all the other pieces are struggling for that little bit left.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:49 pm
by Province
new funky/garage riddem in the player called tablay
really liking this man - great atmosphere, love that main synth. I'd turn down the snare though, it's really loud in the mix. that's about it though, good work man, I wouldn't mind a 320 of it when it's done
here's a tune that I'm almost done with (I think) - some feedback would be appreciated! Soundcloud
Really likin' it man, givin' it a second go 'round right now.
-Maybe have the delays of the vocal hit on the other side of the stereo spectrum to create some more swing, and variate the delay on your vocal a bit more obvious to keep the track progressing a bit more.
-Create some variations on the snare to keep it moving a bit more, automate your reverbs, throw in a different snare, pitch it up or down, pan it to the other side once in a while or something like that.
-Really like the way the synth comes in at the breakdown and the way it breaks loose as the beat drops again, but ends up being quite contained, really fits with the vibe of the tune.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:57 pm
by vries
dignan wrote:
here's a tune that I'm almost done with (I think) - some feedback would be appreciated! Soundcloud
Damn, I'm loving the drums and the way you're using panning in building shit up.
Feel like the synth could be pulled up a bit, seems like you've got plenty of space left for it. And maybe create a variation on that with a slightly modulated sound to keep it a bit more suprising.
Would love to play that tune out, let me know if you'd have a wav or 320 available when it's finished!
still sound 1000000 more complex than what i make lol
