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				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 7:03 pm
				by phrex
				i think i have no or little chance, that my tracks will ever be feedbacked, although i feedback quite often (guess so)
this thread is for no use with this behaviour.
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:17 pm
				by louissmusic
				vulvavibration wrote:
here i go with a sample of beats/bass&stuff of my next tune...
Soundcloud 
Nice one with the beat, find the bass really quiet in the mix and there seems to be a lack of percussion in the track? Isnt it just kick and snare then a slight variation in the middle. With a bit more of a varied beat it would probs be more interesting and possibly more sub.
safe 
Louis. 
Soundcloud
feel free to feedback my track
 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:17 pm
				by jsaxton
				vulvavibration wrote:just try to feedback first at least one other track.
is society really so fuckin' egoistic?
-yes
yout track doesn't seem to have a concept. no relation between the horrible synth, the snare and the missing kick. wlel it's a work in progress.. but really, you should first at least have something that may sound like work in progress i.e: a 10 sec. drumloop, or something. doesen't have to be long, it has to have some musical substance before posting in here IMHO. 
or am I the only one with that oppinion? 
 
maybe you should first listen to some dubstep (and other music) and you should train your feeling for rythm mate! 
 
 
i will not ask, why you have the snare on the left and the horrible synth on the right.
 
agreed!
unfortunatly there seems to be very little on here i can give but...
deadly wrote:4-track sampler in sig...
Any comments on the tracks much appreciated!
its alright but the opening synth seems abit annoying...dont know why
now my track
it isnt dubstep but it contains wobble
Soundcloud
if theres something specific leave the feedback with a timed comment
otherwise here will do:D
safe
 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 11:12 pm
				by Lam-C
				or am I the only one with that oppinion? 
 no you don't...
Is this dubstep?
 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 11:22 pm
				by phrex
				louissmusic wrote:vulvavibration wrote:
here i go with a sample of beats/bass&stuff of my next tune...
Soundcloud 
Nice one with the beat, find the bass really quiet in the mix and there seems to be a lack of percussion in the track? Isnt it just kick and snare then a slight variation in the middle. With a bit more of a varied beat it would probs be more interesting and possibly more sub.
safe 
Louis. 
Soundcloud
feel free to feedback my track
 
haha... really, it is funky! 

 but i'll come back to you track later...
wel everything is quite in the mix, and i don't wonder that you don't hear a sub. i fucked it up actually. i think i didn't record the subbass somehow. i'll redo it tonight or tomorrow. higher volume and the subbass inclusive 
 
lack of percussion.. humm.. well.. dunno actually, don't want too much, like it a bit minimalistic but with a drive and a groove. does it have that drive/groove?
maybe you should wait untill i upload the betta version! and i just recog that i can't upload anymore this month! 

 so i'll be here again on teh 1st 
 
now to your chune... well i told you before: i tend to more minimalistig dubstep. yours is quote not minimalistic  

  but it really has a drive. maybe you could make more out of the first drop. and the intro sounds a bit... hmm cheap? don't want to sound harsh, but the synth is,  just not individual enough... maybe it just needs some cutoff terror 
 
but like the cracy synth from the drop on. although not my kinda dubstep something special 
 
 
big up
 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:57 am
				by jsaxton
				i already posted a fair bit of feedback recently
so...
it isnt dubstep but it contains wobble
Soundcloud
if theres something specific leave the feedback with a timed comment
otherwise here will do:D
safe[/quote]
 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:19 am
				by soulshynchyld
				chea check this out
im noob az a noob doez
but ay, just want some feedbak!! chea
by tha way i just made this randumb vid so i could upload!!
http://www.youtube.com/user/jahsinchu#p ... IoNODdxPZw 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 3:55 am
				by jsaxton
				
i really like the tune, i can see why you call it dream dub, its 4 in the morning and i feel asif im about to pass out:P
the wobble could do with been just a really heavy sub tbh rather than rough
like skreams in for the kill remix but heavyer 
 
send a 320 when its finished:)
 
			
					
				PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:30 am
				by monst3rrr
				hi there everybody !!
advices and comments are welcome 
sure, it will help us to progress
thx !
Soundcloud 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:54 am
				by jsaxton
				jesus people are not giving feedback at all recently, although thats the entire point of this topic  

 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 3:15 pm
				by rook
				Nearing completion on a remix of Cage The Elephant's 'No Rest For the Wicked'
I'd love any feedback people have to offer.
http://soundcloud.com/rook/cage-the-ele ... emix-ver-1 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 6:16 pm
				by phrex
				jsaxton wrote:jesus people are not giving feedback at all recently, although thats the entire point of this topic  

 
that's what i said page before...
this is for no use.
 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 6:38 pm
				by stappard
				
Cool track. One thing I do feel though is that each bar needs to be a little bit more 'defined', ie a more definate 1-beat at the beginning of each bar. A heavy kick or crash or something. At the moment, especially in the section before the vocals come in proper, the bars sort of flow together and lack a danceable beat.
 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:10 pm
				by jsaxton
				
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:12 pm
				by madmax
				Track called 'Never Never', its a dubtechno vibe. Keep in mind its a work in progress. Its done on Ableton. I am very, very new to this production thing (about 3 days) so feedback, advice, criticism all very welcome. Let me know what you think.
Peaz. 
Soundcloud 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:15 pm
				by jsaxton
				madmax wrote:Track called 'Never Never', its a dubtechno vibe. Keep in mind its a work in progress. Its done on Ableton. I am very, very new to this production thing (about 3 days) so feedback, advice, criticism all very welcome. Let me know what you think.
Peaz. 
Soundcloud 
you should probably give feedback first mate
 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:39 pm
				by phrex
				
 
i'm the wrong guy to smack the head for, buddy! just check out the last 15 pages 

 
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:11 pm
				by madmax
				jsaxton wrote:madmax wrote:Track called 'Never Never', its a dubtechno vibe. Keep in mind its a work in progress. Its done on Ableton. I am very, very new to this production thing (about 3 days) so feedback, advice, criticism all very welcome. Let me know what you think.
Peaz. 
Soundcloud 
you should probably give feedback first mate
 
What you mean? If I haven't given feedback before I wont get any?
 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 9:58 pm
				by phrex
				it's like socialism!
annd you are the capitalist!
			 
			
					
				Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
				Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:31 pm
				by rook
				stappard wrote:
Cool track. One thing I do feel though is that each bar needs to be a little bit more 'defined', ie a more definate 1-beat at the beginning of each bar. A heavy kick or crash or something. At the moment, especially in the section before the vocals come in proper, the bars sort of flow together and lack a danceable beat.
 
That's a good call, appreciate it.
I'll keep that in mind as I get back to it.