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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by knobgoblin » Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:55 am

haha, thanks for the feedback. it is a pretty noisey track for sure. the track i did before this was a clean minimal techno type track, so maybe I went a little overboard with the backlash. there is probably a happy middle ground somewhere in between...but the group loves it as is, so it will probably stay that way for now.

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Post by wizual » Tue Oct 13, 2009 6:11 am

Hi, this is my new tune:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u7cqjmu4Pmg

Feedback pls :)

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Post by phrex » Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:33 am

working on it 'mfeye'.

listen to it on a blazin system and give again feedback :D
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by redjuan » Wed Oct 14, 2009 9:54 am

Soundcloud

please have a listen and give me as much feedback as possible,cheeers

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Post by phrex » Wed Oct 14, 2009 10:51 am

hummm...
well, first the positive thing: mixup isn't bad, snare is great!
but... IMHO it's missing power, creativity,pressure....and there are no drops, not a peak. Though you might have been trying to do so at minute 2.25 (Dunno how the others judge it, but i think that approx. 50sek of athmospheric layer is too much (also; quite boring because it never really changes).

I guess that athmospheric thingy in the background is some preset out of an plugin? if so: try generating your own thing. it's unique more interesting and more dynamic. you can really make it fit into your track.

can't really say much 'bout your subbass. need to listen to it in the studio. will do so if you wish.

(though, as i said few pages before: i'm not the expert in here, there are other producers who got way more expirience)

btw.: not wanting to sound harsh with my opinion!! I also get usually quite bad feedback on my tracks. but they are getting better and better and I think that i reached now a ''higher level'' of producing. so keep on doing your thing!
Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
forthcoming 12", spring/summer 2015:
goldplate / war continues

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by redjuan » Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:21 pm

vulvavibration wrote:hummm...
well, first the positive thing: mixup isn't bad, snare is great!
but... IMHO it's missing power, creativity,pressure....and there are no drops, not a peak. Though you might have been trying to do so at minute 2.25 (Dunno how the others judge it, but i think that approx. 50sek of athmospheric layer is too much (also; quite boring because it never really changes).

I guess that athmospheric thingy in the background is some preset out of an plugin? if so: try generating your own thing. it's unique more interesting and more dynamic. you can really make it fit into your track.

can't really say much 'bout your subbass. need to listen to it in the studio. will do so if you wish.

(though, as i said few pages before: i'm not the expert in here, there are other producers who got way more expirience)

btw.: not wanting to sound harsh with my opinion!! I also get usually quite bad feedback on my tracks. but they are getting better and better and I think that i reached now a ''higher level'' of producing. so keep on doing your thing!
cheers i really havent been producing long,maybe a couple of months,so its really the best ive cum up with havin no previous experience on production really,tho i do dj,thanks for that though.thought there was a nice bit of subbass after the second breakdown but maybe not enough.

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Post by phrex » Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:41 pm

i'll have a second listen... ;)
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Post by redjuan » Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:24 pm

cheers


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Post by sun_ck » Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:33 pm

http://soundcloud.com/sun-ck
http://www.myspace.com/mitrah
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Post by morpheous » Wed Oct 14, 2009 10:58 pm

ive been working on this one a while just wanted to know what you lot thought of it .I would only describe it as a dub dark dirty funky upbeat dancefloor fast moving roller grinding down to the floor with heavy amounts of tech frequencys . Bless and all feedback will be appreciated Twomanysteps

http://soundcloud.com/womprecordings/mo ... step-remix

available For download
http://myspace.com/morfeusuk



"dubstep keeps me awake at night"

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Post by phrex » Thu Oct 15, 2009 12:13 am

minute 1 to 1.30 is a bit saucy. think that synthbass is interferring with a other sub? or the kick?
maybe it's just to loud.. turn it a bit down...

2.12 could have a stronger drop. maybe try doing a different wobble. that one sounds a bit thin... or: if its midi: copy the melody of that wobble and add a second layer to it. some sort of dark sound would fit maybe..

...or maybe not... i'm not a pro. ;)

still not bad effort!
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by WhosZena » Thu Oct 15, 2009 3:00 am

constructive criticism welcomed

http://soundcloud.com/whoszena/in-trouble

thanks
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Post by arktrix45hz » Thu Oct 15, 2009 1:34 pm

http://45hertzofbass.com- Guest mixes and interviews with the likes of Danny Scrilla/Baitface/Mishva and more.

http://facebook.com/45hz
http://soundcloud.com/arktrix
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Post by quit » Thu Oct 15, 2009 2:09 pm

Dexcell wrote:Soundcloud

Soundcloud

Thanks
Quality sounds, love it
sun_ck wrote:Soundcloud
Soundcloud

feedback
the sun-ck-no-name track is such a nice tune, keep em coming matey!

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Post by thierry_le_dj » Thu Oct 15, 2009 7:44 pm

http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
new track (Mon-Dazed) am also thinking sending this as a demo...plz let me know what you think of it...
thanks

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by fassyman » Thu Oct 15, 2009 9:37 pm

this is my first finished tune so please tell me what you think and any suggestions on how i could achieve a better sound

http://www.zshare.net/download/67003200dbfbc353/

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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Killawatt » Thu Oct 15, 2009 10:42 pm

Heres a dub and jungle inspired track! Been producing jungle and jungle techno for the last 2-3 years and just started producing dubstep! tell me what you think, constructive criticism is always welcomed ;)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JekpqEYDos0

Heres another track ive just finished...it samples 'NO NO NO' by Manijama! pretty slow and chilled...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lp_lc6AGZF8

If anyone wants a 320 of these to play out then just let me know!

EZ!!
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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by beastbreaksitdown » Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:08 pm

First, sorry for putting this in the wrong place, id appreciate some feedback on my tracks, bad, good, all of it. Thanks.

http://www.myspace.com/beastbreaksitdown

New ones:

He's Just Too Fast (RoadrunnaDub)
Oh So Low
&
Untitled (Another Dub)

Roadrunna is the only one I really got to finish close to fully. OSL is really broken, trainwreck kinda feeling. and untitled (anotha1) i never got to finish, my sequencer crashed. Anyway, tell me what you think.

Thx, this forum has helped me a lot.
beast.

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Post by phrex » Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:53 pm

get soundcloud, without, i think you have no chance to get a feedback ;) i have to admitt.. i'm too lazy to check it on myspace :t:

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