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the section from 1.56 to 2.18 should have been the buildup to the drop not the buildup to the drop out i think. the intro you have leading into the first drop is pretty good , but doesnt build enough anticipation. good synth sounds and lots of variation throughout the track , which shows good skill but maybe switches up a little to much could have been better if you had taken a strong section and used it as a main body or idea for the song the arrangement was a bit all over the place... i like the vibe and evilness of the track , but it needs something catchy in there to be remembered...you have strong scratchy synth sounds..

thanks, I agree with you, my songs dont have much structure, I think I offered filthzilla money on this forum to make a song with him but he denied. I wanted to learn structure from him first and formost.

i wouldnt bother paying someone to track with you just to learn stucture.... just listen to your five favourite dubstep tracks and figure it out......intro , ..buildup....drop, main body , dropout , buildup , 2nd drop , bridge...third drop outro..... easy.... work in 8 and 16 bar phrases...

Thanks slumcity, sometimes the easiest things just go over my head, like basic song structure. This helps alot Im gonna start using that formula. I should have known by now but my ideas are so abstract and all over the place. I just need to get them orginized then Ill have some slammin tracks.

Does anyone else have any feedback?

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I absolutely love the wobbles, and the metal like beat down section. I don't think there's too much muddiness in the drop, the only thing I could think would be to lower the reverb on the build up bell synths or turn down their release a little bit? Thats the only thing I could hear that would muddy things. I'll give this a listen tomorrow again with a proper implement (tiny headphones aren't the best for this kid of thing.)

Edit: damn it auto correct.

thanks alot, i mean it. every piece of feedback helps everyone. I definitelly went for a metal vibe on on this, its probablly not for everyone.

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