FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by rubiconguava » Mon May 03, 2010 11:18 pm

jfloyd wrote:Finally found some time to finish something...
enjoy :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kievccs » Tue May 04, 2010 2:14 am

My latest!
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The sub it's really really subby and most of the people who has listened to this said that they don't really hear the sub at all. But in my headphones sounds big!

@Bugsky, Wicked tunes maaaaate :) you've already spoken about this one, I haven't solved the repetitive issue at the mo :( i'm all out of ideas hahaha

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by jaytonic » Tue May 04, 2010 2:53 am

Hows it goin lads (and lad-dines?) Here is my first ever dubstep attempt :D. A Track called 'technical difficulties', youll understand why...

And add some comments on soundcloud if you have the time, appreciate it guys! Criticisms welcome. Turn it up and enjoy!


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@ Wabble: Yo that track strutta gutta is wild, very squelchy and different! Would like to hear more high end cymbals or hats to pick the pace up at certain parts, and I feel the intro drags on a bit, maybe cut it short a little?

@ Mistayif: The track 'In for remix' is it? Very smooth yo, good creamy bass, although the snare is coming in a little sharp, and maybe you could change its key,add some reverb and turn it down a bit so it integrates better with the rest of the track. Apart from that, defo diggin it.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by wabble » Tue May 04, 2010 4:51 am

Live 30min set
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edit: sorry for repost... all finished tracks of mine for month on page 1 and will continue to add there
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by The Bitcruher » Tue May 04, 2010 7:26 am

Subsonic Mechanic - Cursed Oscillatah:
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My first finished Dubstep track. Please tell me what you think :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by fassyman » Tue May 04, 2010 4:31 pm

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heres my new tune...feedback would be appreciated :)

@jaytonic - like the glitchy percs and it sounds well produced...big wobblers aint my thing though
@the bitcrusher - some filth right there. Should do some re-eqing and get that kick abit more prominent
@kievccs - pretty cool tune man, just too repetitive. the subs to deep to hear on standard speakers, that will be why people cant hear it.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by mistayif » Tue May 04, 2010 4:54 pm

The Bitcruher wrote:Subsonic Mechanic - Cursed Oscillatah:
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My first finished Dubstep track. Please tell me what you think :)
not really my type of dubstep but all the elements work well together and the mixdown is very nice. the only thing i would say is that a lot of the synths that u've used sound like they been high passed a bit too much and lack body.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by mistayif » Tue May 04, 2010 5:01 pm

kievccs wrote:My latest!
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The sub it's really really subby and most of the people who has listened to this said that they don't really hear the sub at all. But in my headphones sounds big!
your definately right at the deep bass. i can just about hear it on my monitors and their reknowned for blowing bass out of proportion. liking the ethnic vibe you've got throughout the track too but can't help thinking variations every 4 or 8 bars would be nice. good track tho 8)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by wobbinhood » Tue May 04, 2010 8:07 pm

I guess im retarded and dont know how to post shit on here from my soundcloud

but here you go

criticize it greatly!
dont be to hard i just started producing music about a month ago


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by ENNO » Tue May 04, 2010 9:01 pm

First full track by myself, constructive criticism needed! cheers guys ;)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Wed May 05, 2010 12:41 am

@jaytonic sounding nice man, i like how it keeps changing up a little as the track progresses, but be careful not to make it too busy sounds a bit too busy around the 3.20 mark, def good for a first attempt tho, keep it up!

@fassyman yea liking the vibes on this,kinda different and that percussion bongo whatever it is, is nice keeps the rhythm going, maybe want to add something to the 2nd drop, but yea sounding gd, although its got the wobble to me its still got quite a laid back vibe overall.

ok heres my track, the final mixdown from the engineer so it should be sounding good! some nice spacey synths in this one with big bass drop! let me know what you think!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by mechs » Wed May 05, 2010 2:49 am

@bitcruher - for a first track thats pretty impressive. The drops pretty mean

@fassyman - sounds nice mate, I get Skream vibes from it

@kotingo - was alright, thought it was a bit predictable, didnt really go anywhere, I expected the drop to change things up a bit but everything stayed very similar. build ups etc were good though

@wobbinhood - didnt like the structure of the beat, hated the synths, "bass" vocal sample forced me to hate it more. sorry. dont know what else I can say

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by mexter dorgan » Wed May 05, 2010 5:03 am

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don't bother criticizing it if it isn't "your kind of dubstep", leave it be for someone who enjoys this kind of stuff.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Doktor » Wed May 05, 2010 11:42 am

@kievccs - Epic track the sub is lovely :P love the second drop at about 3:02

@Bitcruher - very heavy love the samples and the checky change at the end

@fassyman - very chill. love the precussion song sound quite kromestar-ish

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first finished song :) all comments are appreciated thnx

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Post by tmicu » Wed May 05, 2010 12:13 pm

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tell me wat ya think :e:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by ItsK » Wed May 05, 2010 12:41 pm

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and can i have a comment on the one in my sig :wink:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by mechs » Wed May 05, 2010 1:55 pm

@mexter dorgan - all dubstep is my kind of dubstep. however, cant say i dug either of those tracks, didnt like the drop on the first one, intro ws alright though, second one i felt lacked depth.

@doktor dub - I really enjoyed listening to that mate, great track, kept me interested, loved the bassline. I felt the snare didnt fit though, personally, I also think the bass needed a bit more prescence, maybe something to do with the levels or the sub bass. but overall, fantastic track, one of the better ones ive heard lately. and for a first finished tune, excellent.

@ItsK - overall lovely track, personally didnt like the vocal sample at the start (lil alien sounding motherfucker) and I agree with Reigns comment about using another bass, apart from that though tune was solid.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kievccs » Wed May 05, 2010 2:46 pm

@kontigobeats Great track man! Technically speaking it's quite well done excellente sounds bass and samples :D keep it up!
@wobbinghood definetly you have a lot of things to work on. Don't feel shitty about it just keep producing and producing and producing til' your sound come up to the surface. Cheers!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kievccs » Wed May 05, 2010 3:02 pm

And btw, thanks for all feedbacks : ) This is more helpful than posting your thing on the dubs section and being buried before actually some listen to your thing :(

@the bitchusher I can't hear your tune m8 soundcloud says that this page doesn't exist

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