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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
haha, thanks for the feedback. it is a pretty noisey track for sure. the track i did before this was a clean minimal techno type track, so maybe I went a little overboard with the backlash. there is probably a happy middle ground somewhere in between...but the group loves it as is, so it will probably stay that way for now.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
working on it 'mfeye'.
listen to it on a blazin system and give again feedback
listen to it on a blazin system and give again feedback

forthcoming 12", spring/summer 2015:Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
goldplate / war continues
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
hummm...
well, first the positive thing: mixup isn't bad, snare is great!
but... IMHO it's missing power, creativity,pressure....and there are no drops, not a peak. Though you might have been trying to do so at minute 2.25 (Dunno how the others judge it, but i think that approx. 50sek of athmospheric layer is too much (also; quite boring because it never really changes).
I guess that athmospheric thingy in the background is some preset out of an plugin? if so: try generating your own thing. it's unique more interesting and more dynamic. you can really make it fit into your track.
can't really say much 'bout your subbass. need to listen to it in the studio. will do so if you wish.
(though, as i said few pages before: i'm not the expert in here, there are other producers who got way more expirience)
btw.: not wanting to sound harsh with my opinion!! I also get usually quite bad feedback on my tracks. but they are getting better and better and I think that i reached now a ''higher level'' of producing. so keep on doing your thing!
well, first the positive thing: mixup isn't bad, snare is great!
but... IMHO it's missing power, creativity,pressure....and there are no drops, not a peak. Though you might have been trying to do so at minute 2.25 (Dunno how the others judge it, but i think that approx. 50sek of athmospheric layer is too much (also; quite boring because it never really changes).
I guess that athmospheric thingy in the background is some preset out of an plugin? if so: try generating your own thing. it's unique more interesting and more dynamic. you can really make it fit into your track.
can't really say much 'bout your subbass. need to listen to it in the studio. will do so if you wish.
(though, as i said few pages before: i'm not the expert in here, there are other producers who got way more expirience)
btw.: not wanting to sound harsh with my opinion!! I also get usually quite bad feedback on my tracks. but they are getting better and better and I think that i reached now a ''higher level'' of producing. so keep on doing your thing!
forthcoming 12", spring/summer 2015:Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
goldplate / war continues
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
cheers i really havent been producing long,maybe a couple of months,so its really the best ive cum up with havin no previous experience on production really,tho i do dj,thanks for that though.thought there was a nice bit of subbass after the second breakdown but maybe not enough.vulvavibration wrote:hummm...
well, first the positive thing: mixup isn't bad, snare is great!
but... IMHO it's missing power, creativity,pressure....and there are no drops, not a peak. Though you might have been trying to do so at minute 2.25 (Dunno how the others judge it, but i think that approx. 50sek of athmospheric layer is too much (also; quite boring because it never really changes).
I guess that athmospheric thingy in the background is some preset out of an plugin? if so: try generating your own thing. it's unique more interesting and more dynamic. you can really make it fit into your track.
can't really say much 'bout your subbass. need to listen to it in the studio. will do so if you wish.
(though, as i said few pages before: i'm not the expert in here, there are other producers who got way more expirience)
btw.: not wanting to sound harsh with my opinion!! I also get usually quite bad feedback on my tracks. but they are getting better and better and I think that i reached now a ''higher level'' of producing. so keep on doing your thing!
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
i'll have a second listen... 

forthcoming 12", spring/summer 2015:Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
goldplate / war continues
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
http://soundcloud.com/sun-ck
http://www.myspace.com/mitrah
Earth Oil Spirit
Absolute space around us.
http://www.myspace.com/mitrah
Earth Oil Spirit
Absolute space around us.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
ive been working on this one a while just wanted to know what you lot thought of it .I would only describe it as a dub dark dirty funky upbeat dancefloor fast moving roller grinding down to the floor with heavy amounts of tech frequencys . Bless and all feedback will be appreciated Twomanysteps
http://soundcloud.com/womprecordings/mo ... step-remix
available For download
http://soundcloud.com/womprecordings/mo ... step-remix
available For download
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
minute 1 to 1.30 is a bit saucy. think that synthbass is interferring with a other sub? or the kick?
maybe it's just to loud.. turn it a bit down...
2.12 could have a stronger drop. maybe try doing a different wobble. that one sounds a bit thin... or: if its midi: copy the melody of that wobble and add a second layer to it. some sort of dark sound would fit maybe..
...or maybe not... i'm not a pro.
still not bad effort!
maybe it's just to loud.. turn it a bit down...
2.12 could have a stronger drop. maybe try doing a different wobble. that one sounds a bit thin... or: if its midi: copy the melody of that wobble and add a second layer to it. some sort of dark sound would fit maybe..
...or maybe not... i'm not a pro.

still not bad effort!
forthcoming 12", spring/summer 2015:Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
goldplate / war continues
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
http://45hertzofbass.com- Guest mixes and interviews with the likes of Danny Scrilla/Baitface/Mishva and more.
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Quality sounds, love it
the sun-ck-no-name track is such a nice tune, keep em coming matey!
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
new track (Mon-Dazed) am also thinking sending this as a demo...plz let me know what you think of it...
thanks
new track (Mon-Dazed) am also thinking sending this as a demo...plz let me know what you think of it...
thanks
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
this is my first finished tune so please tell me what you think and any suggestions on how i could achieve a better sound
http://www.zshare.net/download/67003200dbfbc353/
http://www.zshare.net/download/67003200dbfbc353/
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Heres a dub and jungle inspired track! Been producing jungle and jungle techno for the last 2-3 years and just started producing dubstep! tell me what you think, constructive criticism is always welcomed 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JekpqEYDos0
Heres another track ive just finished...it samples 'NO NO NO' by Manijama! pretty slow and chilled...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lp_lc6AGZF8
If anyone wants a 320 of these to play out then just let me know!
EZ!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JekpqEYDos0
Heres another track ive just finished...it samples 'NO NO NO' by Manijama! pretty slow and chilled...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lp_lc6AGZF8
If anyone wants a 320 of these to play out then just let me know!
EZ!!
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
First, sorry for putting this in the wrong place, id appreciate some feedback on my tracks, bad, good, all of it. Thanks.
http://www.myspace.com/beastbreaksitdown
New ones:
He's Just Too Fast (RoadrunnaDub)
Oh So Low
&
Untitled (Another Dub)
Roadrunna is the only one I really got to finish close to fully. OSL is really broken, trainwreck kinda feeling. and untitled (anotha1) i never got to finish, my sequencer crashed. Anyway, tell me what you think.
Thx, this forum has helped me a lot.
beast.
http://www.myspace.com/beastbreaksitdown
New ones:
He's Just Too Fast (RoadrunnaDub)
Oh So Low
&
Untitled (Another Dub)
Roadrunna is the only one I really got to finish close to fully. OSL is really broken, trainwreck kinda feeling. and untitled (anotha1) i never got to finish, my sequencer crashed. Anyway, tell me what you think.
Thx, this forum has helped me a lot.
beast.
Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
get soundcloud, without, i think you have no chance to get a feedback
i have to admitt.. i'm too lazy to check it on myspace 


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