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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 2:00 am
by stappard
demure wrote:so this is my second attempt at dubstep so far still unfinished but its a bit of a strange tune
, i have recently been converted from producing dnb to makin dubstep and have been really enjoying just doing what i want as opposed to what i think i should be lol. i signed up here ages ago but wasnt sure whether i wanted to pursue the whole dubstep thing, but im enjoyin it so im gonna stick with it. this is only 4 hours work ish so its not fantastic but i hope i got enough in there for you to have a chuckle at. it is only my second serious attempt at dubstep though so dont expect anythin fantastic. sorry about the long intro but i felt a bit cheeky just postin a track and not sayin anythin
anyways i will be checkin out some of the other bits in here as it really seems a million miles away from other forum comunes. really great site you got here:)
Soundcloud
really cool track man. I was about to tell you it all seemed a bit messy in the top end and then that second drop sorta thing sorted it out perfectly. what are you using for your tracks?
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 3:14 am
by demure
stappard wrote:demure wrote:so this is my second attempt at dubstep so far still unfinished but its a bit of a strange tune
, i have recently been converted from producing dnb to makin dubstep and have been really enjoying just doing what i want as opposed to what i think i should be lol. i signed up here ages ago but wasnt sure whether i wanted to pursue the whole dubstep thing, but im enjoyin it so im gonna stick with it. this is only 4 hours work ish so its not fantastic but i hope i got enough in there for you to have a chuckle at. it is only my second serious attempt at dubstep though so dont expect anythin fantastic. sorry about the long intro but i felt a bit cheeky just postin a track and not sayin anythin
anyways i will be checkin out some of the other bits in here as it really seems a million miles away from other forum comunes. really great site you got here:)
Soundcloud
really cool track man. I was about to tell you it all seemed a bit messy in the top end and then that second drop sorta thing sorted it out perfectly. what are you using for your tracks?
alright man cheers for the feedback, really appreciated. i currently use reason 4 mate. all the sound design and bass done in thor the rest in redrum. anything you want me to check in return, yeah its allright at the min but will bounce the audio down to logic now i got it where it is and work on it from there. certain parts are mixed rather bad
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 3:15 am
by demure
junior spesh wrote:demure wrote:so this is my second attempt at dubstep so far still unfinished but its a bit of a strange tune
, i have recently been converted from producing dnb to makin dubstep and have been really enjoying just doing what i want as opposed to what i think i should be lol. i signed up here ages ago but wasnt sure whether i wanted to pursue the whole dubstep thing, but im enjoyin it so im gonna stick with it. this is only 4 hours work ish so its not fantastic but i hope i got enough in there for you to have a chuckle at. it is only my second serious attempt at dubstep though so dont expect anythin fantastic. sorry about the long intro but i felt a bit cheeky just postin a track and not sayin anythin
anyways i will be checkin out some of the other bits in here as it really seems a million miles away from other forum comunes. really great site you got here:)
Soundcloud
OI!! Ur 2nd serious attempt at dubstep? soundin noice,
I like the ambient build up and da bassline is doin alot tbh
thanks man got anythin of yours to check out
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 5:08 am
by selophaine
the-devo wrote:junior spesh wrote:the-devo wrote:Hi guys, I'm working on a ssllooww and sad song at the moment, and I am so effing tired, I'm afraid I'm going to ruin the song.. but I don't want to go to sleep yet.
It is a work-in-progress, and this is really just the beginning of the song.. this isn't even a sketch.. it's just the first couple of lines on the paper.
You can be as harsh as you wish, just don't flame..
Thank you!
Soundcloud
Nice, dark atmosphere to dis tune bruv, gna sound greazy wen its finished...
Thank you!
I'm happy to hear positive feedback on it. I changed the bass to a more filthy/growling sound.
Here:
Soundcloud
I think I'll have to take back on the strength though.. Like last & least said,
a bit too in your face.
Thanks again!
Liking this one a lot, even with the huge bass. It only sounds too intense when it first comes in, but I like it. Aggressive ambiance is good.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 5:25 am
by selophaine
the-devo wrote:Hi guys, I'm working on a ssllooww and sad song at the moment, and I am so effing tired, I'm afraid I'm going to ruin the song.. but I don't want to go to sleep yet.
It is a work-in-progress, and this is really just the beginning of the song.. this isn't even a sketch.. it's just the first couple of lines on the paper.
You can be as harsh as you wish, just don't flame..
Thank you!
Soundcloud
Really liking this one as well! Sounds like what might be blasting from a loud speaker a top a mosque almost, if the mosque was run by cyborgs. Hope to hear the finished version some time, keep it up.
*Edit* Awh shit, didnt realize it was the same song from the last comment I posted, sorry for the double post!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 1:14 pm
by junior spesh
demure wrote:junior spesh wrote:demure wrote:so this is my second attempt at dubstep so far still unfinished but its a bit of a strange tune
, i have recently been converted from producing dnb to makin dubstep and have been really enjoying just doing what i want as opposed to what i think i should be lol. i signed up here ages ago but wasnt sure whether i wanted to pursue the whole dubstep thing, but im enjoyin it so im gonna stick with it. this is only 4 hours work ish so its not fantastic but i hope i got enough in there for you to have a chuckle at. it is only my second serious attempt at dubstep though so dont expect anythin fantastic. sorry about the long intro but i felt a bit cheeky just postin a track and not sayin anythin
anyways i will be checkin out some of the other bits in here as it really seems a million miles away from other forum comunes. really great site you got here:)
Soundcloud
OI!! Ur 2nd serious attempt at dubstep? soundin noice,
I like the ambient build up and da bassline is doin alot tbh
thanks man got anythin of yours to check out
Well, i ent got this particular tune on soundcloud so, check out the tune called
'Unorthodox' on my myspace>>>
www.myspace.com/gullyfloss
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 1:57 pm
by stappard
demure wrote:stappard wrote:demure wrote:so this is my second attempt at dubstep so far still unfinished but its a bit of a strange tune
, i have recently been converted from producing dnb to makin dubstep and have been really enjoying just doing what i want as opposed to what i think i should be lol. i signed up here ages ago but wasnt sure whether i wanted to pursue the whole dubstep thing, but im enjoyin it so im gonna stick with it. this is only 4 hours work ish so its not fantastic but i hope i got enough in there for you to have a chuckle at. it is only my second serious attempt at dubstep though so dont expect anythin fantastic. sorry about the long intro but i felt a bit cheeky just postin a track and not sayin anythin
anyways i will be checkin out some of the other bits in here as it really seems a million miles away from other forum comunes. really great site you got here:)
Soundcloud
really cool track man. I was about to tell you it all seemed a bit messy in the top end and then that second drop sorta thing sorted it out perfectly. what are you using for your tracks?
alright man cheers for the feedback, really appreciated. i currently use reason 4 mate. all the sound design and bass done in thor the rest in redrum. anything you want me to check in return, yeah its allright at the min but will bounce the audio down to logic now i got it where it is and work on it from there. certain parts are mixed rather bad
sick man, take a listen on my
http://www.soundcloud.com/stappard if you dont mind, leave some comments or w/e. cheers.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 2:44 pm
by broken beat syndrome
First tune in this genre, only been producing short while.. thought I would stick me neck out and ask 4 feedback on this, in-progress, as all.. track. Not going to crap on about levels and dynamics tis a working-progress..
http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1957059
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 3:51 pm
by emm
Cheers everyone!
This is a tune I've been working on... its kind of a remix (but not quite) using vocalsamples and melodylines from a friend of mine. The original is a minimal house tune...
I would very much appreciate comments and feedback, especially as this is my first serious attempt at dubstep...
Soundcloud
/Emm
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 5:32 pm
by demure
junior spesh wrote:demure wrote:junior spesh wrote:demure wrote:so this is my second attempt at dubstep so far still unfinished but its a bit of a strange tune
, i have recently been converted from producing dnb to makin dubstep and have been really enjoying just doing what i want as opposed to what i think i should be lol. i signed up here ages ago but wasnt sure whether i wanted to pursue the whole dubstep thing, but im enjoyin it so im gonna stick with it. this is only 4 hours work ish so its not fantastic but i hope i got enough in there for you to have a chuckle at. it is only my second serious attempt at dubstep though so dont expect anythin fantastic. sorry about the long intro but i felt a bit cheeky just postin a track and not sayin anythin
anyways i will be checkin out some of the other bits in here as it really seems a million miles away from other forum comunes. really great site you got here:)
Soundcloud
OI!! Ur 2nd serious attempt at dubstep? soundin noice,
I like the ambient build up and da bassline is doin alot tbh
thanks man got anythin of yours to check out
Well, i ent got this particular tune on soundcloud so, check out the tune called
'Unorthodox' on my myspace>>>
www.myspace.com/gullyfloss
i like it man the bass is nice and edgy and the mix sounds really warm which is great. love the string line in the breakdown too very simple but goes really well, drums sound solid as well man cool tune
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 5:44 pm
by the-devo
selophaine wrote:the-devo wrote:Hi guys, I'm working on a ssllooww and sad song at the moment, and I am so effing tired, I'm afraid I'm going to ruin the song.. but I don't want to go to sleep yet.
It is a work-in-progress, and this is really just the beginning of the song.. this isn't even a sketch.. it's just the first couple of lines on the paper.
You can be as harsh as you wish, just don't flame..
Thank you!
Soundcloud
Really liking this one as well! Sounds like what might be blasting from a loud speaker a top a mosque almost, if the mosque was run by cyborgs. Hope to hear the finished version some time, keep it up.
*Edit* Awh shit, didnt realize it was the same song from the last comment I posted, sorry for the double post!
sorry for the double post! - Yes, they're the same, but with different basses. But now I'm not sure which one you like more.
But thanks for the feedback, I'm glad to hear/read that there actually are people who want to hear it when it's done.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 11:30 pm
by junior spesh
New tune up, only just started it so i would appreciate sum feedback, tbh its an instrumental hence the slightly verse chorus structure... check it out, as always i WILL give feedback (if i havent already given sum) >>>
Soundcloud
AS you can tell its kinda Dubstep & Grime...
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 11:38 pm
by slyman
first time im asking for feedback on a tune. how would u guys define production value. cuz im probably going to b using this for a contest and its based on song writing and production value. i want the production to b as good as i can make it. i havent done a lot of eq or mastering yet and i think im going to make the intro longer and add some little beeps and boops in some spots. wat else do u guy think i should do.
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 11:40 pm
by demure
demure wrote:junior spesh wrote:demure wrote:junior spesh wrote:demure wrote:so this is my second attempt at dubstep so far still unfinished but its a bit of a strange tune
, i have recently been converted from producing dnb to makin dubstep and have been really enjoying just doing what i want as opposed to what i think i should be lol. i signed up here ages ago but wasnt sure whether i wanted to pursue the whole dubstep thing, but im enjoyin it so im gonna stick with it. this is only 4 hours work ish so its not fantastic but i hope i got enough in there for you to have a chuckle at. it is only my second serious attempt at dubstep though so dont expect anythin fantastic. sorry about the long intro but i felt a bit cheeky just postin a track and not sayin anythin
anyways i will be checkin out some of the other bits in here as it really seems a million miles away from other forum comunes. really great site you got here:)
Soundcloud
OI!! Ur 2nd serious attempt at dubstep? soundin noice,
I like the ambient build up and da bassline is doin alot tbh
thanks man got anythin of yours to check out
Well, i ent got this particular tune on soundcloud so, check out the tune called
'Unorthodox' on my myspace>>>
www.myspace.com/gullyfloss
i like it man the bass is nice and edgy and the mix sounds really warm which is great. love the string line in the breakdown too very simple but goes really well, drums sound solid as well man cool tune
i did quite a lot to it since that will post a link when its all 100% done. but sounding a lot better now anyway. thanks for checkin it out man
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:26 am
by Ronaldo Vetro
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:30 am
by Ronaldo Vetro
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 5:04 am
by djaccel
Not bad, I like the drums and the samples and the arrangement a lot, the bass patches aren't bad either, just needs a bit more punch or edge. Add some compression and maybe some phase distortion (applied sparingly) or some bitcrushing?
All in all I like it though! Keep it up!
Here's my latest part. Any feedback much appreciated!
Soundcloud
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 7:43 am
by GELG
djaccel wrote:
Here's my latest part. Any feedback much appreciated!
Soundcloud
Sounds reel Fat, lovin the drop - so thanks for serious bob it get my head doin.
The Plateau could use some work though, The vocal and riders are alright, but in the beginning they really aint doin enough for me to keep the song goin till the stutterd womps come in.
Dont get me wrong, it works well and sounds pretty good, but keep building - id love to hear a finished product.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:59 pm
by junior spesh
Not bad, I like the drums and the samples and the arrangement a lot, the bass patches aren't bad either, just needs a bit more punch or edge. Add some compression and maybe some phase distortion (applied sparingly) or some bitcrushing?
All in all I like it though! Keep it up!
Here's my latest part. Any feedback much appreciated!
Soundcloud
....
OI! im liking the dirty bass sound, dats just how i like my dubstep bruv...
keep it up init!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 4:07 pm
by junior spesh