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@lostintherush

that song is fucking heavy man! nice one!


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i don't even know what to call this any more
feedback would be cool!

hey guys
im really experimenting at the moment im new to production and sheet but let me know what you think

http://soundcloud.com/irokusuk609/chilax

and i dont know how to put the song itself into comments if anyone could tell me?

lostintherush wrote: And hey i would love some feedback on a single track i'm working on atm.
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Thanks for the feedback mate

Only thing I can say about Chaos is that the really distorted wobble, IMO, needs more body. It's all tone with no substance. If that's what your going for, then awesome! Personally I'd like to hear that same sound maybe with some detuned squares or something basic behind it. Maybe even just a lowpassed sawtooth. Just more substance

2nd chance wrote:

lostintherush wrote: And hey i would love some feedback on a single track i'm working on atm.
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Thanks for the feedback mate

Only thing I can say about Chaos is that the really distorted wobble, IMO, needs more body. It's all tone with no substance. If that's what your going for, then awesome! Personally I'd like to hear that same sound maybe with some detuned squares or something basic behind it. Maybe even just a lowpassed sawtooth. Just more substance

yeah make it more hefty and it would be sweeet

crackf wrote:hey guys
im really experimenting at the moment im new to production and sheet but let me know what you think

http://soundcloud.com/irokusuk609/chilax

and i dont know how to put the song itself into comments if anyone could tell me?

ez, I like the mood of the track. like the chilled out lounge room sort of feel to the track, the drums sound nice to, good role to the edits.

i thought on the whole the track has potential, but i feel a bit more needs to happen to the arrangement. either dtip it right back for a break down type affair, or switch up the chord progression a little, it set a nice mood i just think it needs to tell a bit more of a story.

good work though nice one.

cope and paste wrote:@lostintherush

that song is fucking heavy man! nice one!


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i don't even know what to call this any more
feedback would be cool!

yeah pritty good man. like the gerneral theme and idia of the tune, like the sinister ish vibe to it.

I thought the drums particularly the snare sounds nice. but it did feel that they could be a looser in the programming. mainly when they first come in, just sound a bit too tite to my ears. also the edits were a bit off putting in places. id try and lossen them up a bit a use less.

i think the synths lines are good in them selves but the sounds need bit of work. the phaser washed them out a bit. a bit more pressence and dirt would work wonders i think.

but yeay the tunes deffinatly inthere a bit of more engineering/programming and it could be a corker.

marsonebeatz wrote:updated the new track, any thoughts?

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yeah like the steddy vibe to this. nice sounds your using. personaly wasn't too keen on the heavy side chaining but thats a personal tasste thing really.

the arranment is good, the differeent sections lead into eeach other very smothly and come together niceely as well.

i think it just needs more of a hook attention grabber. may be put some slices of the lead that comes in, in the last half near the begging but just little snips to make pople ears prick up a bit.

but yeah nice.

Ez Peeps,

Apologies for my earlier fopar putting my tune in a new thread.


but anyway, tried my hand at some dubstep. been into dub for ages but just getting into dubstep.

anyhow here is a tune tune ive working on. its not been mixed yet as i want to get the arrement right first. but i think its close.
i'd love to know what you make of it.

any comments/crits will be a big help

http://soundcloud.com/coyote/clockwork-strings-dub

cheers

steve

OK,

so the track didn't work first time i posted it.

Hope this is gonna work now!

This is a track i have been working on the past couple of weeks.

It has a dark vibe to it, pretty heavehhh, funky drums..... Any feedback would be appreicated! Thanksss

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Cheers for looking!

nefarious.beats wrote:OK,

so the track didn't work first time i posted it.

Hope this is gonna work now!

This is a track i have been working on the past couple of weeks.

It has a dark vibe to it, pretty heavehhh, funky drums..... Any feedback would be appreicated! Thanksss

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Cheers for looking!

im liking this man, its a heavy bassline kinda sucks you in

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hey, dont knw whether to carry this on.. not mixed down of corse, i'm crappy at it.. i have a profesh on hand to mix down anything worth carryin on.. advice appreciated fellas.. cheers

crackf wrote:

nefarious.beats wrote:OK,

so the track didn't work first time i posted it.

Hope this is gonna work now!

This is a track i have been working on the past couple of weeks.

It has a dark vibe to it, pretty heavehhh, funky drums..... Any feedback would be appreicated! Thanksss

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Cheers for looking!

im liking this man, its a heavy bassline kinda sucks you in

Jus joined forum and this is my first post and jus wanted to say its a good track ..

coyote wrote:

marsonebeatz wrote:updated the new track, any thoughts?

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yeah like the steddy vibe to this. nice sounds your using. personaly wasn't too keen on the heavy side chaining but thats a personal tasste thing really.

the arranment is good, the differeent sections lead into eeach other very smothly and come together niceely as well.

i think it just needs more of a hook attention grabber. may be put some slices of the lead that comes in, in the last half near the begging but just little snips to make pople ears prick up a bit.

but yeah nice.

very nice track... really like the lead that comes in around 0:55

crackf wrote:

2nd chance wrote:

lostintherush wrote: And hey i would love some feedback on a single track i'm working on atm.
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Thanks for the feedback mate

Only thing I can say about Chaos is that the really distorted wobble, IMO, needs more body. It's all tone with no substance. If that's what your going for, then awesome! Personally I'd like to hear that same sound maybe with some detuned squares or something basic behind it. Maybe even just a lowpassed sawtooth. Just more substance

yeah make it more hefty and it would be sweeet

heavy track..

penndragon wrote:

coyote wrote:

marsonebeatz wrote:updated the new track, any thoughts?

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yeah like the steddy vibe to this. nice sounds your using. personaly wasn't too keen on the heavy side chaining but thats a personal tasste thing really.

the arranment is good, the differeent sections lead into eeach other very smothly and come together niceely as well.

i think it just needs more of a hook attention grabber. may be put some slices of the lead that comes in, in the last half near the begging but just little snips to make pople ears prick up a bit.

but yeah nice.

very nice track... really like the lead that comes in around 0:55

safe! yeah thats my riddim, shit took forever to sound right, thanks for the feedback

Hey, This isn't your normal Dubstep, Only started it today, Its more like a dark classical dubstep track lol. I'm a pianist, so wanted to make a piano track.
Let me know wot u think please, feedback will be much appreciated

Link - http://www.zshare.net/audio/68238419eac2f839/

Thanks!
Richy P

lostintherush wrote:Since i can only upload 5 track each month, i made this sampler and marked the tracks..
Help me, and i'll help you. i swear

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favourite tracks were 2/6/7/10

track 10 was my personal favourite

also was it papoose who was saying "pop bottles" in track 7

RichyP wrote:Hey, This isn't your normal Dubstep, Only started it today, Its more like a dark classical dubstep track lol. I'm a pianist, so wanted to make a piano track.
Let me know wot u think please, feedback will be much appreciated

Link - http://www.zshare.net/audio/68238419eac2f839/

Thanks!
Richy P

heavy track.. intro is very good... did'nt like bit 0:55 to 1:08...but then when the bassline comes in its very good again..

good track.

aspect-dubz wrote:updated my latest tune that im working on, fucked around with the two intro synth's a bit and added the second drop, feedback appreciated:

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like this track..

New tune i've been working on. Only spent 3 hours on it so far. Any sort of feedback would be spot on!
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