Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:34 pm
sounds alright, could use some bass!!
worldwide dubstep community
https://www.dubstepforum.com/forum/
sounds alright, could use some bass!!
drums are pretty decenttripwire22 wrote:workin on new things soundcloud link in my sig ill offer feedback to anyone who says something
like this!ninteh wrote:Ez fellas, new to the game.. feedback on this work in progress please :]
http://soundcloud.com/ninteh/tooonn-9
Soundcloud
cheers
like the woooOoOOO-waAAaaAh sound in the intro100man wrote:i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
Soundcloud
nice onestappard wrote:I'm listening through studio headphones, no monitors here either, and its sounding pretty banging, everything pulses along really well. Awesome track100man wrote:cool, yeah that snare needs a bit of eq. but aye cheers, the bass sounds are bits of gameboy sounds and samples from mario that i just fucked about with, and whacked a fat sub on, how's the sub sounding to you? i've not got proper monitors or anythingstappard wrote:100man wrote:
i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
Soundcloud
Loving the sounds and the rhythm! Kick and bass sounds are spot on, my personal preference would be for a bit more crack in the snare to really get it bouncing but its sweet as it is. Cool sound design - love the little sub break bit at 1:45.
i reckon layering another snare would help 10000x more than any eqing could100man wrote: cool, yeah that snare needs a bit of eq.
aye yeah i dunno why i said eq, cos the snare right now is on a track with some other drums so it wouldn't work eqing it anyway, but cheers tho, i'll repost finished product soonamisane wrote:i reckon layering another snare would help 10000x more than any eqing could100man wrote: cool, yeah that snare needs a bit of eq.
Love that bit of pace after the drop, sounds good mate.aspect-dubz wrote:Soundcloud
this ones quite chilled but has a nice bass sound i've been working on with the combi in reason 4, also does anyone know any vocal samples or samples in general that would go well with this track, thanks
I'm gonna layer up the kick and snare drum some more, add in a better bassline, also need a rise to introduce the new set of drums and bassline. Should add in some sub bass as well.amisane wrote:sounds alright, could use some bass!!
j-one wrote:Love that bit of pace after the drop, sounds good mate.aspect-dubz wrote:Soundcloud
this ones quite chilled but has a nice bass sound i've been working on with the combi in reason 4, also does anyone know any vocal samples or samples in general that would go well with this track, thanks
I usually get my vocal samples from anywhere and anywhere, they don't even have to be a whole word, I like chopping 'em up loads and just seeing what different sounds come out of the sample.
Hard to comment too much on mixing etc as youtube compression can be a bitch but sounds to me like you need to work on the levels of your drums and wobble a bit better. Check out the gain structure sticky in this forum. Wobble sounds good though!dash b2009 wrote: check this 1 out
I downloaded some old female jazz vocal compilation recently. About 20 tracks of jazz tunes with the emphasis on the vocals, been getting loads of nice samples out of there (used it for this tune for instance http://soundcloud.com/j-one/grey-sky). Used to take clips out of loads of Duffy tunes too, as she has such a gorgeous voice, even the smallest clips taken with enough processing would sound sick.aspect-dubz wrote:j-one wrote:Love that bit of pace after the drop, sounds good mate.aspect-dubz wrote:Soundcloud
this ones quite chilled but has a nice bass sound i've been working on with the combi in reason 4, also does anyone know any vocal samples or samples in general that would go well with this track, thanks
I usually get my vocal samples from anywhere and anywhere, they don't even have to be a whole word, I like chopping 'em up loads and just seeing what different sounds come out of the sample.
thanks mate, im gonna have a look round see if i've got anything good to sample up on dvd or something
nice one man, the vocals fit perfectly in that tune to give it a nice mellow vibe, im not sure if a female voice would really suit my tune though, atleast a deep low pitch woman if thatj-one wrote:I downloaded some old female jazz vocal compilation recently. About 20 tracks of jazz tunes with the emphasis on the vocals, been getting loads of nice samples out of there (used it for this tune for instance http://soundcloud.com/j-one/grey-sky). Used to take clips out of loads of Duffy tunes too, as she has such a gorgeous voice, even the smallest clips taken with enough processing would sound sick.aspect-dubz wrote:j-one wrote:Love that bit of pace after the drop, sounds good mate.aspect-dubz wrote:Soundcloud
this ones quite chilled but has a nice bass sound i've been working on with the combi in reason 4, also does anyone know any vocal samples or samples in general that would go well with this track, thanks
I usually get my vocal samples from anywhere and anywhere, they don't even have to be a whole word, I like chopping 'em up loads and just seeing what different sounds come out of the sample.
thanks mate, im gonna have a look round see if i've got anything good to sample up on dvd or something
ahh thanks, yeah the snare does need to be crackier like, and aye i'll try and get those hats better aswell, thanks a lot tho man, really helpfulamisane wrote:like the woooOoOOO-waAAaaAh sound in the intro100man wrote:i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
Soundcloud
drop is pretty good... hats shuffling between the kick and snare could be more defined and solid
bleeps and bloops are nice!
feeling this!
maybe mix up the lengths of the sub notes, so there's some longer ones in there to give it a bit more variation
needs a big cracking snare to groove with
maybe more reverb on the bleeps and bloops in places.
i like reverband delay
with a bit more polish though I reckon I could see this one going down well on the dancefloor... big skankin agwaan
^^^ remember this is just my opinon, it's not (necessarily) true (unless you agree)!! ^^^
GOOD to see that someone's really giving it a listen and a real feedback. big up for that one!amisane wrote:sub bass in the intro seems to fluctuate a bit in volume.vulvavibration wrote:got a new track.. still work in progress.. don't judge the changes from one part to the next. no effects, and the arrangement is half baked![]()
i just came back from partying, so i will feedback later some tracks. right now i would talk just crap![]()
my track:
Soundcloud
when the main drums first come in that sounds nice.
vocal sample has a good feel to it but i can't tell what it's saying - maybe this is the idea though?
squelchy 303 style bass/lead thing is ok, but is quite fast for my idea of dubstep. that's not to say it ain't right, but it's just my opinion... actually i think this is my least favourite part of the track.
drums get a bit wonky, maybe that's what you're after but for me it seems hard to groove to... i love grooving
at about 3:00 after the little breakdown when the drums are more pounding it sounds cool.
do you come from a house/acid/bassline background? tune seems to have that kind of vibe.
to be honest, i was getting a little bored towards the end... there's lots of changes, but... i dunno....
i think it's that 303ish lead sound, just doesn't sit right for me, and the tune feels like it's rushing a bit...
^^ this is just my opinion, everyone likes different music, and nothing I have just said is true. it's just feedback - take it with a fistful of salt!