Paradigm "Human Error" (Datsik,Excision, Dubstep)

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Wed Sep 28, 2011 7:26 pm

check it out

SlumCity · Post by **SlumCity** » Thu Sep 29, 2011 11:12 pm

the section from 1.56 to 2.18 should have been the buildup to the drop not the buildup to the drop out i think. the intro you have leading into the first drop is pretty good , but doesnt build enough anticipation. good synth sounds and lots of variation throughout the track , which shows good skill but maybe switches up a little to much could have been better if you had taken a strong section and used it as a main body or idea for the song the arrangement was a bit all over the place... i like the vibe and evilness of the track , but it needs something catchy in there to be remembered...you have strong scratchy synth sounds..

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:01 am

thanks, I agree with you, my songs dont have much structure, I think I offered filthzilla money on this forum to make a song with him but he denied. I wanted to learn structure from him first and formost.

SlumCity · Post by **SlumCity** » Sat Oct 01, 2011 5:30 pm

i wouldnt bother paying someone to track with you just to learn stucture.... just listen to your five favourite dubstep tracks and figure it out......intro , ..buildup....drop, main body , dropout , buildup , 2nd drop , bridge...third drop outro..... easy.... work in 8 and 16 bar phrases...

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Sun Oct 02, 2011 11:18 pm

Thanks slumcity, sometimes the easiest things just go over my head, like basic song structure. This helps alot Im gonna start using that formula. I should have known by now but my ideas are so abstract and all over the place. I just need to get them orginized then Ill have some slammin tracks.

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Mon Oct 03, 2011 12:26 am

Does anyone else have any feedback?

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Mon Oct 03, 2011 5:11 am

up a little

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Mon Oct 03, 2011 5:27 pm

bumpinthedark

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:14 pm

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Tue Oct 04, 2011 1:49 am

jumphigh

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Tue Oct 04, 2011 8:11 pm

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Wed Oct 05, 2011 6:53 am

quickreply

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:01 pm

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paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Thu Oct 06, 2011 9:04 am

wheres bonzee cleaven

Triphosphate · Post by **Triphosphate** » Thu Oct 06, 2011 9:21 am

I absolutely love the wobbles, and the metal like beat down section. I don't think there's too much muddiness in the drop, the only thing I could think would be to lower the reverb on the build up bell synths or turn down their release a little bit? Thats the only thing I could hear that would muddy things. I'll give this a listen tomorrow again with a proper implement (tiny headphones aren't the best for this kid of thing.)

Edit: damn it auto correct.

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Thu Oct 06, 2011 9:53 am

thanks alot, i mean it. every piece of feedback helps everyone. I definitelly went for a metal vibe on on this, its probablly not for everyone.

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Thu Oct 06, 2011 7:02 pm

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Thu Oct 06, 2011 7:42 pm

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