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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 4:58 am
by ♫♪♫
100man wrote:
nice one, glad you're liking my tunes man, i'm gonna try and get a listen on this time heh
Hey, just noticed this was the works-in-progress thread. (thought it was the finished tune thread, which I usually peruse)
If you could lemme know when you have the finished version up I'd be most grateful!
Thanks!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 5:21 am
by jsills
edit:
first time posting to this thread so im going to start hitting folks up with feedback. this joint is called FM Dub. this is one of my legit attempts at making a dubstep tune, (do more hip hop and crunk shit)so i wanted to see if anyone was feeling it. feedback and criticism are def welcome. it needs a shitload more work on the mix so if you have any ideas holla
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 3:43 pm
by busker
Hey, got this little bass and drum pattern here, don't quite know what to do with it.. intro? i got no textures that suit this.. or go straight into it.. would appreciate any advice, its not mixed down atm, and it's been switched up since i saved this but this is the basic idea
Scale It Down_converted.mp3 - 1.25MB
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 4:28 pm
by joonipah
♫♪♫ wrote:100man wrote:
nice one, glad you're liking my tunes man, i'm gonna try and get a listen on this time heh
Hey, just noticed this was the works-in-progress thread. (thought it was the finished tune thread, which I usually peruse)
If you could lemme know when you have the finished version up I'd be most grateful!
Thanks!
nah that is the finished version, i was gonna change it but i like it how it is, just download it off soundcloud cos it's a 320
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 4:34 pm
by ♫♪♫
Got it!

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 5:14 pm
by joonipah
♫♪♫ wrote:Got it!


Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:16 pm
by nuane
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I make this little thing about 2 week and I can't think melody for this

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:17 pm
by aspect-dubz
updated my latest tune that im working on, fucked around with the two intro synth's a bit and added the second drop, feedback appreciated:
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 9:25 pm
by Wrongkey
New tune started. Trying to get to grips with FM8 and noticeably failing, but any feedback would be sweet. Ignore the song title on Zshare

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http://www.zshare.net/audio/68032515f6edea2f/
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 9:39 pm
by tomm
dunno what you'd call this but i think you guys might have a word to say about what's what an' that. all feedback is good feedback, eh?
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/507983/Music ... 009-11.mp3
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 1:01 am
by 2nd chance
I'll post some feedback when I get home from work. In the mean time, I'll throw up an in progress:
http://soundcloud.com/2nd-chance/whoo-hoo Working title, open to suggestion on that too haha.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 1:36 am
by dignan
2nd chance wrote:I'll post some feedback when I get home from work. In the mean time, I'll throw up an in progress:
http://soundcloud.com/2nd-chance/whoo-hoo Working title, open to suggestion on that too haha.
gave your tune a listen man - i felt that it was kind of boring. i'd suggest automating the LFO rate of the bass, adding some more hi hats/rides to move the song along more, and make your kick hit a little harder. the snare sounded nice - i'd like to hear that same fatness on the kick.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 1:45 am
by jsills
nuane some sparse stabs or flourishes on the higher end would def add some interest to the overall vibe. maybe echoing in and out against the vocals.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:49 am
by 2nd chance
dignan wrote:2nd chance wrote:I'll post some feedback when I get home from work. In the mean time, I'll throw up an in progress:
http://soundcloud.com/2nd-chance/whoo-hoo Working title, open to suggestion on that too haha.
gave your tune a listen man - i felt that it was kind of boring. i'd suggest automating the LFO rate of the bass, adding some more hi hats/rides to move the song along more, and make your kick hit a little harder. the snare sounded nice - i'd like to hear that same fatness on the kick.
Thanks bro, all sound advice. Appreciate it mate.
Now lets see...
Love the feel of this. Very chill, very laid back, not something you see very often, and I like it. You might wanna add some more movement to the track, as a whole. Seems like it needs a more concrete focal point, which could add the movement in itself. Otherwise, ace.
nuane wrote:Soundcloud
I make this little thing about 2 week and I can't think melody for this

To me, this is begging for some offbeat reggae-esque piano stabs. That might fill it out how you like.
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 12:11 pm
by tomm
2nd chance wrote:
Love the feel of this. Very chill, very laid back, not something you see very often, and I like it. You might wanna add some more movement to the track, as a whole. Seems like it needs a more concrete focal point, which could add the movement in itself. Otherwise, ace.
Aye, I was thinking either a couple of well used vocal samples or something like that. Thanks for the feedback anyway mate. Appreciated.

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:06 pm
by cope and paste
last song ended up going nowhere
lemmy know what you think of this so far
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:26 pm
by morigami
nuane wrote:Soundcloud
I make this little thing about 2 week and I can't think melody for this

That's a nice and chilled out tune you got there, kudos. I'm not sure about the crackly atmosphere in the background though, it reminds me of getting dust on a vinyl when mixing. Out of interest, what is the original that the vocals come from? Post up again when you get a melody on there

Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:43 pm
by junior spesh
Being a BIG hip hop fan, i fort id try my hand ar Drake's Forever!!
THIS IS MY PROGRESS ON THE REMIX SO FAR, FEEDBACK NEEDED!
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i have given out bare feedback recently and will continue 2 do so in exchange 4 sum aimed my way guyz!!
Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 7:03 am
by idlemode
chilled sorta dubstep thing i was working on. thoughts please?
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.
Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 7:08 am
by idlemode
@junior spesh
i like the track dude. levels all sound good here.
like the bassline. think it all works well together, lyrics and the track. good work.