FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

[jaydot]

@Reign, kaiori breathe and LordBid- Check your soundclouds



Maybe need to reexamine the mixdown of this but I'm happy with the composition. Let me know what you think.

[Pete Miles]

@jaydot who let the frogs out - Nicely put together track, and the build up is sweet mate. If i'm honest and this is only my opinion, the main sound is a bit much for me. I like mad noises but I turned up the speakers for your tune and it was just a bit heavy. Maybe just my taste though, I'm not sure. Maybe whack a few more variations of the noise and other sounds in there... or tone it down a little. Nice drum work and structure.

@Jaydot even though you're gone - Much more my style mate....saying that though, my style is so vast it's untrue, The bass kicks in real nice and deep mate. I like the kick in after the drop and slight wobble to the bass too. Nice sound. Nice clean perc and little riff goin on is complimentary to the rest of the track. Works well. Good track

I'd love feedback on this is anyone has time. It's a well known trance track, so I tried to keep the impact...resampled main riff of course and tried to add a bit of hard dub bass, but not too harsh noises.

See what ya reckon!

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[Move-ment]

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Housey track with a deep tropical vibe. Finished for now..

Dont have speakers now but any feedback will be returned later!

[DannyDubstep]

@Move-ment: I'm not a fan of house usualy [unless it's dirty. ] but this track is lush... so smooth! Try adding some incidentals with long delays or reverbs. :>
[Now do some feedback, kiddo.]
@Pete Miles: Bring that main bass up a bit! It gets lost in all the trancy sounds. :/ But all in all, lovely sounding track.

@Jaydot: Take the bass down a bit. Make sure it matches with the bass that filters in between, otherwise it's too overpowering. I'm afraid it's all a bit too much for me! :l

Here's mine. Datsikky, Excisionny... but far from perfect. :l
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I finished two tracks this month!

[jaydot]

@Move-ment: I'm not a fan of house usualy [unless it's dirty. ] but this track is lush... so smooth! Try adding some incidentals with long delays or reverbs. :>
[Now do some feedback, kiddo.]
@Pete Miles: Bring that main bass up a bit! It gets lost in all the trancy sounds. :/ But all in all, lovely sounding track.

@Jaydot: Take the bass down a bit. Make sure it matches with the bass that filters in between, otherwise it's too overpowering. I'm afraid it's all a bit too much for me! :l

Here's mine. Datsikky, Excisionny... but far from perfect. :l
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I finished two tracks this month!

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@Pete Miles: Check ur soundcloud.

As far as the quoted track goes, I think it was trying to be too Datsik/Excisiony, you got the sound right, but I think next time maybe stamp your own mark? Nice track though, intro is a bit long though before the drop.

[Grace]

Hey everyone, hope everyone is well.
Here's a new one from me. I have left feedback on some of your soundclouds, if you could do the same for me that would be great

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[Kes-Es]

I wasn't going to post this at first, but here:

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[deranger]

@Kes-Es Cool pad in the intro. Don't like the vocal. The beat is pretty good. Sub bass drop is anti-climatic. When the wobble comes in it gets better. Wobble is too loud. Overall decent track. I think if you drop the wobble where you dropped just the sub it would be better.

[deranger]

@ Grace
Interesting harmonies in the intro. The tune is ok, it just doesn't grab me. From a mixing standpoint it's decent. The sample is cool. After the break I was expecting something more to happen.

[deranger]

@ danny dubstep - warrior

Intro sounds overblown. The track sounds like it could use some head room. The drum fills are pretty cool. Couldn't hear the sub some of the time. Not really my cup of tea. There seems to be to much high end, not enough low end.

[Kes-Es]

@Kes-Es Cool pad in the intro. Don't like the vocal. The beat is pretty good. Sub bass drop is anti-climatic. When the wobble comes in it gets better. Wobble is too loud. Overall decent track. I think if you drop the wobble where you dropped just the sub it would be better.

Alot of those composition issues come from it being a DnB tune originally if I was being totally honest.
Was also my first attempt at anything really clubby as up untill then I had all ambient stuff. I like it either way, but I'll take all this into account on later projects, Appreciating the feedback man, ups.

[deranger]

If I could get some feedback on the track in my sig that would be cool.

Sort of a minimal dub track.

[Kes-Es]

If I could get some feedback on the track in my sig that would be cool.

Sort of a minimal dub track.

I do enjoy it, Tbth my first impression Was that you were slightly newer to production, and then it started developing, good stuff man, no negs on that one, Besides that it's not my style.

[larzol]

@ joydot: that is pure FILTH just how i like it, hurt my ears though so maybe tone the high down a little

[TheBreadMan]

@jaydot:not really my style, but you know what im always digging then tunes for some reason. Although some of the noises are pretty ear piercing, but then again so are mine sometimes.

@Kaiori Breathe:Never cease to amaze me with something fresh and relaxing. Good Smoking music.

@lordbid:I would def fatten up the sound a little bit, maybe beef up the bottom end. but other than that pretty good.

@Reignz:Dude, Killed that shit bro...Good job mate.

@Danny dubstep: I like the second one better of the two. The first one is too much just like excision or datsik. heard it before, ya know...BUT...was VERy well done though. Great job.

Check out some of my latest creations:

Here's My latest:
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[sniperDUBB]

hey guys ive updated my latest track with a few changes let me know what you think and ill return any feedback given

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[soosh21]

@breadman--- liking your bass, low end is dope...quite a dark track, not usually my kind of thing but this is dope. only thing i would say is bring more percussion into your drums, add a bit more swing maybe.

@jaydot- not my kind of dubstep...but this is pretty sick, well produced....sounds good on my monitors.

@movement- fairly dope....housey vibe, nice sub...drums chugg nicely, just need to mix it up a wee bit more.

@deranger- yeah man, liking the minimal vibe....i have a nice genelec sub here.....just needs a bit of progression, maybe lead up to more of a crescendo but still in a chilled style....


righty ho, heres mine....more of a hiphop electronic vibe...by the end it hits some post step vibe...a bit anyways! cheers.

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[therook]

@jaydot - my god thats a track. The buildup was very intense! Very nice. and the yoy's sound awesome!

@pete miles - Dub Trance! That's very sick bro! It sounds very nice and the bassline is pretty phat. awesome job

@move-ment - Tight, deep drums mate that sound really nice. I'm diggin the chill groove

@Danny-Dubstep- awesome use of the robo sounds and swords n shiiit. Sounds very nice.. almost better than datsik lol the bass is also very well made The second tune sounded a little weak.. wheres da bass? I like it though sounds nice,

@Grace - nice, mysterious vibes. I actually like this a lot very chillaxing. Any chance for a 320?

@Kes-Es- Diggin the ambient sounds and vocals are nice! Very nice drums and bass. 320 as well?

@Deranger - Ahh a nice smokin song! deep bass with a psy-feel to it. Very nice and simple dude.

@TheBreadMan - Sounds like that oldschool dubstep. Very nice. The vox sounds a bit loud though and maybe a bit too clean. But a nice track. The Whaaaat?! cracks me up lol

Here's mine newest. Lemme know what you think
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[just-the-tip]

Alright, sorry for puttin my first post in here but I got some feedback

@soosh - listened to your track while rolling/smoking. excellent combo, like how it subtly shifts your head around, almost subconsciously.

@breadman - on "Oh No" like some of the sample placement, some of it felt kind of awkward, but love the bassline, super ethereal with the haunting synths behind it... I agree with soosh on the needs more percussion noises, maybe some doubletime to switch it up? Like where it's going though

@DannyDubstep - super deep and machine-y, love that sound but you need to make it your own, warp that sht maaaan. Love what you did with the pan in the intro though. There's some sweet noises goin on in there but you need to get more creative.


Please, tear dis apart, I'm not too stoked on it but I'm learning
furby
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or this, much slower more ethereal
Be Quiet and Drive (Deftones Remix)
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[JayZest]

soosh21 - kinda feeling that hip hop vibe, sends me to sleep! nice man

Kes-ese - like the first drop, 2nd drop wasnt really my thing

Grace - i like your track, really nice. think it could do with being fatter, more sub and more i dunno colour to the synths? good work anyway!

Move-ment - sick deep tropical vibe, haha i really loved it

finished this one last night

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