Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

[jsaxton]

@collige
i feel that wobble bass is incredibly repetitive
i feel no sub?
and the mix feels quite empty, play around with some mastering fx
its alright compositionaly though

there was alot of feedback for the other tracks so....
Soundcloud
probably on release hence the preview, what would you like to hear/ what are you expecting
comments on composition and mastering appreciated
thanks

[Code Zero]

Seeing as there hasn't been three tracks posted yet, I cant very well give feedback on three tracks. So, here's mine:
Soundcloud

There's a few things I have to clean up, but I think it fits better in this thread than the WIP.

I am fully aware that it partially reuses the melody from Mala - Left Leg Out. Should I call it a remix, or leave as an original composition (seeing as the rest of the track sounds nothing like the original Mala tune)?

Crazy drums you've got going on there!
The main wobble in the song could use a bit more variaton imo
The synth in the intro i like alot but further in the song a higher one comes through that one i find sounding too 'monotone', but hey i wish i could rinse out some drums like that so feel free to ignore me :d

[Code Zero]

@collige
i feel that wobble bass is incredibly repetitive
i feel no sub?
and the mix feels quite empty, play around with some mastering fx
its alright compositionaly though

there was alot of feedback for the other tracks so....
Soundcloud
probably on release hence the preview, what would you like to hear/ what are you expecting
comments on composition and mastering appreciated
thanks

Sound phat!

mastering wise maybe a little more kick, a little less snare for the rest it sounded good on my sennheisers

[Code Zero]

Hi made a chill track for a change.I kept it as minimal as i could to lay the main focus on the vocal. Honestly i was just in the mood for something like this, stumbled upon the vocal and started making beats underneath it . Vocals in the begin don't quite fit, but it didn't really bother me .

Listen & comment plz

btw i like this monthly thing way better!
Soundcloud

dude. read the first post.

Srr was too impatient, forgive me coz i is quite new around here. I listened and reviewed some things here now and i will continue to do so

Peace!

Code Zero

[penndragon]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Edit: Fixed

this is an ok track astral.... but as others have said i feel the beats could be could be a bit more interesting.. not really feeling the kick drum and snare sound but the other sounds all work together well... i think if u could sort out the beats and maybe the arrangment it would be better..

don't mean to be negative but just giving my own opinion...cheers

*edit* ok i'v listened to this track a few more times and its actually pretty good but as i'v said its jus the beats i feel could use better sounds....

[penndragon]

Seeing as there hasn't been three tracks posted yet, I cant very well give feedback on three tracks. So, here's mine:
Soundcloud

There's a few things I have to clean up, but I think it fits better in this thread than the WIP.

I am fully aware that it partially reuses the melody from Mala - Left Leg Out. Should I call it a remix, or leave as an original composition (seeing as the rest of the track sounds nothing like the original Mala tune)?

Crazy drums you've got going on there!
The main wobble in the song could use a bit more variaton imo
The synth in the intro i like alot but further in the song a higher one comes through that one i find sounding too 'monotone', but hey i wish i could rinse out some drums like that so feel free to ignore me :d

I'm 50/50 on this tune but i think the beats could be harder...when the synth and bass comes in its like the beats are overpowered and i can't feel them.....also as said the synth that comes in the intro and through the tune could use a bit more variation..maybe u could put them an octave down for a few bars...

[penndragon]

Hi made a chill track for a change.I kept it as minimal as i could to lay the main focus on the vocal. Honestly i was just in the mood for something like this, stumbled upon the vocal and started making beats underneath it . Vocals in the begin don't quite fit, but it didn't really bother me .

Listen & comment plz

btw i like this monthly thing way better!
Soundcloud

dude. read the first post.

Srr was too impatient, forgive me coz i is quite new around here. I listened and reviewed some things here now and i will continue to do so

Peace!

Code Zero

i quite like this track..the vocal and the beats go together really well....i think Code Zero that maybe u could add some strings or something together with the vocals to kind of fill the track more and make it more melodic...but this is a good track but i feel it just needs something more..

also i think u should take away that intro and have the track start where the vocals come in....

[penndragon]

@collige
i feel that wobble bass is incredibly repetitive
i feel no sub?
and the mix feels quite empty, play around with some mastering fx
its alright compositionaly though

there was alot of feedback for the other tracks so....
Soundcloud
probably on release hence the preview, what would you like to hear/ what are you expecting
comments on composition and mastering appreciated
thanks

Sound phat!

mastering wise maybe a little more kick, a little less snare for the rest it sounded good on my sennheisers

Yeahhhhhh this track is really good...Good work Jsaxton

The composition was good and mastering sounded good to me but im no expert

[wirez]

sorry, double post

Dude, usually when somebody double posts they edit the doubled post to say double post rather than posting a new post... This helps maintain space on the page of the thread

it's my first double post ever on this board - cut me some slack lol

Hahahaha I did, otherwise I would have called you a tnuc or some other offensive name

[penndragon]

Mods is there a way to not have peoples soundcloud tracks in there sig as it make the thread quite confusion...

No offence to those of u with ur tracks in ur sig because i know we all want our tracks listened to...im no different...but it makes it the thread look really cluttered and i jus think it would be better if when u go to this thread any soundcloud u see or utube track u see than u know its a submitted track for the month to be given a opionion on...

[Ongelegen]

Mods is there a way to not have peoples soundcloud tracks in there sig as it make the thread quite confusion...

No offence to those of u with ur tracks in ur sig because i know we all want our tracks listened to...im no different...but it makes it the thread look really cluttered and i jus think it would be better if when u go to this thread any soundcloud u see or utube track u see than u know its a submitted track for the month to be given a opionion on...

I think there is an option to make signatures invisible, it should be somewhere in your user control panel

[wirez]

Mods is there a way to not have peoples soundcloud tracks in there sig as it make the thread quite confusion...

No offence to those of u with ur tracks in ur sig because i know we all want our tracks listened to...im no different...but it makes it the thread look really cluttered and i jus think it would be better if when u go to this thread any soundcloud u see or utube track u see than u know its a submitted track for the month to be given a opionion on...

I like soundcloud signatures and so does everybody else using them, which is a lot of people! Stop being selfish

[Astral]

Mods is there a way to not have peoples soundcloud tracks in there sig as it make the thread quite confusion...

No offence to those of u with ur tracks in ur sig because i know we all want our tracks listened to...im no different...but it makes it the thread look really cluttered and i jus think it would be better if when u go to this thread any soundcloud u see or utube track u see than u know its a submitted track for the month to be given a opionion on...

I like soundcloud signatures and so does everybody else using them, which is a lot of people! Stop being selfish

I think he might mean for the ability to disable soundcloud signatures on certain topics, ie this one.

[dignan]

can I get some feedback on this tune? I've given some out on a couple tunes already in this thread....

Soundcloud

thanks in advance!

[Astral]

Again, cheers for your feedback, I took it onboard and made some edits, we'll get to that in a moment.

Soundcloud

Very nice beat work and the vocals seem to fit nicely (apart from that vocal at the break, Im not a fan), the wobble feels like its lacking depth the automation and the attack of it works really well but I feel the sound could do with a bit of work.

Overall, very nice.

Soundcloud

Nice work, pretty solid tune overall, Im not a big fan of that particular wobble sustaining for so long at points (a personal nitpick), nothing else to say really, the complete product I expect will be well recieved.

http://soundcloud.com/blind-prophet/wondering-why

Again, nice work, quality clean sounding drums, and that wobble fits beautifully, not to in your face fades out nicely when the quicker drums come in. Can't really criticise much at all.

I've ran out of things to feedback, so I'll go ahead and annoy you with v.2 (...>.<)

Soundcloud

Hopefully a more cleaner sounding production, hopefully that second drop dosnt feel so monotonous as I tried to shake things up without losing the original vibe.
Also made it available for download if anyone fancies it.

Cheers again

[penndragon]

Mods is there a way to not have peoples soundcloud tracks in there sig as it make the thread quite confusion...

No offence to those of u with ur tracks in ur sig because i know we all want our tracks listened to...im no different...but it makes it the thread look really cluttered and i jus think it would be better if when u go to this thread any soundcloud u see or utube track u see than u know its a submitted track for the month to be given a opionion on...

I like soundcloud signatures and so does everybody else using them, which is a lot of people! Stop being selfish

I think he might mean for the ability to disable soundcloud signatures on certain topics, ie this one.

well put wirez thats exactly what i meant...i like soundcloud too astral... i didnt explain properly....sorry

[phrex]

Soundcloud
oriental influenced track... deep as the abyss between the arab world and the israeli. what you think of this? feedback is much appreciated

[Code Zero]

can I get some feedback on this tune? I've given some out on a couple tunes already in this thread....

Soundcloud

thanks in advance!

that sounds just beautiful... havent heard it on my big speakers yet so will comment on that later

[penndragon]

can I get some feedback on this tune? I've given some out on a couple tunes already in this thread....

Soundcloud

thanks in advance!

brilliant track dignam...beats and vibe of the track all sound good....an u keep the track interesting through out....

[collective]

can I get some feedback on this tune? I've given some out on a couple tunes already in this thread....

Soundcloud

thanks in advance!

Hey man, good stuff here. I think it sounds a bit underwater because you might have too much going on in the <300hz area. I think isolating the low end with some EQ work would bring out the top end more. Less is more really. Good track thought enjoy it!