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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 5:05 pm
by brettheaslewood
karmacazee wrote: Brettheaslewood:

That kick's got plenty of high end in it, but it doesn't quite sit right, and I can't really tell you why, ha, maybe it's not compressed quite in time. And I'd stick some other kind of bass tone in at the end, like some reverberated long warm drone, carefully placed? That's what I would do, heh.
Nice tune, can't wait to hear what the vocals are like :p
cheers for the words, been doing some work on it last night, and today, i've changed the bassline at the end to fit more nicely with the sample in there.
also created more of a cressendo on the outro, and taken out that ridiculous pitch shift at the end hahahaha

i'll give you the heads up when vocals are on the track

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 5:40 pm
by lushman
deadnoisesystem wrote:this is a new one from me, wanted to do something lo fi with a bit of bounce to it
Soundcloud
Yeah man, like your drum sound, gives the whole thing a nice groove - definitely sounds like it has potential. Following you on the cloud from now on. :)

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 8:07 pm
by dustyspeakers
Hi guys this is a experimental chill out thing im working on at the moment
Feedback needed.

Soundcloud
Cheers

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 10:49 pm
by obzen
yo guys, been producing for about 4 months now and would love some feedback on my latest tune to help me improve and build on my very limited knowledge of production. thanks! :w:
http://soundcloud.com/obzen/obz-transform

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:45 am
by Funicular
dustyspeakers wrote:Hi guys this is a experimental chill out thing im working on at the moment
Feedback needed.
Cheers
Hey,
I'm digging the bassline when it finally drops.
I feel like you let it linger a bit too long in the begining, maybe trurning up the levels would help it feel better.
Nice dark growing piano in the toon i really liked it.

Here is a new song ive been working on these past two days, dont really know what direction to take it in.
My levels and EQs might be messed up, ive only been trying to produce for a few months and really have no idea how to do that stuff.
Soundcloud

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:23 am
by j_one
dustyspeakers wrote:Hi guys this is a experimental chill out thing im working on at the moment
Feedback needed.

Soundcloud
Cheers
Really nice dark piano, feeling that. Sub works really nicely with it all and I'm feeling all the ambient sounds. Good work.

New one in the works, haven't heard how strong the sub is yet as I don't want to annoy the neighbours haha.
Soundcloud

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 6:30 am
by jaydot
@ J-one- Bongos ftw :)

@dusty-speakers- yeah I'm also digging the piano, experimenting with the ambient myself at the minute.

Second proper attempt at a remix, gone for anohter trance track, 130bpm this one dunno if I can get away with that lol. needs a bit of a better mix, the end, certainly. but it's probably the best track I've made yet.

Soundcloud

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:09 am
by deadnoisesystem
lushman wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:this is a new one from me, wanted to do something lo fi with a bit of bounce to it
Soundcloud
Yeah man, like your drum sound, gives the whole thing a nice groove - definitely sounds like it has potential. Following you on the cloud from now on. :)
cheers lushman, ill have a look for you

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:10 am
by deadnoisesystem
jaydot wrote:@ J-one- Bongos ftw :)

@dusty-speakers- yeah I'm also digging the piano, experimenting with the ambient myself at the minute.

Second proper attempt at a remix, gone for anohter trance track, 130bpm this one dunno if I can get away with that lol. needs a bit of a better mix, the end, certainly. but it's probably the best track I've made yet.

Soundcloud
jay that vocal is sweet

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:11 am
by deadnoisesystem
dustyspeakers wrote:Hi guys this is a experimental chill out thing im working on at the moment
Feedback needed.

Soundcloud
Cheers
nice atmosphere dusty

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:14 am
by deadnoisesystem
tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

like my 1st real midrange cack shitty sound track made ever so id love some feedback on it
trip you got a tune on your hands there mate, cut the drums about a bit and your done

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:16 am
by deadnoisesystem
tripwire22 wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:this is a new one from me, wanted to do something lo fi with a bit of bounce to it
Soundcloud
Is this a live drum set ? its sick bro
three midi kits, with a little supertrigger on the send bus, much love

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:46 am
by jaydot
deadnoisesystem wrote:
jaydot wrote:@ J-one- Bongos ftw :)

@dusty-speakers- yeah I'm also digging the piano, experimenting with the ambient myself at the minute.

Second proper attempt at a remix, gone for anohter trance track, 130bpm this one dunno if I can get away with that lol. needs a bit of a better mix, the end, certainly. but it's probably the best track I've made yet.

Soundcloud
jay that vocal is sweet
Yep, it's lovely... :e:

Soundwise it could be better as a whole though.

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:27 am
by DannyDubstep
http://www.zshare.net/audio/738562887c0a9d5c/

The YAYA bass that I've spent a while making.
Thanks to some great guys in: http://www.dubstepforum.com/post1706856.html#p1706856

I'll happily teach ANYONE who wishes to know how to do this.
Gotta give back to tha system. :w:

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:28 am
by martainnn
Drekbek wrote:hey guys! this is a track iam currently working on! would love to hear from u guys what u think of it and the most important What i could change to make it better
the track is unmastered and unfinished yet :)

mate, this is good, nice ambient feel to it, liking it mate :)

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:30 am
by Bassmagnet
Soundcloud
Been working on some chilled ruff shit. Not sure how to end it though >.<
Some feedback from you guys would be great :)

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:33 am
by martainnn
hey guys, ive just recently started producing dubstep, it still needs alot of work ... just wanted to know your thoughts and what i should do to improve? cheers Tain :e:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlDOuJzRlZ4

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:35 am
by Bassmagnet
@dusty-speakers I dig your ambient feel bro, I've always love making some nice dark chill pianos. Good vibes from you brotha.

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:44 am
by martainnn
Bassmagnet wrote:Soundcloud
Been working on some chilled ruff shit. Not sure how to end it though >.<
Some feedback from you guys would be great :)
alrate bassmagnet, these tunes are really good, what software and plugins are you using? your wobbles are sounding really nice man, keep up the good work :e:

Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:05 am
by Bassmagnet
martainnn wrote:
Bassmagnet wrote:Soundcloud
Been working on some chilled ruff shit. Not sure how to end it though >.<
Some feedback from you guys would be great :)
alrate bassmagnet, these tunes are really good, what software and plugins are you using? your wobbles are sounding really nice man, keep up the good work :e:
Thanks brotha! I'm still not feeling some parts, but that may be due to me listening to this for days on end haha.
I'm using Ableton8 and basically I used predator for every single sound.